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That and I gave you 7 good working titles to choose from...pick one and congratulate me for taking what little you gave us as a description for your game and working it into so many funny eye-catching titles. Here's a few more... 8. Driving Ms. Sue: The Death of a Pirate 9. Top Sue: In the Eye of th...

My game is a sci fi game about a princess who escapes from her home planet and goes on an adventure. Blah blah blah, she saves the world from space pirates. I really need an eye catching name for this game, halp? I'm really bad at that kind of thing... Any ideas would be appreciated. :) Hmm...here'...

This all sounds really interesting and I'd be interested in reading it! Especially since I'm a Haruhi fan myself. Still, as a creative, I think the setting of Haruhi is so simple you can very easily condense it and lose nothing except for "fan-fiction" label. There's barely any world-buil...

“Don't give in to your fears. If you do, you won't be able to talk to your heart.” [/b] - Paulo Coelho , The Alchemist “Tell your heart that the fear of suffering is worse than the suffering itself. And that no heart has ever suffered when it goes in search of its dreams, because every second of th...

By any chance, do you have a sister in real life, kser6354? I mean is this based on your psychological dossier/profile of "[your]/My Sister" and how she views human beings in general or is there a certain special someone that inspired uh-this in RL? I hope you don't mind me asking...I woul...

It's sad that even with this many views none have found what I've given here worthy of a reply. In hopes that some read it, what would you change to improve the concept? Well, I'm rather confused. Is this plot outline for a Haruhi Suzumiya fanfiction, or for an original work about angels? Its a com...

Its sad, that even with this many views none have found what I've given here worthy of a reply. In hopes that some read it, what would you change to improve the concept? Angels have ridiculous potential to be Mary Sue/Marty Stu characters right from the outset simply because one of the world's major...

I don't know how much it will help but this helped me a lot so perhaps it will help you? http://www.aliciarasley.com/art4.htm To make it easier, here is what the prior link wants you to do to help you at least gain a sense for your story... -----------------------------------------------------------...

Here is The Eternal Crusade. I wrote and copyrighted this some time ago in preparation for this day and the days ahead where I find a use for it...it encompasses a vital part of my Angel character's primary belief system and is one of three central tenets of his Celestial Order... The Eternal Crusad...

I found this dead project forum site and it irritated me so I wrote my complete plot sketch and map then simplified the whole thing with the Snowflake method over the span of a few hours yesterday. http://www.wohs-project.org/forum/index.php Considering the major thrust of this forum, and as a poten...

Thank you, fleet. What do you think about the larger picture items though such as content provided. Is a good direction. What about the creative quality as presented in this thumbnail? I'll present below a different take for roughly the same setup but different story with some additional contextual ...

...I will use whatever help you are willing to proved to better my writing skills...I am grateful for any assistance in this endeavor. Dr. Yuuko Kouzuki walks toward the elevator leading to the restricted lower levels with a small girl in tow and a twenty-something woman bearing Captain bars and a 9...

You can try to chart a more balanced approach to the whole Showing vs. Telling paradigm by following the advice offered by this writer here: http://curiosityquills.com/limyaael/balancing-showing-telling/ To learn more about Showing over Telling you can't go far wrong by adapting your style to use th...

This site has helped me a lot. Maybe it will help you too. http://curiosityquills.com/ Case in point, if you want to have a few laughs while learning the do's and don'ts of writing especially when it comes to writing good fantasy stories then take a look at some of these very well written 'rants': h...

Congratulations! You have done great work...far greater in fact than at least one other fan project I might name... http://wohs-project.org/ You deserve the highest praise for actually taking the time and effort involved to finish your work! Believe me when I say that this sort of VN has been a long...