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by theSardonyx
Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:45 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Doppelganger : Dawn of the Inverted Soul [Guide up]
Replies: 561
Views: 171864

Re: Doppelganger : Dawn of the Inverted Soul [Guide up]

Yay for walkthroughs.! I've only gotten 12 endings so far, so this would be a big help. :D Great game. There were times when I got too carried away and that's great, because that means the game was able to touch my emotional side, which, I can tell you, doesn't happen often. (Lee, you arschloch.!) :...
by theSardonyx
Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:35 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [Drama][Sci-fi] ERASER-demo (PC+Android)
Replies: 40
Views: 10803

Re: [Drama][Sci-fi] ERASER-demo (PC+Android)

Finally got to download this and played it two days ago. First off, once again, the menu screen was pretty. And the music was enthralling. Very nice. About the story line, okay, it's pretty interesting. Nice build-up and stuff. Freaking cliffy, btw. I noticed some grammatical errors, but I already f...
by theSardonyx
Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:15 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: [NaNoRenO] Letters for You [KN]
Replies: 26
Views: 11120

Re: [NaNoRenO] Letters for You [KN]

The link doesn't work anymore. Awwwww...

(Pssst. Paayos nung link, pls. *puppy eyes*)
by theSardonyx
Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:33 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: SunfiLia [Fantasy][Otome][School Life][Friendship][Romance]
Replies: 25
Views: 5764

Re: SunfiLia [Fantasy][Otome][School Life][Friendship][Roman

Premise is... alright. I want to know why she knows the magic world exists though. Apart from that, it's fine, I suppose. It should attract those who like romance with supernatural elements. I think the art is fine. (Although I'm not stopping you if you want to improve it during the making.) Fluffy ...
by theSardonyx
Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:52 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Autumn's Journey [Fantasy][Friendship][Otome] +artbook
Replies: 118
Views: 65324

Re: Autumn's Journey [Fantasy][Friendship][Otome] +artbook

Awesome art plus interesting story line. What more can I ask for?

I loved the chibis, btw. They're really cute. :D
by theSardonyx
Mon Sep 01, 2014 2:20 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: The last book you read or what are you reading right now?
Replies: 184
Views: 19487

Re: The last book you read or what are you reading right now

Currently halfway through "A Viking Voyage". It's about a group of men who retraced Leif the Lucky's route to Canada in a replica of a Viking boat. The author sometimes goes into a tangent, talking about unimportant things (like his dog dying), but it's pretty cool knowing about his experiences with...
by theSardonyx
Mon Sep 01, 2014 12:32 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Pizz'Amore [Short Romantic Comedy] [GxB/BxG/GxG/BxB] (Free)
Replies: 25
Views: 27637

Re: Pizz'Amore [Short Romantic Comedy] [GxB/BxG/GxG/BxB] (Fr

Played this yesterday. Pretty fast paced, but pretty hilarious. I liked Mario's voice. "I... MUST... MAKE... A PIZZA!"

Plus, the Cute!Dough route made me giggle a lot. My mom kept looking at me like I've gone cuckoo. Great job.! :D
by theSardonyx
Sun Aug 31, 2014 7:46 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Four ways to write a great story
Replies: 18
Views: 3569

Re: Four ways to write a great story

I'm an outliner, through and through! Generally, when I start a story, I'll have a document with world/character planning, which covers all details I think I'll need to incorporate into the writing (and some to spare as well, mostly so I can add flavour) as well as a document with a scene-by-scene ...
by theSardonyx
Sun Aug 31, 2014 7:21 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Beyond The Boundary, Chapter I [short KN] [mystery]
Replies: 10
Views: 6983

Re: Beyond The Boundary, Chapter I [short KN] [mystery]

While the concept is interesting, I think the writing is a bit awkward, which is understandable since English isn't your native tongue. The narrator didn't sound like a college student. His little brother also talked a bit robotically. Maybe you should try watching some teen shows in English to get...
by theSardonyx
Fri Aug 22, 2014 1:34 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Left of Center [Comedy, Friendship, BxB/BxG, NaNo13]
Replies: 58
Views: 30035

Re: Left of Center [Comedy, Friendship, BxB/BxG, NaNo13]

This is, perhaps, one of the cutest things I've ever read.
Especially Santa's route. ^_^
Waiting for the time when this is finally going to have more endings. I want to see how things would go, as far as relationships are concerned.

P.S. Klaus is adorable. I love him. :P
by theSardonyx
Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:57 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Super effective writing tips from Pixar
Replies: 34
Views: 4540

Re: Super effective writing tips from Pixar

I guess it also differs mostly on the person. Regarding the debate between writing as you go and having an actual ending in mind, I just wanted to put my opinion in. Although I don't have a completed Visual Novel on here yet, I have written some screenplays, original stories and fanfics. One of the ...
by theSardonyx
Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:25 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Ellipses Use
Replies: 28
Views: 2999

Re: Ellipses Use

Personally I would use "........." to denote silence or pause in an ongoing conversation that's viewed from a neutral third person. This way, no one is inside anyone's head. Descriptions are observations, after all. A descriptive viewpoint would be first person, or omniscient. Yuna: "Let's go see t...
by theSardonyx
Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:07 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: The Curse of Unusual Yet Significant Names
Replies: 9
Views: 1436

Re: The Curse of Unusual Yet Significant Names

...but even if there are the same names, there can always be shared names that are still distinguishable from the famous bearers. Take it as a challenge to get people to get rid of any preconception the name might hold, in a sense, beat the other name. :twisted: This seems like the same kind of pro...
by theSardonyx
Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:35 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Past vs Present. Which one?
Replies: 18
Views: 1836

Re: Past vs Present. Which one?

For me, I feel if the story is being told to me, past tense is good. However if I'm taking the role of the player (or there are choices that we make) I tend to like present as it makes me feel as if I'm in the action and my choices have consequence. I agree with this. If the story relies more on ex...
by theSardonyx
Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:17 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [Drama][Sci-fi] ERASER-demo (PC+Android)
Replies: 40
Views: 10803

Re: [Drama][Sci-fi] ERASER-demo (PC+Android)

The story looks interesting. And that Menu Screen is pretty.

Downloading when the connection's fast. :P