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- Wed Oct 12, 2016 2:07 pm
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Guardian Angel [GXG Romance/Revenge] [16+]
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4784
Re: Guardian Angel [GXG Romance/Revenge] [16+]
A lot of lines were really funny (for example the one about business majors loving other people's business), but I think the VN would have been better if there was less swearing. I swear quite a lot myself, but I think it doesn't sound so good in stories. I liked the insults that didn't contain prof...
- Thu Jun 30, 2016 8:18 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Diverse Character Dilemma
- Replies: 29
- Views: 5458
Re: Diverse Character Dilemma
I think you should write characters that you think best fit in the story and help tell the story in the best way. Use the characters' backgrounds in worldbuilding so that you can tell more about the place and time where the story happens and make it deeper and believable. Use their backgrounds as a ...
- Mon Jun 13, 2016 5:25 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Hatred for humanity
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3653
Re: Hatred for humanity
What would be the possible motivations for this kind of hatred and/or what would make some truly despise humanity? I'm a misanthrope :D I'll try to explain my views, it might help you write your character. Humans have started countless wars, invented torture methods that give me nightmares when I j...
- Sun May 15, 2016 8:56 am
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: how to make credit menu and credit ending in renpy
- Replies: 1
- Views: 2252
Re: how to make credit menu and credit ending in renpy
This should be helpful: viewtopic.php?f=51&t=22481
- Sun Apr 10, 2016 8:24 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Burning Love[YandereSimulatorParodyDatingSim]
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4536
Re: Burning Love[YandereSimulatorParodyDatingSim]
This was really cute and fun Have you shown it to Yandere Dev?
- Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:07 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2513
Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
I love dark and realistic versions of magical girls Your art is very beautiful.
- Fri Sep 18, 2015 12:01 pm
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Somebody can help? (answered)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 360
Re: Somebody can help?
You have to add the internet_points before you jump to a new label. menu: "something": $ internet_points += 10 jump lbl1 "something": $ internet_points += 5 jump lbl2
- Wed Aug 26, 2015 12:09 pm
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Ren'Py crashes a lot after Windows 10 update
- Replies: 0
- Views: 426
Ren'Py crashes a lot after Windows 10 update
A problem appeared after I updated to Windows 10. If I launch my project, edit the script and save it, and then reload the project, Ren'Py stops responding. It's annoying, because now I have to close my project every time I want to modify the script. Ren'Py also crashes when I try to change the disp...
- Wed Jul 29, 2015 3:36 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Emissary of Starlight [Magical Girl] [Psychological]
- Replies: 23
- Views: 7711
Re: Emissary of Starlight [Magical Girl] [Psychological]
The abilities you chose for the magical girls are really cool! I like it that it sounds more like science fiction than fantasy, and also more mature. "The brain is our nexus to reality. Isn't it poetic how the thing we called 'consciousness' can be simplified into atoms?" I found my waifu ♥
- Mon Jul 27, 2015 2:15 am
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Animation on top of animation
- Replies: 2
- Views: 302
Re: Animation on top of animation
Try image bg lights: "BGs/lights1.png" with Dissolve(0.5, alpha=True) 1.5 "BGs/lights2.png" with Dissolve(0.5, alpha=True) 1.5 "BGs/lights3.png" with Dissolve(0.5, alpha=True) 1.5 repeat http://www.renpy.org/doc/html/atl.html#expression-statement Thanks, it worked :D
- Sun Jul 26, 2015 3:09 pm
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Animation on top of animation
- Replies: 2
- Views: 302
Animation on top of animation
I'm trying to make an animated sprite and an animated background, and place the sprite on the background. My problem is that a black box appears around the sprite, even though the image is transparent. Here is an example of the animations (the background): image bg lights: "BGs/lights1.png"...
- Mon Jul 06, 2015 3:42 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: curousity: create a secret event when playing new game plus
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3277
Re: curousity: create a secret event when playing new game p
If the 'false' endings are very good, I think it's fine that the visual novel has to be replayed many times. In the only visual novel where I've seen this done well, there were many bittersweet false endings that had to be read before I could get the happy ending. It made the true ending feel much m...
- Sun Jun 07, 2015 7:04 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: The Censor [Dystopian/SF - English, German]
- Replies: 26
- Views: 14914
Re: The Censor [Dystopian/SF]
Visually, The Censor is one of the most beautiful visual novels I've seen. I also enjoyed the dystopian world a lot. It was unique, subtle and didn't feel preachy. The only flaw was that I didn't find many of the characters likable. Eff was plain and the sister was an a**hole. However, I liked the m...
- Thu May 14, 2015 3:20 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Wounded by Words [LD32][Gx?][crisis survival] (new version!)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 15864
Re: Wounded by Words [LD32][Gx?][crisis survival] (trailer u
I played Dave's route in the updated version. I felt like there was a lot of political stuff just tossed at the reader, and I'd like to add my 2 cents. I hope you're okay with a little debate. 1) Marginalized people turn to terrorism when they feel they have no hope of getting a better life. Violenc...
- Thu Apr 23, 2015 5:02 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Wounded by Words [LD32][Gx?][crisis survival] (new version!)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 15864
Re: Wounded by Words [LD32] [crisis survival]
I liked the premise a lot, but I felt like the story was a little dogmatic... Everyone else is nice and complex (and a feminist) except the white able-bodied man, who is disliked by every character. The art is very good, though, and the backgrounds, special effects and pictures of items helped tell ...