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by Doctor No
Sun Jun 05, 2011 5:24 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: (WIP) Keep Smoking! An anti smoking campaign.
Replies: 2
Views: 618

Re: (WIP) Keep Smoking! An anti smoking campaign.

Updated in the main post.
by Doctor No
Wed Jun 01, 2011 2:01 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Doctor No's stories. Critique needed.
Replies: 4
Views: 681

Re: Doctor No's stories. Critique needed.

Thank you for your reply. To answer your last question first, this story is supposed to show a person who has no ability to understand why people do what they do. Sorta like an autistic person. At the end however, when his life flashes in front of him once again, he understands the concept of "human...
by Doctor No
Mon May 30, 2011 12:58 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: [ON HOLD] - [WIP] Perfect Renassonce~ [DEMO v.2]
Replies: 51
Views: 4844

Re: [WIP]Perfect Renassonce(New word)DEMO v.1(Feedback pleas

I liked the demo. It was CUTE. The characters were however covered mostly by the text box. :\

Also, It felt disorienting, that the name selection screen was filled with boxes. :\

But that aside, YAAAY!!!. You made a good game. :)
by Doctor No
Mon May 30, 2011 11:57 am
Forum: Skill Development
Topic: Doctor No's stories. Critique needed.
Replies: 4
Views: 681

Doctor No's stories. Critique needed.

It's a story I wrote. I want to turn it into a kinetic novel too one day which will require a bit of editing. Tell me if it's okay? [b]Peace[/b] He opened his eyes. All his senses were in working order. The acoustic waves impacting in his ear, sending impulses to his brain, told him that he was in a...
by Doctor No
Mon May 30, 2011 11:11 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: (WIP) Keep Smoking! An anti smoking campaign.
Replies: 2
Views: 618

(WIP) Keep Smoking! An anti smoking campaign.

Hey guys. I made small Kinetic Novel based on a concept i got in another commercial. It is very short and it is about smoking. I need feed back cuz i'm really stumped about how to improve it. Here is the link. link removed I Used sprites from risingbamboobanana and The Sylvie sprite that came with R...
by Doctor No
Sun Feb 08, 2009 3:37 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5222
Views: 1224434

Re: Guestbook

Hi All, i'm new, professionally a doctor and write as a hobby, i see VNs as very expressive, though i lack the artistic skills to design one. but will be around working on my own projects. :-)