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by reguildcharm
Mon Jan 13, 2014 11:39 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

daikiraikimi wrote:I saw your updated picture and...
The links are totally great(and funny on some)!
Thanks for sharing them ^_^
I'm working on finding time to edit, lol.
by reguildcharm
Sun Jan 12, 2014 10:08 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

crestforge wrote:Hello! I've been watching this thread and...
Wow! The image is great help & really easy to follow ;D
I'll try to follow along your guidelines.
And I never really thought about the canvas size when I
first began to draw, but I see how it would make things easier :o
Thank you! :)
by reguildcharm
Sat Jan 11, 2014 3:05 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

It's better. The overall balance... I think the problem with the pelvis and hips are mainly because of the clothes(the body itself without the clothes easily show all parts in a more defined way). The resizing on everything else is noted and will edited. And the canvas is 500x700, but the canvas in...
by reguildcharm
Sat Jan 11, 2014 2:36 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

It's better. The overall balance... I think the problem with the pelvis and hips are mainly because of the clothes(the body itself without the clothes easily show all parts in a more defined way). The resizing on everything else is noted and will edited. And the canvas is 500x700, but the canvas in...
by reguildcharm
Sat Jan 11, 2014 1:17 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

After finding time to edit, I finished my 3rd draft!
Edited: One position of the arm/hand, distance between eyes,
leg length changed, shirt changed, and slightly longer hair.
Newest Mari.png
Here's the 3rd draft!(Hopefully the last for this character)
What do you guys think now? ;D
(Also, I'm going to research more about drawing clothes soon.)
by reguildcharm
Tue Jan 07, 2014 7:44 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

daikiraikimi wrote:I think they meant that the face itself...
I see! Thanks for the tip! ;D I'll keep in mind the general half-width distance. Back to editing mode!
by reguildcharm
Tue Jan 07, 2014 5:49 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

Her shoulders are wider than her hips, this is almost never the case in women. Her face is also too large for her head. Shoulders & Hips will be edited again(I think I understand more as to where to measuring the shoulders, but I'll keep looking at more references). And what do you mean by the face...
by reguildcharm
Tue Jan 07, 2014 4:41 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

NewMari.png
From Edited Topic Post!
(Image also posted on topic post)
Personally, the image is much better for me to look at.
I think the height of the skirt needs a bit of adjusting,
but I don't know, lol. Maybe it's normal?
The watch will play an important part in VN I'm making.
Critiques? :)
by reguildcharm
Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:08 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

Hi, Zenith! Well, first off the drawing is extremely top-heavy... Ah! That makes more sense now that there's reasoning, haha. I did end up spending more time on the upper-body since they're usually the parts I notice more when I look at others' drawings. Also, when I was drawing part of the anatomy...
by reguildcharm
Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:50 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Re: Advice/Critique Wanted

Could you clarify exactly what you need help on? It's difficult to tell where you applied stylistic choices and what areas you feel are off. Well, I feel the anatomy is a bit off proportions, but at the same time, I can't really tell if that's exactly what's making the image a bit odd for me to loo...
by reguildcharm
Mon Jan 06, 2014 4:24 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Advice/Critique Wanted
Replies: 20
Views: 2557

Advice/Critique Wanted

Hi, I'm Zineth ^_^ So, I need help with my drawing. I'm usually only drawing sketches using pencil and paper, but I decided to try out Paint Tool Sai. This is my second drawing using the program(my first was an epic fail chibi T__T"), and I need help before I start making other characters for my VN ...
by reguildcharm
Fri Jan 03, 2014 11:18 pm
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5205
Views: 1208742

Re: Guestbook

Hello to all who read this :) My name's Zineth(Zee-neth), but I'm fine with any and all nicknames(The shortest nickname I've received was "zz"). Calling me by my username is totally cool too! I've played many visual novels and finally found the motivation to start making my own. My current project i...