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by UniqueDesu2222
Tue Apr 08, 2014 7:36 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Birthmark [GxB, Happy? Tragedy]
Replies: 6
Views: 1237

Re: Birthmark [GxB, Happy? Tragedy]

Consider calling it a hospice instead of a hospital, unless the theme is that there's a sort of official denial about this medical facility where patients wait for advances in medicine. Oh I didn't know there was a word like that (hospice... English is my second language ahh) Yes denial! You're put...
by UniqueDesu2222
Tue Apr 08, 2014 7:32 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Birthmark [GxB, Happy? Tragedy]
Replies: 6
Views: 1237

Re: Birthmark [GxB, Happy? Tragedy]

Such subject matter needs to be handled with accuracy, tact, and subtlety. Characters should never be caricatures in any work (except for satire), but it's especially important to treat them with respect when they're generally underrepresented in fiction, etc. omygod, I was writing a little paragra...
by UniqueDesu2222
Tue Apr 08, 2014 4:50 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Birthmark [GxB, Happy? Tragedy]
Replies: 6
Views: 1237

Re: Birthmark [GxB, Happy? Tragedy]

For a story of this type, I highly recommend doing some research about the medical conditions you're attempting to portray. Such subject matter needs to be handled with accuracy, tact, and subtlety. Characters should never be caricatures in any work (except for satire), but it's especially importan...
by UniqueDesu2222
Tue Apr 08, 2014 3:41 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Birthmark [GxB, Happy? Tragedy]
Replies: 6
Views: 1237

Birthmark [GxB, Happy? Tragedy]

About a girl and boy who met in the hospital... but it's not a normal hospital. Erika (the main character) believes that they are all lying and knows that the hospital is for those with no more hope and end up dying soon. Some of the illnesses there are unknown so they were thrown into the hospital....