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by Trouble Time
Sun Nov 03, 2013 11:27 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Halluel
Replies: 3
Views: 830

Re: Halluel

So after some reveiw, I've begun to feel Halluel's character is a bit like chocolate milk, it has to be moving or the chocolate will eventually settle to the bottom of the cup and all you'll see is boring milk. I've had a hard time trying to convey the character in a VN, but a firend of mine with a ...
by Trouble Time
Sat Oct 26, 2013 2:20 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Fatexheart (Fantasy/Action) (Yuri)
Replies: 10
Views: 2491

Re: Fatexheart (Fantasy/Action) (Yuri)

Looks interesting, yuri isn't usually my thing, nor is incest really, but it does sound like it could be interesting. That and I love anything with action scenes in it.
by Trouble Time
Tue Oct 22, 2013 4:52 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Critiques Wanted.
Replies: 2
Views: 650

Re: Could I get some critique on my opening

Ah, thank you for the critique. Now I can finally stop my not writing until I know my opening doesn't suck option select. I do eventually explain where the camera is later as part of a joke though. It's somewhere that wouldn't work on someone other than Halluel.
by Trouble Time
Sun Oct 20, 2013 1:18 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Critiques Wanted.
Replies: 2
Views: 650

Critiques Wanted.

so I'm working on my first game, but for some reason I keep feeling like the opening is really weak. I think it'd do me some good to get some good to get some early criticisms since I'm trying to improve my writing as a whole. I'd like anyone who does give critiques to be honest, I'd rather know wha...
by Trouble Time
Sat Oct 19, 2013 9:26 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Halluel
Replies: 3
Views: 830

Re: Halluel

Thanks for joining the forum and posting. There's been a decent number of distinct VNs on this forum with minimal slice of life, and no emphasis on romance and cute characters. I welcome them... even though I admit it's been mostly cute love stories that have held my interest. Setting: The game is ...
by Trouble Time
Sat Oct 19, 2013 8:44 am
Forum: Anime, Games, and Japan
Topic: recommended manga(formerly currently reading manga)
Replies: 136
Views: 19495

Re: recommended manga(formerly currently reading manga)

I recommend Mahou Shoujo of the End to anyone who doesn't want to sleep for a while. It's a pretty good horror story IMO, but if you're not fond of gore, I can't recommend it. It's got something similar to a zombie apocalypse vibe, but with weird doll-like magical girls. I can't really say much more...
by Trouble Time
Sat Oct 19, 2013 8:01 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Halluel
Replies: 3
Views: 830

Halluel

Halluel Halluel is a fast paced story about an assassin named…well Halluel. She’s part of a new class of killers who have a liscense to kill granted by the government itself. The competition is fierce, so fierce most assassins train to kill to the exclusion of any other skills. Halluel is no such ex...