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Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad that at least some people think it's worth reading. The point of the first scene was to capture the reader's attention, regardless of how relevant the specific going-ons of that scene are to the plot as a whole. I just want it to give the reader a feeling of 'i w...

Hey all, I'm yet another first time VN writer wanting some affirmation of my work. My background is engineering and I haven't done much writing for quite some time, so I want to know if I'm on the right track or horribly off. Note: As I am still in the process of writing my opening chapter, I am not...

Good points from both of you!

I'm thinking of doing MC on Day -3, Day -1, and half Day -0 while heroine on Day -2 and half Day -0. I'll write out the MC part first and see what I feel like doing after that.

Yea, those are all good suggestions! Thanks. I'm still deciding if doing this multiple viewpoints thing is a good path to take to even begin with. The only reason I considered it is because in contrast my original opening had only the MC and there was basically no mention of the heroine that would a...

Hey all, I've decided to actually do something and start making a VN instead of just thinking about doing one. With that said, I don't have very much writing experience so it is a pretty daunting process. At this point, I've mapped out the general structure, general idea of each chapter, and I've la...

I like it, especially the beginning in the bathroom. You definitely set the mood well, although some of the sentence structures and wording could use a bit of revision. I'm planning on rolling out my first VN as well, and I don't know if we're in the same boat, but I haven't written anything appreci...