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So after some reveiw, I've begun to feel Halluel's character is a bit like chocolate milk, it has to be moving or the chocolate will eventually settle to the bottom of the cup and all you'll see is boring milk. I've had a hard time trying to convey the character in a VN, but a firend of mine with a ...

Looks interesting, yuri isn't usually my thing, nor is incest really, but it does sound like it could be interesting. That and I love anything with action scenes in it.

Ah, thank you for the critique. Now I can finally stop my not writing until I know my opening doesn't suck option select. I do eventually explain where the camera is later as part of a joke though. It's somewhere that wouldn't work on someone other than Halluel.

so I'm working on my first game, but for some reason I keep feeling like the opening is really weak. I think it'd do me some good to get some good to get some early criticisms since I'm trying to improve my writing as a whole. I'd like anyone who does give critiques to be honest, I'd rather know wha...

Thanks for joining the forum and posting. There's been a decent number of distinct VNs on this forum with minimal slice of life, and no emphasis on romance and cute characters. I welcome them... even though I admit it's been mostly cute love stories that have held my interest. Setting: The game is ...

I recommend Mahou Shoujo of the End to anyone who doesn't want to sleep for a while. It's a pretty good horror story IMO, but if you're not fond of gore, I can't recommend it. It's got something similar to a zombie apocalypse vibe, but with weird doll-like magical girls. I can't really say much more...

Halluel Halluel is a fast paced story about an assassin named…well Halluel. She’s part of a new class of killers who have a liscense to kill granted by the government itself. The competition is fierce, so fierce most assassins train to kill to the exclusion of any other skills. Halluel is no such ex...