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by SeaOtter
Sat Sep 10, 2016 2:54 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Dandelion Girl: Don't You Remember Me?
Replies: 4
Views: 5386

Re: The Dandelion Girl: Don't You Remember Me?

Hello, I followed the link and have so far been unsuccessful in extracting the .rar file. I don't know whether its just my incompetency or some sort of download failure or what. I am looking forward to reading your work, though, so I encourage you to re-re-release the game. Also: I read the short st...
by SeaOtter
Sat Aug 27, 2016 4:30 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Voeux [Mystery, Supernatural, Dark | PWYW/Free]
Replies: 7
Views: 2926

Re: Voeux [Mystery, Supernatural, Dark | PWYW/Free]

This is quite good. I am not a fan of supernatural themes and contrived settings (an abandoned carnival filled with select characters) but the mystery and atmosphere compensated for that many times over. I have only 'finished' one ending (Abdul catching me) and so far, I feel there is still very muc...
by SeaOtter
Sun Jul 17, 2016 5:28 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: I think my head is Darkness - (Dystopia, Psychological)
Replies: 17
Views: 9414

Re: I think my head is Darkness - (Dystopia, Psychological)

Just to add on to my previous post. I just reread the last line of the ending I got and still, even now, have a sense of ambiguity. Is it I, as the player, or the protagonist, Rachel, that is doing that final action? At first, I thought it was the protagonist but now as I look at it more, it could a...
by SeaOtter
Sun Jul 17, 2016 5:17 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: I think my head is Darkness - (Dystopia, Psychological)
Replies: 17
Views: 9414

Re: I think my head is Darkness - (Dystopia, Psychological)

Hey there. I just finished one ending of your game. It was extremely satisfying. Your writing was quite on point. The relationship between the player and the narrator (Rachel, I believe?) is interesting. I think it would have been very easy to paint Rachel as some sort of mentally unstable, morbid f...
by SeaOtter
Fri Jul 15, 2016 5:51 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Dejection: An Ode [KN, one-sided GxG, historical]
Replies: 20
Views: 12212

Re: Dejection: An Ode [KN, one-sided GxG, historical]

Hello I just read through your visual novel. Its was actually quite enjoyable. I say this with hesitation because the 'conclusion' wasn't very fulfilling at all to me. Given that we spent so much of the novel empathizing with Sam, it felt rather defeating to .. well, you know. But after reading your...
by SeaOtter
Tue Jul 05, 2016 9:59 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Mocboth
Replies: 3
Views: 2373

Re: Mocboth

Hopefully this doesn't come out as discouraging but I didn't like the game too much. Macbeth is cool but the dialogue and plot you made is really crude. I appreciate the fact that you finished the prophecies and wrapped up the story, though. The conclusion and author notes were fitting. Favourite pa...
by SeaOtter
Thu May 26, 2016 8:06 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Dreamweaver [NaNoRenO 2016]
Replies: 12
Views: 5594

Re: The Dreamweaver [NaNoRenO 2016]

I very much enjoyed this. Very very much. I think you know how awesome you did so I won't bother with going over the details. The art, the music, the dialogue-- all very fitting for the story. Some may say the characters and the ideas are not fleshed out-- that they are archetypes-- but that makes i...
by SeaOtter
Thu May 26, 2016 7:03 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Round the Mulberry Bush [BxG, despair]
Replies: 5
Views: 3116

Re: Round the Mulberry Bush [BxG, despair]

I don't read kinetic novels very often so my opinion may be a bit skewed but overall, I feel there was something to be desired. I'm not very critical of the art or the music or the UI (all very smooth and lovely!) but as I got hooked into the story, there was a growing sense of ... narrowness? I sup...
by SeaOtter
Fri Apr 08, 2016 6:25 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Colours;Said[NaNoRenO 2016]
Replies: 3
Views: 2893

Re: Colours;Said[NaNoRenO 2016]

I have to agree with BrightWings completely on the art. Very surreal. I don't think I'm enough of a fan of the style to say "splendid" but it was very unique (which always is refreshing). And Elise's sprite was very unsettling. I mean, I was taken back when she appeared on screen ... but then follow...
by SeaOtter
Fri Apr 08, 2016 5:28 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Connection Pools [Sci-Fi / Fantasy][NaNo16]
Replies: 16
Views: 5228

Re: Connection Pools [Sci-Fi / Fantasy][NaNo16]

Just logged on to say that I like this game. It's a bit unorthodox. That's always cool. Although I feel the beginning was a bit shaky (I don't know how to describe it ... unnecessarily rushed?) the latter half of the game was somehow really compelling for me. Part of it was the audio. Part of it was...
by SeaOtter
Mon Oct 27, 2014 12:40 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Dual NVL-AVD Mode?
Replies: 2
Views: 906

Re: Dual NVL-AVD Mode?

Woo, it worked! You're brilliant :33
by SeaOtter
Sun Oct 26, 2014 1:14 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Dual NVL-AVD Mode?
Replies: 2
Views: 906

Dual NVL-AVD Mode?

Ello all! I've been tinkering with renpy for some time and am really struggling with design. It's terribly difficult. I've been aiming for a specific dialogue layout so that there can be two textboxes on the screen at the same time. Both have different styles and either one or both of them need to b...