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- Thu May 04, 2017 4:01 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Would anybody be willing to read my Death Note VN?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1449
Re: Would anybody be willing to read my Death Note VN?
Which characters did you write about? Are there shippings? Pro or anti-Kira?
- Fri Mar 10, 2017 7:17 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Word Count!
- Replies: 41
- Views: 10085
Re: Word Count!
The game contains 10,737 dialogue blocks, containing 193,416 words and 1,066,987 characters, for an average of 18.0 words and 99 characters per block. This happens all the time: >Wordcount: 185 000 >Alright, it's time to shorten this beast. >*Removes at least 3K of fluff words.* >Wordcount: 190 000...
- Mon Mar 06, 2017 5:42 am
- Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
- Topic: Stalker&Yandere [Yandere][Romance?][NaNo17]
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4843
Re: Stalker&Yandere [Yandere][Romance?][NaNo17]
I've been hyped for this since you posted the recruitment thread.
Stalker-senpai looks so creepy :O That's my type :*
Poor Sebastian-kun is stuck in the friendzone.
The bleeding heart in the logo is really cool :O
Stalker-senpai looks so creepy :O That's my type :*
Poor Sebastian-kun is stuck in the friendzone.
The bleeding heart in the logo is really cool :O
- Sat Jan 28, 2017 11:19 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: How to avoid 'sameface syndrome'?
- Replies: 12
- Views: 4624
How to avoid 'sameface syndrome'?
My characters always have the same face structure, but different hair and eyes. (Warning: TVTropes link.) How can I draw faces that look cute/moe, but aren't identical to each other?
- Thu Jan 12, 2017 5:25 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Can a visual novel "without sight" be good
- Replies: 18
- Views: 3562
Re: Can a visual novel "without sight" be good
You can still have: - Cool fonts, maybe different fonts for different characters or situations to represent voice - Background images that are solid colors or textures - A lot of music - Sound effects - Silhouettes of the characters (can be downloaded for free on many websites) I have read a visual ...
- Thu Dec 15, 2016 3:17 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Dialogue Blip Voice Acting?
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4868
Re: Dialogue Blip Voice Acting?
Does anyone know a website where I can download dialogue blip sound effects?
- Wed Dec 14, 2016 3:27 pm
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Attack Helicopter Date Simulator
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3190
Re: Attack Helicopter Date Simulator
Yes! Finally a visual novel that represents my sexual orientation Voted.
- Sat Dec 10, 2016 6:56 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: A team of people you can trust?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1018
Re: A team of people you can trust?
I slightly disagree with the posts above. A good idea is the foundation of a good visual novel. It's just as valuable as good writing and art, even though coming up with ideas requires different kind of work. Writing and drawing require a lot of practising as well as talent, but ideas are born 100% ...
- Mon Dec 05, 2016 6:10 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Max Massacre [Free] [Fantasy/Romance]
- Replies: 8
- Views: 6117
Re: Max Massacre [Free] [Fantasy/Romance]
I was really excited when I noticed this visual novel, but there turned out to be one problem. I didn't like Celeste at all. She goes to classes just to boast about how smart she is. She openly threatens to burn the village, letting anyone hear her threats. She insults the people who risk their liv...
- Thu Dec 01, 2016 11:13 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: Sprites with different poses as well as expressions?
- Replies: 13
- Views: 3809
Re: Sprites with different poses as well as expressions?
I'm drawing a new pose for every expression and every time a character holds an important object. Some characters also have younger versions or different outfits (with a new pose) for flashback scenes. I think the biggest problem is keeping the art style consistent. I've drawn over 50 sprites alread...
- Mon Nov 28, 2016 5:01 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: Get that thing off your chest... Now...
- Replies: 5264
- Views: 648484
Re: I'm feeling a little down :(
You said you've been diagnosed with mental disorders. Are you going to therapy or getting help with anger management? I think you should be. You could practise calming yourself down when you start to get angry. You also said you have insecurities. Often people who lash out at others are very insecur...
- Wed Nov 16, 2016 4:00 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Symbolism
- Replies: 16
- Views: 2761
Re: Symbolism
I think the good use of symbolism will happen naturally when the writer really enjoys telling the story for the sake of itself, and doesn't only want to explain some real-world event to the readers. The story should be interesting and meaningful even for readers who don't understand the symbolism. T...
- Tue Nov 08, 2016 12:57 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Creating likeable characters
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2604
Re: Creating likeable characters
Here are some things that I think make characters likable. 1 - Don't show Author Favoritism towards the character. Nothing is more infuriating than the writer making everything too easy for a certain character. Underdogs are easy to sympathize with. The character should have at least as many struggl...
- Wed Oct 26, 2016 3:58 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: [Comedy][Romance][Yandere]Pervert and Yandere-New endings!
- Replies: 34
- Views: 28866
Re: Pervert and Yandere
I read the whole vn except some of the extras. Your writing is very good and also funny in many scenes, for example the pool scene with the queen bee rival. I liked the large amount of internal monologues that Richard had. The narration only rarely seemed to go on for a bit too long. I liked the com...
- Wed Oct 19, 2016 1:19 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: This is going to sound a little odd..
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2689
Re: This is going to sound a little odd..
I've also been writing a visual novel for about three years. I've never been more committed to a project, but I still feel like it's never going to be finished, and if it does, it'll probably turn out to be embarrassingly bad garbage that everyone will hate. That thought hurts, because the story is ...