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by cometgears
Wed Feb 07, 2018 8:49 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Question regarding offering preferred pronouns option for main player character
Replies: 27
Views: 2244

Re: Question regarding offering preferred pronouns option for main player character

I'll give the other opinion, then, and say that if you want to add the option for a player to be referred to with they/them pronouns, why not? I do see the point of not doing it if it's not relevant to the story. If you were trying to have the character tell others to use they/them in a small town i...
by cometgears
Wed Jan 17, 2018 11:30 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Simple english langage question
Replies: 11
Views: 849

Re: Simple english langage question

If I were browsing through titles, this is what my reaction would be: - Breathe through the shadows - Breathe in the dark - A breath in the dark This is just a personal thing, "breathe" and "breath" are awkward-looking words to me, so I'm not a big fan. But the image of someone breathing in the dark...
by cometgears
Fri Jun 09, 2017 9:15 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Ordinary Weapon [GxG] [Comedy, Sci-fi]
Replies: 19
Views: 2665

Re: Ordinary Weapon [GxG] [Comedy, Sci-fi]

1. What are your thoughts so far? Would you like to know more about anything? Sci-fi and the hint about secretly being a weapon of mass destruction is intriguing. I like the art, and the music remix idea also sounds neat. And I like that you're making it so there aren't "right" options. 4. What do ...
by cometgears
Fri Jun 09, 2017 8:35 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: First kiss at a spookie soiree [Lethal cuteness][GxG]
Replies: 7
Views: 3518

Re: First kiss at a spookie soiree [Lethal cuteness][GxG]

This was really cute!

The first ending I got was my favorite :D
YEAH I kissed a tiny moth princess, go me <3
by cometgears
Tue May 16, 2017 7:28 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Cinderella Phenomenon [GxB/Free]
Replies: 66
Views: 28541

Re: Cinderella Phenomenon [GxB/Free]

1. What do you think of the plot? I liked it! Actually, initially, I was having a hard time empathizing with Lucette and wasn't sure I would like the game, but the dreams showing her relationship with her mother gradually won me over. I also really liked the twists for the fairytale curses. I ended...
by cometgears
Mon May 02, 2016 9:19 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: ✿ Ciikos Bridge ✿ [Adventure/Fantasy]
Replies: 21
Views: 8892

Re: ✿ Ciikos Bridge ✿ [Adventure/Fantasy]

The most difficult part for me was making the first trade. I was nervous partly because of something like what Oktolio was suggesting--I thought I was going to have to make specific trades, or figure out exactly what each character needed, or there was going to be a different mechanic/puzzle for eac...
by cometgears
Sat Apr 30, 2016 8:43 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Just Another Day in Paradise [NaNo] [Survival] [Apocalyptic]
Replies: 9
Views: 4174

Re: Just Another Day in Paradise [NaNo] [Survival] [Apocalyp

The combat was pretty intense! I liked how interactive it felt. I only played through one ending, but I was amazingly relieved when I didn't die. I was most curious about Charlotte at first, so I went with her stuff for my playthrough. But Ethan also seems interesting, so I'll definitely be trying t...
by cometgears
Sat Apr 30, 2016 8:30 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: ✿ Ciikos Bridge ✿ [Adventure/Fantasy]
Replies: 21
Views: 8892

Re: ✿ Ciikos Bridge ✿ [Adventure/Fantasy]

Everything about this was really cute. The art, colors, and the music and sound effects set the atmosphere well. I liked meeting all the characters! And I enjoyed Taku's upbeat personality. The trading also made me a little nervous at first because I thought I was going to mess it up and give out th...
by cometgears
Fri Apr 29, 2016 10:20 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Hierofanía 2: Final Demo ---
Replies: 6
Views: 1259

Re: Hierofanía 2: Final Demo ---

I greatly enjoyed the first Hierofanía. I haven't been looking at any VN stuff for the past few months, so I just saw this now. And I thought it was amazing! I love how it expands the world. And the art! The backgrounds in particular are beautiful. And the main menu is one of my favorites. I tried a...
by cometgears
Sun Jun 14, 2015 4:34 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: A retelling of the Frog Prince
Replies: 25
Views: 7511

Re: A retelling of the Frog Prince

Very cute art. I loved the animations! You used a lot of the effects in a great way. It was a nice retelling of the story.
by cometgears
Thu Jun 11, 2015 10:42 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Censor [Dystopian/SF - English, German]
Replies: 24
Views: 11689

Re: The Censor [Dystopian/SF]

This was really impressive. I played it through twice and got two different endings... and then I was going to do other things but instead I repeated it a few more times until I got all the endings. I'm still a little confused about the RootPro part of the game. Does your censoring have an effect, o...
by cometgears
Thu Jun 11, 2015 5:46 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: My Cup of Coffee [Romantic Investigative Interview] (FREE!!)
Replies: 22
Views: 15214

Re: My Cup of Coffee [Romance][Slice of Life][Conversational

I didn't know what to expect from this, but I really enjoyed it. I'm glad you added the music and sound effects; it was a big part of the atmosphere for me. The first time I played through, I only found a few secrets, then tried again and got a few more and got a different ending--the gameplay was q...
by cometgears
Tue Mar 03, 2015 10:00 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: ► Lock + Key ◀ [Surreal/Horror] [NaNo2015]
Replies: 20
Views: 4284

Re: ► Lock + Key ◀ [Surreal/Horror] [NaNo2015]

Ohh, I'm usually too wimpy for horror, but I think I'll have to make an exception for this because I love the art! Why is the creepy guy commenting about my eyes, though D: Looking forward to seeing more!
by cometgears
Mon Jan 12, 2015 10:52 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Seven Kingdoms [GxB/G] [Fantasy, Politics, Rom] (Greenlit)
Replies: 254
Views: 70965

Re: ~(DEMO!)~ Seven Kingdoms [GxB/G] [Fantasy, Rom, Politics

I loved the demo! Can't wait until you finish the game. What is your favorite background so far? The daughter of a pirate was the first one I played, and probably my favorite, but I'm also intrigued by the tomboy Countess. I still like hearing about your favorite characters~ I have so many favorites...
by cometgears
Thu Oct 16, 2014 2:22 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Her Dolls - A Short Demo
Replies: 9
Views: 2142

Re: Her Dolls - A Short Demo

I have to echo what others said about the difficulty reading the gray dialog text. And somewhat with the white text, since the textbox has the lighter gradient on the bottom, it does get a little dicey if the text goes past the second line. And it is only a short demo so there wasn't time to find ou...