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by hydroninja9
Sun Aug 03, 2014 8:25 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Need some constructive criticism
Replies: 3
Views: 547

Re: Need some constructive criticism

I can kindof see what you are saying about Infinity being a bit trite but thats kind of what i wanted him to be.Infinity is supposed to be an over the top character. Yes , Custer is intended to be an idiot (at least for now). I intended for the main char to be a bit pessimistic and anti social but m...
by hydroninja9
Sat Aug 02, 2014 8:01 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Need some constructive criticism
Replies: 3
Views: 547

Need some constructive criticism

I'm planning on making a visual novel called 2020: The revolution. I wrote this in a normal kindof way and not a visual novel kindof way but i would love to hear constructive criticism. Yes , before someone says anything this is partially inspired by code geass but not a fanfiction or anything like ...