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by Dread Lord
Sun Feb 01, 2015 3:01 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Help naming my game?
Replies: 9
Views: 1651

Re: Help naming my game?

That and I gave you 7 good working titles to choose from...pick one and congratulate me for taking what little you gave us as a description for your game and working it into so many funny eye-catching titles. Here's a few more... 8. Driving Ms. Sue: The Death of a Pirate 9. Top Sue: In the Eye of th...
by Dread Lord
Sat Jan 31, 2015 2:50 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Help naming my game?
Replies: 9
Views: 1651

Re: Help naming my game?

My game is a sci fi game about a princess who escapes from her home planet and goes on an adventure. Blah blah blah, she saves the world from space pirates. I really need an eye catching name for this game, halp? I'm really bad at that kind of thing... Any ideas would be appreciated. :) Hmm...here'...
by Dread Lord
Wed Jan 28, 2015 12:45 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline
Replies: 7
Views: 1405

Re: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline

This all sounds really interesting and I'd be interested in reading it! Especially since I'm a Haruhi fan myself. Still, as a creative, I think the setting of Haruhi is so simple you can very easily condense it and lose nothing except for "fan-fiction" label. There's barely any world-building invol...
by Dread Lord
Sat Jan 24, 2015 12:50 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?
Replies: 36
Views: 3944

Re: How to Deal with Shame as a Writer?

“Don't give in to your fears. If you do, you won't be able to talk to your heart.” [/b] - Paulo Coelho , The Alchemist “Tell your heart that the fear of suffering is worse than the suffering itself. And that no heart has ever suffered when it goes in search of its dreams, because every second of th...
by Dread Lord
Wed Jan 21, 2015 1:45 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: My Sister [comedy, horror(?), kinetic, free]
Replies: 8
Views: 3293

Re: My Sister [comedy, horror(?), kinetic, free ]

By any chance, do you have a sister in real life, kser6354? I mean is this based on your psychological dossier/profile of "[your]/My Sister" and how she views human beings in general or is there a certain special someone that inspired uh-this in RL? I hope you don't mind me asking...I wouldn't want ...
by Dread Lord
Sun Jan 18, 2015 1:36 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline
Replies: 7
Views: 1405

Re: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline

It's sad that even with this many views none have found what I've given here worthy of a reply. In hopes that some read it, what would you change to improve the concept? Well, I'm rather confused. Is this plot outline for a Haruhi Suzumiya fanfiction, or for an original work about angels? Its a com...
by Dread Lord
Sun Jan 18, 2015 12:18 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline
Replies: 7
Views: 1405

Re: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline

Its sad, that even with this many views none have found what I've given here worthy of a reply. In hopes that some read it, what would you change to improve the concept? Angels have ridiculous potential to be Mary Sue/Marty Stu characters right from the outset simply because one of the world's major...
by Dread Lord
Fri Jan 16, 2015 5:28 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Organization in writing?
Replies: 7
Views: 1411

Re: Organization in writing?

I don't know how much it will help but this helped me a lot so perhaps it will help you? http://www.aliciarasley.com/art4.htm To make it easier, here is what the prior link wants you to do to help you at least gain a sense for your story... -----------------------------------------------------------...
by Dread Lord
Thu Jan 08, 2015 5:13 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline
Replies: 7
Views: 1405

Re: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline

Here is The Eternal Crusade. I wrote and copyrighted this some time ago in preparation for this day and the days ahead where I find a use for it...it encompasses a vital part of my Angel character's primary belief system and is one of three central tenets of his Celestial Order... The Eternal Crusad...
by Dread Lord
Thu Jan 08, 2015 1:19 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline
Replies: 7
Views: 1405

The Worlds of Haruhi Suzumiya Project - My Plot Outline

I found this dead project forum site and it irritated me so I wrote my complete plot sketch and map then simplified the whole thing with the Snowflake method over the span of a few hours yesterday. http://www.wohs-project.org/forum/index.php Considering the major thrust of this forum, and as a poten...
by Dread Lord
Mon Sep 22, 2014 9:01 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Request for a Critique/Review on Two Different Approaches
Replies: 3
Views: 715

Re: Request for a Critique...on a small segment of story

Thank you, fleet. What do you think about the larger picture items though such as content provided. Is a good direction. What about the creative quality as presented in this thumbnail? I'll present below a different take for roughly the same setup but different story with some additional contextual ...
by Dread Lord
Mon Sep 22, 2014 5:25 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Request for a Critique/Review on Two Different Approaches
Replies: 3
Views: 715

Request for a Critique/Review on Two Different Approaches

...I will use whatever help you are willing to proved to better my writing skills...I am grateful for any assistance in this endeavor. Dr. Yuuko Kouzuki walks toward the elevator leading to the restricted lower levels with a small girl in tow and a twenty-something woman bearing Captain bars and a 9...
by Dread Lord
Tue Aug 05, 2014 2:29 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Need Some Serious Writing Help Here! (How to show/not tell)
Replies: 6
Views: 985

Re: Need Some Serious Writing Help Here! (How to show/not te

You can try to chart a more balanced approach to the whole Showing vs. Telling paradigm by following the advice offered by this writer here: http://curiosityquills.com/limyaael/balancing-showing-telling/ To learn more about Showing over Telling you can't go far wrong by adapting your style to use th...
by Dread Lord
Mon Apr 14, 2014 5:53 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: For any new writers...this should help...
Replies: 0
Views: 585

For any new writers...this should help...

This site has helped me a lot. Maybe it will help you too. http://curiosityquills.com/ Case in point, if you want to have a few laughs while learning the do's and don'ts of writing especially when it comes to writing good fantasy stories then take a look at some of these very well written 'rants': h...
by Dread Lord
Wed Apr 09, 2014 2:52 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: I, Miku [comedy][identity][vocaloid][Nano2014]
Replies: 6
Views: 6994

Re: I, Miku [comedy][identity][vocaloid][Nano2014]

Congratulations! You have done great work...far greater in fact than at least one other fan project I might name... http://wohs-project.org/ You deserve the highest praise for actually taking the time and effort involved to finish your work! Believe me when I say that this sort of VN has been a long...