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by raistlintg
Fri Jul 10, 2015 6:16 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Silver [Army][Drama][Kinetic Novel] // Big update !
Replies: 9
Views: 1829

Re: Silver [Army][Drama][Slice of Life]

http://i1375.photobucket.com/albums/ag477/raistlintg/ZZZ_zps9myrojo3.png~original Hi ! Thank you so much Darkrchaos and Sugarberry ! Sorry I didn't answer sooner, but I had decided to "disappear" and concentrate on setting the bar a little higher. I would NEVER have thought someone else would comme...
by raistlintg
Sun Dec 28, 2014 6:05 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Secret Santa 2014
Replies: 128
Views: 11189

Re: Secret Santa 2014

Hey, happy holidays to everyone ! Thank you for your present, Mithrilda !! It's funny you chose to show this in the logo, that's an interesting new perspective. And thank you Caveat for everything ! Then, I'm CSV's SS. Sorry if I'm late, I couldn't use a computer this week. My gift isn't really wort...
by raistlintg
Wed Dec 17, 2014 5:22 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Millia -The ending- (Demo)
Replies: 11
Views: 1851

Re: Millia -The ending- (Demo)

Very nice :) Since you are ambitious, I'll point out some litlle problems (in my opinion) : - Do you have an estimation of the number of words ? Number of endings ? - The natural BGs are really pleasant, but the city BGs seem a little less good, especially this house at the middle with the orange ro...
by raistlintg
Wed Dec 17, 2014 5:06 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Dealing with criticism (aspiring VN creator)
Replies: 35
Views: 2985

Re: Dealing with criticism (aspiring VN creator)

This all becomes irrelevant if you don't care. We aren't goingg to change the world, but we can at least choose what to react to. But if you "don't care", why do you show your work in the first place ? Of course we must differentiate constructive criticism and nasty remarks, and not let them touch ...
by raistlintg
Tue Dec 16, 2014 10:58 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Adult Content in VN's - Is it needed? | Opinion gathering
Replies: 21
Views: 2587

Re: Adult Content in VN's - Is it needed? | Opinion gatherin

--> RotGtIE You're so right ! Of course, artificially adding a violent or sexual scene which has nothing to do with the plot is stupid, but you shouldn't hide things either. The question is : what is happening in your story ? If I was the main character, what would I see ? I wouldn't say the same th...
by raistlintg
Tue Dec 16, 2014 10:30 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What are you listening to while you write?
Replies: 116
Views: 12474

Re: What are you listening to while you write?

That changes a lot, but always OSTs.
Recently, I listen to Last Unicorn and Rewrite's OSTs a lot.
Hatsune Miku for a lighter tone.
by raistlintg
Tue Dec 16, 2014 10:23 am
Forum: Creative Commons
Topic: Text boxes
Replies: 1
Views: 1545

Re: Text boxes

These are very nice, especially the leather aspect.
Very courteous of you to share !
by raistlintg
Wed Dec 10, 2014 11:57 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Dealing with criticism (aspiring VN creator)
Replies: 35
Views: 2985

Re: Dealing with destructive criticism (aspiring VN creator)

Nobody wants to see screenshots of characters saying "..." or "Hi." Funny, this is exactly one of my (many many) mistakes. Champignonkinoko, you should see a criticism as something which can't be destructive. Why ? Because it's aimed not at you, but at your work, something that can be done and redo...
by raistlintg
Wed Dec 10, 2014 11:40 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Art critique please!
Replies: 17
Views: 1937

Re: Art critique please!

I'll try to help with my limited abilities. Question 3 : maybe some of the lines need to be more strongly drawn ? That could add some contrast and dynamism. That might also help with Question 1. Also, about Question 1, aren't saturation and brightness a little too similar between characters and back...
by raistlintg
Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:24 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Eisenblumen(name might change later) [ADV | WWII | Drama]
Replies: 6
Views: 1512

Re: Eisenblumen(name might change later) [ADV | WWII | Drama

I'm probably working on these short first because they are short.
Good idea.
You first question was "is the project too ambitious ?"
Maybe you could use these short stories as a first game, some sort of introduction to the universe.
by raistlintg
Sun Dec 07, 2014 2:17 pm
Forum: Anime, Games, and Japan
Topic: Do you play as same or opposite gender?
Replies: 229
Views: 26400

Re: Do you play as same or opposite gender?

I never choose same gender (male) when I have the choice.
I like stories where the main character is female (e. g. Kokoro's parts in Remember11).
The problem is, there's often some fan-service, which is lame.
by raistlintg
Sun Nov 30, 2014 4:44 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: -
Replies: 5
Views: 3026

Re: ゆとり教育 [Horror, Short Sound Novel] [Japanese, English]

Hi !
Could you clarify something for me ?
The story is about sell-fulfilling prophecies, right ?
"He died after jumping twelve floors, so the curse is real."
It's the same thing as "This is an anti-tiger stone. I never was attacked by a tiger, so it works."
Congratulations on the release.
by raistlintg
Sun Nov 30, 2014 11:31 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: A Stroke of Madness [Mystery/Drama] New Teaser Video Dec 08!
Replies: 21
Views: 5653

Re: A Stroke of Madness [Mystery/Drama]

Hi !! 1) The blue looks just fine and so does the logo. 2) This title screen is perfect, very poetic, don't change anything ! 3) I think you should unlock everything before the true ending. The true ending should be the final memory of the game ! 4) Small cast isn't a problem. Narcissus has a small ...
by raistlintg
Sat Nov 29, 2014 10:37 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Silver [Army][Drama][Kinetic Novel] // Big update !
Replies: 9
Views: 1829

Re: Silver [Army][Drama][Slice of Life]

You're right, it goes on the to-do list ! By the way, I just realized something about the iris form. The fact is, ALL characters have oval iris, but some of them in this post have an expression where their iris is round an reduced (because they're angry, shocked, etc). But the basic iris is oval for...
by raistlintg
Sat Nov 29, 2014 9:57 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Silver [Army][Drama][Kinetic Novel] // Big update !
Replies: 9
Views: 1829

Re: Silver [Army][Drama][Slice of Life]

Thank you Astrokeofmadness. Actually, I worked on Snow and she looks like that now (I put a blue background because of her white hair) I let her head slightly turned, but changed face frame (she's not a blowfish anymore), eyes, mouth, collar. Also, I tried a chest pocket (the one I tried to draw on ...