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I think you should use more shadow. Also the lines are too thick and is the main reason why it all looks so rough. Use photoshop's thin vector lines to make them more equal. The hands don't look real. The bodies look a bit crooked, so you should also redraw that using the pen tool in PS. I actually...

Sorry if it's messy and doesn't help at all lol. Others already touched on the skirt texture and the falling over bit so I won't repeat 'em. An important suggestion from me is shading!! Don't be afraid of using shadows and especially highlights, it'll give your pictures more of a *pop* and add an e...

Hello! I'd suggest you use an horizontal symmetry or somethibng like that, it helps to see )mistakes ^^ I hope you don't mind, I did something on each of your sprites, but they are already quite good! On the pictures, the sprite that seems to be falling is the one you actually have, and each time I...

I think you should use more shadow. Also the lines are too thick and is the main reason why it all looks so rough. Use photoshop's thin vector lines to make them more equal. The hands don't look real. The bodies look a bit crooked, so you should also redraw that using the pen tool in PS. I actually...

First off: Do NOT use realistic clothing texture especially with an anime/cartoon style! The texture you're using on the skirts really clash with the drawings themselves. Otherwise, right now your sprites are adequate, but if you're looking for serious critiquing, than you really should look up the...

Alright I found the issue... sort of. Has something to do with the position variables $ center = Position(xpos = 0.5, xanchor = 'center', ypos = 1.1) $ left = Position(xpos = 0.0, xanchor = 'left', ypos = 1.1) $ right = Position(xpos = 1.0, xanchor = 'right', ypos = 1.1) $ store = Position(xpos = 0....

Hello, I am in some need of serious critiquing. It's really hard to judge if anything I do is any good if I'm the only audience, but I do believe there is always room for improvement, so any help here would be appreciated. If you find anything wrong with my art (i.e. The eyes are a little off, sligh...

Hey, so I've been working on this VN for a few days, and have had zero issues with nvl mode until now. It seems so random because I haven't modified anything but the dialog / transitions. I've been testing, testing and testing throughout editing and for some reason, I decide to go back to the game, ...

Hello from elsewhere in Chicagoland. I think what you're looking for is persistent data . It will help you create content which can be unlocked after finishing the story/game, as well as content that can be carried over from Part 1 into Part 2. Try using it, and then ask if you need additional help...

Hello all, I come to this forum a lot for help (I've just gotten into Visual Novels about 2 weeks ago, and decided to make my own so I discovered Ren'py) but I've just decided to make my own account and ask a question because I'm having a little problems. Right now, I have completed the first part o...