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by baabaa
Wed Jan 07, 2015 10:03 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Coming of Age VN (title under construction)
Replies: 10
Views: 1879

Re: High School Story (title under construction) [Comedy]

Sounds fun! ^^ To answer you questions, 1) I don't prefer one over the other. (: 2) Definitely not! In fact, I would enjoy it more. 3) I can see this with a more unique art style but that's just my own preference. 4) Honestly, I don't expect a lot. The characters sound pretty interesting, but the pl...
by baabaa
Mon Jan 05, 2015 9:46 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Creating Unique Characters
Replies: 11
Views: 1693

Re: Creating Unique Characters

Thank you both so much for your inputs! I was worried that my characters were too stereotypical on the surface, but I'm definitely going to think about what you both said and flesh out my characters.
by baabaa
Mon Jan 05, 2015 11:18 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Creating Unique Characters
Replies: 11
Views: 1693

Creating Unique Characters

I'm in a predicament. What does one do when they have created somewhat stereotypical characters? An arrogant prince, a stoic gentleman, a kind best friend - I find myself dealing with characters which have been done time and time again! What would you do to make these characters more unique and orig...
by baabaa
Sun Jan 04, 2015 8:54 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Is my writing style or writing worth reading? (Advice)
Replies: 5
Views: 796

Re: Is my writing style or writing worth reading? (Advice)

I have a question how many words should there be for the prologue and chapters .. I want to do a mobile game so I now that there are a lot a chapters so I want to know how many words in that case. For a mobile game, I would definitely say at least 1k words per chapter and maybe 2-3k max, depending ...
by baabaa
Sun Jan 04, 2015 7:29 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Is my writing style or writing worth reading? (Advice)
Replies: 5
Views: 796

Re: Is my writing style or writing worth reading? (Advice)

Hi! I haven't made a VN but I've been playing them for quite a while, and I'm a writer myself. First off, VN are usually written in a first person perspective so if you can adapt your writing to have it be a first person narrative, then that's the first step. You write well but it all seemed very ru...
by baabaa
Sat Jan 03, 2015 8:37 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: (dropped)
Replies: 46
Views: 7338

Re: Fatal Crescendo [KN] [Comedy/Modern Fantasy]

The chat feature sounds like a lot of fun!
by baabaa
Sat Jan 03, 2015 4:25 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Robotic Tears[Post-Apocalyptic Cyberpunk Survival][GxG][GxB]
Replies: 8
Views: 2244

Re: Robotic Tears[Post-Apocalyptic Cyberpunk Survival][GxG][

oooh Erika looks good! Is the art going to look like that or will it be more anime-esque? (there's probably another term I could use but as of right now I am blank). If so, I really like it. I think it looks pretty unique and seems fitting from what I've read.
by baabaa
Fri Jan 02, 2015 3:41 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cavaliers & Carnivals [KN][fantasy/adventure]
Replies: 79
Views: 19952

Re: Cavaliers & Carnivals [KN][fantasy/adventure, friendship

I'm really excited about this! It looks & sounds brilliant. I'm going to keep an eye on this ^^
by baabaa
Fri Jan 02, 2015 2:13 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Robotic Tears[Post-Apocalyptic Cyberpunk Survival][GxG][GxB]
Replies: 8
Views: 2244

Re: Robotic Tears[Post-Apocalyptic Cyberpunk Survival][GxG][

Although I was ever so slightly confused, the whole premise sounds interesting. I'm excited to see more progress. I'll be keeping an eye on this.
by baabaa
Thu Jan 01, 2015 8:13 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!
Replies: 116
Views: 35335

Re: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!

I remember playing the demo a while ago and I spent so much time trying to find this thread as this is probably the VN I'm looking most forward to, as of right now. I'm very excited to see how this develops. As for the GxG routes & the H scenes, as long as they are well written and are with reason (...
by baabaa
Thu Jan 01, 2015 8:03 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: (dropped)
Replies: 46
Views: 7338

Re: Fatal Crescendo [KN] [Comedy/Modern Fantasy]

Sounds interesting & the art looks good too! I'm definitely going to keep my eye on this. c:
by baabaa
Thu Jan 01, 2015 12:58 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: At Your Service: Writer/Proofreader [CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE]
Replies: 2
Views: 684

Re: At Your Service: Writer/Proofreader [Free/Paid]

Mad Harlequin wrote:From one writer to another: "gun point" should be "gunpoint."

Welcome, Michelle!
Thanks for the correction & the welcome!
by baabaa
Thu Jan 01, 2015 11:52 am
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: At Your Service: Writer/Proofreader [CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE]
Replies: 2
Views: 684

At Your Service: Writer/Proofreader [CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE]

Hi! My name is Michelle and although I'm fairly new to the Lemma Soft Forums, I thought I could help out some people by offering my services, as well as gain some new writing experiences. As the topic title suggests, I'm offering my services as a writer and proofreader. Although I have never written...
by baabaa
Thu Jan 01, 2015 7:37 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Happy New Year! Tell us about your upcoming 2015 Projects!
Replies: 31
Views: 3249

Re: Happy New Year! Tell us about your upcoming 2015 Project

Happy New Year!!

Well, I plan on working on a dystopian future, clone otome VN this year. I hope to develop a team and be able to turn an idea into reality. As well as that, I want to work on some smaller, shorter VNs and familiarise myself with Ren'py.
by baabaa
Sun Dec 07, 2014 8:02 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Ideas Dump
Replies: 1532
Views: 162641

Re: Ideas Dump

humans are basically needing most parts of their body replaced There's still no reason for them to be conscious beings (that can get dangerous) Actually it all comes to the motives behind her human owner actions (I can see her being educated / getting 'cloned' knowledge because that human decides s...