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by Taranee
Wed Oct 12, 2016 2:07 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Guardian Angel [GXG Romance/Revenge] [16+]
Replies: 2
Views: 4784

Re: Guardian Angel [GXG Romance/Revenge] [16+]

A lot of lines were really funny (for example the one about business majors loving other people's business), but I think the VN would have been better if there was less swearing. I swear quite a lot myself, but I think it doesn't sound so good in stories. I liked the insults that didn't contain prof...
by Taranee
Thu Jun 30, 2016 8:18 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Diverse Character Dilemma
Replies: 29
Views: 5458

Re: Diverse Character Dilemma

I think you should write characters that you think best fit in the story and help tell the story in the best way. Use the characters' backgrounds in worldbuilding so that you can tell more about the place and time where the story happens and make it deeper and believable. Use their backgrounds as a ...
by Taranee
Mon Jun 13, 2016 5:25 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Hatred for humanity
Replies: 16
Views: 3653

Re: Hatred for humanity

What would be the possible motivations for this kind of hatred and/or what would make some truly despise humanity? I'm a misanthrope :D I'll try to explain my views, it might help you write your character. Humans have started countless wars, invented torture methods that give me nightmares when I j...
by Taranee
Sun Apr 10, 2016 8:24 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Burning Love[YandereSimulatorParodyDatingSim]
Replies: 8
Views: 4536

Re: Burning Love[YandereSimulatorParodyDatingSim]

This was really cute and fun :D Have you shown it to Yandere Dev?
by Taranee
Thu Jan 14, 2016 12:07 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)
Replies: 9
Views: 2513

Re: Iron Mahou (magical girl, fantasy)(visual novel/RPG)

I love dark and realistic versions of magical girls :D Your art is very beautiful.
by Taranee
Fri Sep 18, 2015 12:01 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Somebody can help? (answered)
Replies: 2
Views: 360

Re: Somebody can help?

You have to add the internet_points before you jump to a new label. menu: "something": $ internet_points += 10 jump lbl1 "something": $ internet_points += 5 jump lbl2
by Taranee
Wed Aug 26, 2015 12:09 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Ren'Py crashes a lot after Windows 10 update
Replies: 0
Views: 426

Ren'Py crashes a lot after Windows 10 update

A problem appeared after I updated to Windows 10. If I launch my project, edit the script and save it, and then reload the project, Ren'Py stops responding. It's annoying, because now I have to close my project every time I want to modify the script. Ren'Py also crashes when I try to change the disp...
by Taranee
Wed Jul 29, 2015 3:36 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Emissary of Starlight [Magical Girl] [Psychological]
Replies: 23
Views: 7711

Re: Emissary of Starlight [Magical Girl] [Psychological]

The abilities you chose for the magical girls are really cool! I like it that it sounds more like science fiction than fantasy, and also more mature. "The brain is our nexus to reality. Isn't it poetic how the thing we called 'consciousness' can be simplified into atoms?" I found my waifu ♥
by Taranee
Mon Jul 27, 2015 2:15 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Animation on top of animation
Replies: 2
Views: 302

Re: Animation on top of animation

Try image bg lights: "BGs/lights1.png" with Dissolve(0.5, alpha=True) 1.5 "BGs/lights2.png" with Dissolve(0.5, alpha=True) 1.5 "BGs/lights3.png" with Dissolve(0.5, alpha=True) 1.5 repeat http://www.renpy.org/doc/html/atl.html#expression-statement Thanks, it worked :D
by Taranee
Sun Jul 26, 2015 3:09 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Animation on top of animation
Replies: 2
Views: 302

Animation on top of animation

I'm trying to make an animated sprite and an animated background, and place the sprite on the background. My problem is that a black box appears around the sprite, even though the image is transparent. Here is an example of the animations (the background): image bg lights: "BGs/lights1.png"...
by Taranee
Mon Jul 06, 2015 3:42 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: curousity: create a secret event when playing new game plus
Replies: 14
Views: 3277

Re: curousity: create a secret event when playing new game p

If the 'false' endings are very good, I think it's fine that the visual novel has to be replayed many times. In the only visual novel where I've seen this done well, there were many bittersweet false endings that had to be read before I could get the happy ending. It made the true ending feel much m...
by Taranee
Sun Jun 07, 2015 7:04 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Censor [Dystopian/SF - English, German]
Replies: 26
Views: 14914

Re: The Censor [Dystopian/SF]

Visually, The Censor is one of the most beautiful visual novels I've seen. I also enjoyed the dystopian world a lot. It was unique, subtle and didn't feel preachy. The only flaw was that I didn't find many of the characters likable. Eff was plain and the sister was an a**hole. However, I liked the m...
by Taranee
Thu May 14, 2015 3:20 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Wounded by Words [LD32][Gx?][crisis survival] (new version!)
Replies: 19
Views: 15864

Re: Wounded by Words [LD32][Gx?][crisis survival] (trailer u

I played Dave's route in the updated version. I felt like there was a lot of political stuff just tossed at the reader, and I'd like to add my 2 cents. I hope you're okay with a little debate. 1) Marginalized people turn to terrorism when they feel they have no hope of getting a better life. Violenc...
by Taranee
Thu Apr 23, 2015 5:02 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Wounded by Words [LD32][Gx?][crisis survival] (new version!)
Replies: 19
Views: 15864

Re: Wounded by Words [LD32] [crisis survival]

I liked the premise a lot, but I felt like the story was a little dogmatic... Everyone else is nice and complex (and a feminist) except the white able-bodied man, who is disliked by every character. The art is very good, though, and the backgrounds, special effects and pictures of items helped tell ...