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- Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:45 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Doppelganger : Dawn of the Inverted Soul [Guide up]
- Replies: 562
- Views: 200579
Re: Doppelganger : Dawn of the Inverted Soul [Guide up]
Yay for walkthroughs.! I've only gotten 12 endings so far, so this would be a big help. :D Great game. There were times when I got too carried away and that's great, because that means the game was able to touch my emotional side, which, I can tell you, doesn't happen often. (Lee, you arschloch.!) :...
- Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:35 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: [Drama][Sci-fi] ERASER-demo (PC+Android)
- Replies: 40
- Views: 13112
Re: [Drama][Sci-fi] ERASER-demo (PC+Android)
Finally got to download this and played it two days ago. First off, once again, the menu screen was pretty. And the music was enthralling. Very nice. About the story line, okay, it's pretty interesting. Nice build-up and stuff. Freaking cliffy, btw. I noticed some grammatical errors, but I already f...
- Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:15 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: [NaNoRenO] Letters for You [KN]
- Replies: 27
- Views: 14356
Re: [NaNoRenO] Letters for You [KN]
The link doesn't work anymore. Awwwww...
(Pssst. Paayos nung link, pls. *puppy eyes*)
(Pssst. Paayos nung link, pls. *puppy eyes*)
- Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:33 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: SunfiLia [Fantasy][Otome][School Life][Friendship][Romance]
- Replies: 25
- Views: 7989
Re: SunfiLia [Fantasy][Otome][School Life][Friendship][Roman
Premise is... alright. I want to know why she knows the magic world exists though. Apart from that, it's fine, I suppose. It should attract those who like romance with supernatural elements. I think the art is fine. (Although I'm not stopping you if you want to improve it during the making.) Fluffy ...
- Fri Sep 26, 2014 12:52 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Autumn's Journey [Fantasy][Friendship][Otome] +artbook
- Replies: 118
- Views: 77740
Re: Autumn's Journey [Fantasy][Friendship][Otome] +artbook
Awesome art plus interesting story line. What more can I ask for?
I loved the chibis, btw. They're really cute.
I loved the chibis, btw. They're really cute.
- Mon Sep 01, 2014 2:20 am
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: The last book you read or what are you reading right now?
- Replies: 184
- Views: 151677
Re: The last book you read or what are you reading right now
Currently halfway through "A Viking Voyage". It's about a group of men who retraced Leif the Lucky's route to Canada in a replica of a Viking boat. The author sometimes goes into a tangent, talking about unimportant things (like his dog dying), but it's pretty cool knowing about his experi...
- Mon Sep 01, 2014 12:32 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Pizz'Amore [Short Romantic Comedy] [GxB/BxG/GxG/BxB] (Free)
- Replies: 25
- Views: 34772
Re: Pizz'Amore [Short Romantic Comedy] [GxB/BxG/GxG/BxB] (Fr
Played this yesterday. Pretty fast paced, but pretty hilarious. I liked Mario's voice. "I... MUST... MAKE... A PIZZA!"
Plus, the Cute!Dough route made me giggle a lot. My mom kept looking at me like I've gone cuckoo. Great job.!
Plus, the Cute!Dough route made me giggle a lot. My mom kept looking at me like I've gone cuckoo. Great job.!
- Sun Aug 31, 2014 7:46 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Four ways to write a great story
- Replies: 18
- Views: 5560
Re: Four ways to write a great story
I'm an outliner, through and through! Generally, when I start a story, I'll have a document with world/character planning, which covers all details I think I'll need to incorporate into the writing (and some to spare as well, mostly so I can add flavour) as well as a document with a scene-by-scene ...
- Sun Aug 31, 2014 7:21 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Beyond The Boundary, Chapter I [short KN] [mystery]
- Replies: 10
- Views: 10296
Re: Beyond The Boundary, Chapter I [short KN] [mystery]
While the concept is interesting, I think the writing is a bit awkward, which is understandable since English isn't your native tongue. The narrator didn't sound like a college student. His little brother also talked a bit robotically. Maybe you should try watching some teen shows in English to get...
- Fri Aug 22, 2014 1:34 am
- Forum: Completed Games
- Topic: Left of Center [Comedy, Friendship, BxB/BxG, NaNo13]
- Replies: 58
- Views: 35428
Re: Left of Center [Comedy, Friendship, BxB/BxG, NaNo13]
This is, perhaps, one of the cutest things I've ever read.
P.S. Klaus is adorable. I love him.
Especially Santa's route. ^_^
Waiting for the time when this is finally going to have more endings. I want to see how things would go, as far as relationships are concerned.P.S. Klaus is adorable. I love him.
- Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:57 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Super effective writing tips from Pixar
- Replies: 34
- Views: 5977
Re: Super effective writing tips from Pixar
I guess it also differs mostly on the person. Regarding the debate between writing as you go and having an actual ending in mind, I just wanted to put my opinion in. Although I don't have a completed Visual Novel on here yet, I have written some screenplays, original stories and fanfics. One of the ...
- Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:25 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Ellipses Use
- Replies: 28
- Views: 4180
Re: Ellipses Use
Personally I would use "........." to denote silence or pause in an ongoing conversation that's viewed from a neutral third person. This way, no one is inside anyone's head. Descriptions are observations, after all. A descriptive viewpoint would be first person, or omniscient. Yuna: "...
- Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:07 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: The Curse of Unusual Yet Significant Names
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1918
Re: The Curse of Unusual Yet Significant Names
...but even if there are the same names, there can always be shared names that are still distinguishable from the famous bearers. Take it as a challenge to get people to get rid of any preconception the name might hold, in a sense, beat the other name. :twisted: This seems like the same kind of pro...
- Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:35 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Past vs Present. Which one?
- Replies: 18
- Views: 2372
Re: Past vs Present. Which one?
For me, I feel if the story is being told to me, past tense is good. However if I'm taking the role of the player (or there are choices that we make) I tend to like present as it makes me feel as if I'm in the action and my choices have consequence. I agree with this. If the story relies more on ex...
- Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:17 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: [Drama][Sci-fi] ERASER-demo (PC+Android)
- Replies: 40
- Views: 13112
Re: [Drama][Sci-fi] ERASER-demo (PC+Android)
The story looks interesting. And that Menu Screen is pretty.
Downloading when the connection's fast.
Downloading when the connection's fast.