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by Itriedisuck
Wed Jan 16, 2013 6:46 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

Well for now, I can say I intend to give everyone a role the will affect the story in a major way. With the exception of Kaito, I am basing all of these characters off of people I know, or have heard of. Akihiro is based off of what people stereotype me as, and hero is what I strive to be. The chara...
by Itriedisuck
Tue Jan 15, 2013 10:12 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

Hey guys, thanks for the comments as always. I see we have a new person to the conversation, so welcome! @Aines445 Your power may not have been mastered yet, but you are thinking like me, and its a bit scary. Before I had put pen to paper (or finger to keyboard) I had thought that in one of the endi...
by Itriedisuck
Sun Jan 13, 2013 1:39 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

@Ran08 thats fine, ask as many questions as you want (the more you ask me, the more I have to ask myself :P). I want this to be pretty long. I drew my inspiration from Fate/Stay Night and I remembered thinking "Wow, if this was a book, I would have put it down by now.... but the story.... it's ...
by Itriedisuck
Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:37 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

I don't unfortunately :( . I really only write this in my spare time, and I really just started recently also. I am glad you liked it certainly, but I am afraid it might be a little bit until it is finished. I was thinking of trying to get at least 2 routes done be mid-February if my schedule allows...
by Itriedisuck
Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:16 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

Tried this one. :) Bad points: The typos? XD And yes, they were right, I didn't like the stereotypes. Also, the story reminded me of Karate Kid. I kept imagining that your characters were the characters from that movie. Teehee. (But this is a good point! XD) Good points: Hmm... the story was fine, ...
by Itriedisuck
Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:04 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

@dreamdragonhatcher like I told Aines, the point of giving the person that option is just to give an option to the player to get a miyako ending out of the situation... the obvious response will be to say "Are you crazy?", but still, give the people choices XD. As for torturing him, I have...
by Itriedisuck
Sat Jan 12, 2013 5:16 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

I had already thought about some of that. I'll write it in a spoiler box... I had planned to allow the player to ignore the phone call from Mai, and that would part of Mai's bad ending where she dies... the reason I put it that you could go with Miyako after finding out was for like a last ditch eff...
by Itriedisuck
Sat Jan 12, 2013 3:20 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

You know, reading this is really making me debate changing the setting back to America.... between my job and school, I'm not sure if I can really put the time towards researching japanese school systems, but I liked the idea of Kaito staying Kaito. Names are really something I struggle with when th...
by Itriedisuck
Fri Jan 11, 2013 10:18 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Sweet Dreams (TEXT ONLY DEMO) (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 2
Views: 1178

Re: Sweet Dreams (TEXT ONLY DEMO) (feedback appreciated!)

lols, well, I will be the first (well technically the second.....) to admit that I am terrible at grammar and spelling.... however, that aside, I really appreciate you taking a chance XD I really just started writing this with no research, with the exception of playing the Fate and Tsukihime VN's......
by Itriedisuck
Fri Jan 11, 2013 7:41 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

@Aines dont worry, I use XD way too much as well. btw, if the version you played was from this post, its the most recent (the first version only had day 1, version 2 is on this post and included a part of day 2). Yeah, when the dreams aren't going on, the school is where the main plot is going to be...
by Itriedisuck
Fri Jan 11, 2013 6:25 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

@dreamdragonhatchling So you found me again! thanks for replying and I hoped the section of day 2 gave you more info... as for a skip button... that is a very good idea, if and when I update this, I will be very sure to add that. I really wanted the base of this VN to be about how the characters evo...
by Itriedisuck
Fri Jan 11, 2013 6:15 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Re: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

@Aines445 Thanks for the comment! I am glad that you liked the story. As for the typos, I am sorry... it is quite sad because English is my first language, however, I was writing this in wordpad which has no spell check, so that was really my bad :P. You know, I really added some of the stereotypes ...
by Itriedisuck
Thu Jan 10, 2013 11:13 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 30
Views: 2859

Sweet Dreams (feedback appreciated!)

Hi peoples! so I had posted about this once before, and I felt I just didn't give enough information, and by the time I updated it, the post was already so far down the drain :P so now I decided to give you: SWEET DREAMS INTRO 2.0!!! . So this time around I posted days 1 and part of 2. The story is ...
by Itriedisuck
Wed Jan 09, 2013 8:40 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Sweet Dreams (TEXT ONLY DEMO) (feedback appreciated!)
Replies: 2
Views: 1178

Sweet Dreams (TEXT ONLY DEMO) (feedback appreciated!)

Hi peoples, I just started on a VN a month or so ago, working on it here and there when I had time... It became what I am showing you now, called "Sweet Dreams". I haven't shown too many people (although I did post it in the ideas page a little while back), and I'm not sure if the idea is ...
by Itriedisuck
Wed Jan 02, 2013 10:36 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Just need to see if I am starting in the right direction...
Replies: 7
Views: 741

Re: Just need to see if I am starting in the right direction

Mmm... interesting !! I read all of it, even if there were no pretty pictures to look at :3 lol Are you going for NVL or regular VN? I myself i'n not a fan of NVL.... But the story is good, at least it for me, good luck on finishing this! (I would love to be a artist for this, since it sounds inter...