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- Wed Jan 07, 2015 10:03 pm
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Coming of Age VN (title under construction)
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2194
Re: High School Story (title under construction) [Comedy]
Sounds fun! ^^ To answer you questions, 1) I don't prefer one over the other. (: 2) Definitely not! In fact, I would enjoy it more. 3) I can see this with a more unique art style but that's just my own preference. 4) Honestly, I don't expect a lot. The characters sound pretty interesting, but the pl...
- Mon Jan 05, 2015 9:46 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Creating Unique Characters
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2148
Re: Creating Unique Characters
Thank you both so much for your inputs! I was worried that my characters were too stereotypical on the surface, but I'm definitely going to think about what you both said and flesh out my characters.
- Mon Jan 05, 2015 11:18 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Creating Unique Characters
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2148
Creating Unique Characters
I'm in a predicament. What does one do when they have created somewhat stereotypical characters? An arrogant prince, a stoic gentleman, a kind best friend - I find myself dealing with characters which have been done time and time again! What would you do to make these characters more unique and orig...
- Sun Jan 04, 2015 8:54 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Is my writing style or writing worth reading? (Advice)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 970
Re: Is my writing style or writing worth reading? (Advice)
I have a question how many words should there be for the prologue and chapters .. I want to do a mobile game so I now that there are a lot a chapters so I want to know how many words in that case. For a mobile game, I would definitely say at least 1k words per chapter and maybe 2-3k max, depending ...
- Sun Jan 04, 2015 7:29 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Is my writing style or writing worth reading? (Advice)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 970
Re: Is my writing style or writing worth reading? (Advice)
Hi! I haven't made a VN but I've been playing them for quite a while, and I'm a writer myself. First off, VN are usually written in a first person perspective so if you can adapt your writing to have it be a first person narrative, then that's the first step. You write well but it all seemed very ru...
- Sat Jan 03, 2015 8:37 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: (dropped)
- Replies: 46
- Views: 9302
Re: Fatal Crescendo [KN] [Comedy/Modern Fantasy]
The chat feature sounds like a lot of fun!
- Sat Jan 03, 2015 4:25 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Robotic Tears[Post-Apocalyptic Cyberpunk Survival][GxG][GxB]
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2656
Re: Robotic Tears[Post-Apocalyptic Cyberpunk Survival][GxG][
oooh Erika looks good! Is the art going to look like that or will it be more anime-esque? (there's probably another term I could use but as of right now I am blank). If so, I really like it. I think it looks pretty unique and seems fitting from what I've read.
- Fri Jan 02, 2015 3:41 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Cavaliers & Carnivals [KN][fantasy/adventure]
- Replies: 79
- Views: 31372
Re: Cavaliers & Carnivals [KN][fantasy/adventure, friendship
I'm really excited about this! It looks & sounds brilliant. I'm going to keep an eye on this ^^
- Fri Jan 02, 2015 2:13 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Robotic Tears[Post-Apocalyptic Cyberpunk Survival][GxG][GxB]
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2656
Re: Robotic Tears[Post-Apocalyptic Cyberpunk Survival][GxG][
Although I was ever so slightly confused, the whole premise sounds interesting. I'm excited to see more progress. I'll be keeping an eye on this.
- Thu Jan 01, 2015 8:13 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!
- Replies: 117
- Views: 49013
Re: Essence [post-apocalyptic GxB] [scifi/dramedy] DEMO UP!
I remember playing the demo a while ago and I spent so much time trying to find this thread as this is probably the VN I'm looking most forward to, as of right now. I'm very excited to see how this develops. As for the GxG routes & the H scenes, as long as they are well written and are with reas...
- Thu Jan 01, 2015 8:03 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: (dropped)
- Replies: 46
- Views: 9302
Re: Fatal Crescendo [KN] [Comedy/Modern Fantasy]
Sounds interesting & the art looks good too! I'm definitely going to keep my eye on this. c:
- Thu Jan 01, 2015 12:58 pm
- Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
- Topic: At Your Service: Writer/Proofreader [CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE]
- Replies: 2
- Views: 824
Re: At Your Service: Writer/Proofreader [Free/Paid]
Thanks for the correction & the welcome!Mad Harlequin wrote:From one writer to another: "gun point" should be "gunpoint."
Welcome, Michelle!
- Thu Jan 01, 2015 11:52 am
- Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
- Topic: At Your Service: Writer/Proofreader [CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE]
- Replies: 2
- Views: 824
At Your Service: Writer/Proofreader [CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE]
Hi! My name is Michelle and although I'm fairly new to the Lemma Soft Forums, I thought I could help out some people by offering my services, as well as gain some new writing experiences. As the topic title suggests, I'm offering my services as a writer and proofreader. Although I have never written...
- Thu Jan 01, 2015 7:37 am
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Happy New Year! Tell us about your upcoming 2015 Projects!
- Replies: 31
- Views: 4190
Re: Happy New Year! Tell us about your upcoming 2015 Project
Happy New Year!!
Well, I plan on working on a dystopian future, clone otome VN this year. I hope to develop a team and be able to turn an idea into reality. As well as that, I want to work on some smaller, shorter VNs and familiarise myself with Ren'py.
Well, I plan on working on a dystopian future, clone otome VN this year. I hope to develop a team and be able to turn an idea into reality. As well as that, I want to work on some smaller, shorter VNs and familiarise myself with Ren'py.
- Sun Dec 07, 2014 8:02 pm
- Forum: Creator Discussion
- Topic: Ideas Dump
- Replies: 1532
- Views: 218380
Re: Ideas Dump
humans are basically needing most parts of their body replaced There's still no reason for them to be conscious beings (that can get dangerous) Actually it all comes to the motives behind her human owner actions (I can see her being educated / getting 'cloned' knowledge because that human decides s...