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- Sun Aug 03, 2014 8:25 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Need some constructive criticism
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Re: Need some constructive criticism
I can kindof see what you are saying about Infinity being a bit trite but thats kind of what i wanted him to be.Infinity is supposed to be an over the top character. Yes , Custer is intended to be an idiot (at least for now). I intended for the main char to be a bit pessimistic and anti social but m...
- Sat Aug 02, 2014 8:01 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Need some constructive criticism
- Replies: 3
- Views: 547
Need some constructive criticism
I'm planning on making a visual novel called 2020: The revolution. I wrote this in a normal kindof way and not a visual novel kindof way but i would love to hear constructive criticism. Yes , before someone says anything this is partially inspired by code geass but not a fanfiction or anything like ...