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Amnesia? The troupe is overused often but if you add your original concept to it, all is well, I guess. Just be creative and wisely about what you wish to involve in the story. Planning ahead is another great approach to be “satisfied” or “successful” with your decisions. The idea of the kids locati...

KomiTsuku wrote:

Apsiring Writer wrote:Thoughts doesn't need quotations marks; make them italics or normal text.

Thoughts do need quotation marks in this instance. It's still a line of dialogue, even if it isn't been spoken aloud.

Oh, you're correct. I didn't read it carefully.

Yes, people do read Kinetic Novels - well some not all. Most of them prefers Visual Novels, but that doesn't mean you shouldn't give it a try. It can't hurt, after all? It does requires a lot of thoughts, and hard work put into it. What doesn't?

Hello, I do advice you to read over your post. There are quite a few errors that need your attention. I don't know if I'm over - analyzing this, but your description doesn't seemed subtle. But I can be wrong now. You should add more information about your requirements so that people can know what th...

"Closed for now." Found a project.

Hello, Your writing is pretty terrific from what I read so far. You do know your way around words which enhance your writing. I do hope you find a promising project to work on soon and someone who appreciate your talents. Someone as talented as you should have been hired already. Good luck and best ...

You might want to go over the original post and Outdoor Gathering too, as there's quite a few errors. Also, did you spell your user name wrong on purpose? Apart from that, I'm sure you'll be a good addition to an existing VN team. I hope you can find an enjoyable project to work on. Thanks for info...

I read 'Lesson' and you had grammatical mistakes and switched between past and present tenses several times. Maybe you should proofread/edit your work some more before you offer your proofreading services... I wish you good luck with getting hired--your offer to research about other countries is ad...

"Closed for now."

Shad12ow: It's no problem with me. So send it over if you like.

There are many sites that offer feedback on stories. While some are free, others are not. Here's some of these sites: Fanfiction.net (Fanfic & free) Fictionpress.net (Orginal & free) Worhtyofpublishing.com (Free for a while, I think.) Figment.com (Free) http://www.writers-network.com/ writer...

Hello, I stumbled onto this game, and was intrigued with the storyline. But I had to inspected the reviews the game itself received, so that I could have a feel of what was presented before me. The comments were mostly positive which is a good thing. It gave me the encouragement to give the game a ...

Misfile wrote:Just a thought but you may want to tell people what genres you're interested in writing. Or should we take it that there are no limits to that which you will write?

I don't have any genres that I prefer over others. So you guess correctly.

I'm willing to offer my writing service to anyone who needs it. Writing is probably one of the things that I'm good at. I don't have any objections to the different genres of writing. Here is an example of my writing: "Katie, I pay a great deal of respect for Mr. Knight. I'm sure whatever your ...