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@ chocojax

I changed her outfit and job to fit the setting better. Since, I have made the main setting of my VN the hotel, I didn't want to involve too many people that were outside the environment. As for the color, I was going to for a navy, business-style look, is it too dull?

Sprite Comparison: this is for a secondary character for my game: Anne. The left is her character concept where she was a nurse. The right is her 'final' design. Do you guys like the new design better?

Thanks so much for your input guys~! I hope to have another sprite done by tonight! I'll also upload a CG or two... depending on how much work I get done.

DELETED BECAUSE I MADE A REAL WIP THREAD!!

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@ fleet & Googaboga Thank you so much for the encouragement~! I think I may stick with this style, simply because I don't want to try something complicated for my first VN. @ PN04 Perhaps 'formulaic' was not the best description. It does carry a lot of negative connotation. Maybe I should have s...

My favorite design you've put up so far is Zhi~! All of your art is glorious.

(Man, I hope this makes sense.) Hi, In my visual novel I've worked out has set paths after a certain point. But, the basic plot is that the MC winds up working at a haunted hotel after her car crashes. As the game progresses, I've decided to give each obtainable a 'ghost story' to follow. And, once ...

I'll try to write something more detailed later if I can, so lazy at the moment, haha. Hmm, it looks good compared to the grey-scale background, in my opinion. It looks like a very light, desaturated blue, so it's not blending in (color wise). It's your call, of course. By the way, you could've edi...

Every other day... at least. Unless I have no access to a computer XD But even then, I draw in a traditional style.

I did a new picture of Ellie, still using hard edge shading, but more reflective of my personal style. I also used cocojax's suggestion for an 'lighter' shirt color. Because my backgrounds will be gray scale... I'm not sure how well this works out.

@chocojax Thanks so much for the feedback. I think I'll clarify things a little bit. Perhaps I should write a little bit about the characters so people can use that to help them analyze the mock-sprites? The girl (Ellie): Her shirt is supposed to be very frumpy and overly large save for the spots at...

Hey~ I've edited this thread a bit since I have some other things I want to post. I've settled on a style and it will follow more of the cell-shading style for coloring because I have a personal goal to get this VN done by Winter Quarter. I'll leave things here and hope for feedback. Let me know if ...