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by Rinmaru
Sat Nov 17, 2018 3:35 am
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Writing, Editing, and Proofreading (Small Projects Are Free!)
Replies: 33
Views: 6353

Re: Writing, Editing, and Proofreading (Small Projects Are Free!)

Great editor.
Really thorough, quick and professional.
English is not my native language, so it was really nice of him to explain my mistakes.
I'm definitely hoping to work with him again for future projects.
%100 recommend :!:
by Rinmaru
Tue Oct 30, 2018 5:09 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 14
Views: 3693

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]

@philip @Rinmaru- Well, I bought the game and the rest of it is just as exciting and interesting as the demo. TONS of choices; spent six hours, and got to one ending. I can see that it will take some time to get them all. You and your team should be very proud of the wonderful job that you've done! ...
by Rinmaru
Sat Aug 04, 2018 5:25 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 14
Views: 3693

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]

@philip
Just downloaded and played through the demo . . . it's FANTASTIC!! The art and the story are top notch! Ran out of time today, but will be going back to buy the game soon!

philip
Thank you so much for playing, philip!
I really hope you'll enjoy the rest of the game too! =D
by Rinmaru
Fri Aug 03, 2018 5:00 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 14
Views: 3693

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]

Congratulation for the release. I love SF, and this VN looks beautiful. I Tried the demo, and Cardinal Cross should be the next VN to buy for SF fans ;) I would like to ask, what font did you use for the info/ blue message screen? Works perfectly with the subject. Thank you so much, Ocimpean! =) An...
by Rinmaru
Mon Jul 30, 2018 3:32 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 14
Views: 3693

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]

@Andromache Went through my first playthrough walkthrough-free, got a really bad end. Ooooops!!! Now I'm playing with a walkthrough to get everything else! Are there any consequences to romancing everyone all at once? =) Thank you so much for playing! There are more bad endings than good ones, so it...
by Rinmaru
Wed Jul 25, 2018 4:59 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 14
Views: 3693

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]

@JBShields
Holy shit-- this game is good. I'm only at Chapter 1, but the art is beautiful.

I love the choice system and the main character's personality.

I can't wait to finish reading the VN.
Thank you so much!!! I hope you will enjoy the rest of it too! :D :D :D
by Rinmaru
Thu Jul 12, 2018 3:33 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 14
Views: 3693

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]

Widdershins wrote:
Wed Jul 11, 2018 12:45 pm
Yay, I've been looking forward to this since seeing it mentioned on RPS back in April. Premise looks interesting, and the art is terrific-- congrats on full release!
Thank you so much, Widdershins! :)
by Rinmaru
Tue Jul 10, 2018 3:04 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 14
Views: 3693

Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]

http://impqueen.com/lemma/banner.png STEAM STORE PAGE Synopsis [/u][/size] When Lana Brice, a small time Raider Scavenger meets her mysterious client, she realises her life just took a very wrong turn in the worst way possible. Being forced to join a stranger's fight, can she discover her feelings ...
by Rinmaru
Tue Jul 10, 2018 2:58 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cardinal Cross [COMPLETED][sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 19
Views: 4079

Re: Cardinal Cross [COMPLETED][sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]

The full version is completed and released on Steam. =)
by Rinmaru
Thu Mar 08, 2018 2:58 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cardinal Cross [COMPLETED][sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 19
Views: 4079

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][GxB/GxG][Commercial]

@Knight of Hearts
it's pretty delicate balance to make them awesome and yet in a such a way that they don't overpower the characters! And you managed wonderfully!
The backgrounds are by N8watcher, but I'll pass along your compliments! :) There is a credits section at the bottom of the main post.
by Rinmaru
Wed Mar 07, 2018 2:06 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cardinal Cross [COMPLETED][sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 19
Views: 4079

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][DEMO][Commercial]

@Knight of Hearts Hi there, I have no played the demo, but I probably would if it was a romantic game. I'm really sold on the sci-fi tho! A few impressive things: 1. the backgrounds are gorgeous and so is the lineless blended artwork for the CGs 2. I like the general color scheme of the game, with ...
by Rinmaru
Thu Jan 25, 2018 5:44 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Testing for your commercial game
Replies: 2
Views: 536

Testing for your commercial game

Hi everyone, I'm just wondering do you hire testers for a commercial game? Or do you rather make your family/friends play it for you? I keep replaying my game over and over again, but I do miss bugs and spelling errors from time to time. Not to mention second opinions about the plot. Finding possibl...
by Rinmaru
Tue Jan 23, 2018 2:49 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cardinal Cross [COMPLETED][sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 19
Views: 4079

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][DEMO][Commercial]

@Unicorn_magic Hey, just wanted to drop by and tell you how amazing this game is! I played the demo, and Ioved it! I might love Kitt a bit too much haha, also, the art is so beautiful, I can't stop marvelling at it. I like the narrative and diversity of characters as well. The choices were so much f...
by Rinmaru
Mon Jul 31, 2017 1:10 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cardinal Cross [COMPLETED][sci-fi][STEAM][Commercial]
Replies: 19
Views: 4079

Re: Cardinal Cross [sci-fi][DEMO][Commercial]

@kistnerelizabeth I like your art style. I get a lot of Torment vibes from this. Looks pretty awesome, so far! I look forward to hearing more about it. :) Thank you so much! :) @Elmvine Also, can I just bless you on these CGs. I always think to myself people might think I'm being excessive if I try...