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by thornbush
Mon Aug 07, 2017 4:48 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: BLACK [Free][Eerie][Horror?][Late NaNo17][18+]
Replies: 19
Views: 6826

Re: BLACK [Free][Eerie][Horror?][Late NaNo17][18+]

The art style and atmosphere in this game was genuinely amazing. I loved the fluidity of the art and the GUI; the user interface was so non-invasive, and it blended seamlessly with the art. It really just felt super immersive and not jarring/obviously text-boxy like most visual novels. Beautiful gam...
by thornbush
Sat Aug 05, 2017 3:15 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chess of Blades [BxB][Mystery][Romance][RELEASED!]
Replies: 82
Views: 14613

Re: Chess of Blades [BxB][Mystery][Romance][DEMO!]

I don't normally play BxB (or BL) games, so I wasn't necessarily expecting to like this, but it was really well-done. Rivian's a great character; he's such a snobbish little prick and I love it. The demo doesn't really build suspense so much as introduce the characters/setting, but I love historical...
by thornbush
Sat Aug 05, 2017 1:26 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Toil and Trouble [Halloween Dating・Potion Creation Sim]
Replies: 72
Views: 8125

Re: Toil and Trouble [Halloween Dating・Potion Creation Sim]

1. What do you think of the game overall? Looks like a really fun idea! I love Halloween and witchcraft and potion-making! 2. Does the gameplay entice you? Yep! 3. Who's your favorite character? I love Muffy because I'm a sucker for vampires and also women, lmao. I really do like Abbadon and Lawrenc...
by thornbush
Fri Aug 04, 2017 1:18 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Plain [Romance/  🕝 Time-Travel 🕦 /GxG/FREE]
Replies: 10
Views: 4610

Re: Plain [Romance/  Time-Travel /GxG/FREE]

Hey, I posted a review on your itch.io page for Plain, but I figure I might as well post one here too! I loved this VN. Like, genuinely, it was awesome. The art was really beautiful, and I enjoyed the creative plot and the diverse characters. There were some typos throughout, but most of the time, t...
by thornbush
Fri Aug 04, 2017 1:06 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: writer / editor / proofreader (open)
Replies: 1
Views: 284

writer / editor / proofreader (open)

Hello! I've played a lot of visual novels before, and I am now offering my services as a writer, editor, proofreader, or, if need be, a brainstormer. I am currently in college studying English literature, so I do not have the freest schedule. For that reason, I would currently prefer to work on smal...
by thornbush
Fri Mar 18, 2016 9:59 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: canceled
Replies: 5
Views: 1293

Re: Freelance Writer/Editor [OPEN]

I edited this post a bit and am again seeking work. :)
by thornbush
Sun Jan 31, 2016 4:48 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: CUPID [Romance/Horror] [FREE] - Valentines Let's Read this Sunday
Replies: 44
Views: 23155

Re: CUPID [Gothic/Romance] [Non-Commercial]

I remember playing the demo for this a while ago, and I just spent hours on end playing the full game. Visually, it was a pleasure to behold. The art was so beautiful I found myself taken aback by some of the CGs, and the costume design (especially Catherine's) was downright gorgeous. What really he...
by thornbush
Mon Dec 07, 2015 10:10 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: canceled
Replies: 5
Views: 1293

Re: Freelance Writer/Editor [OPEN]

I'm back and seeking requests at this time.
by thornbush
Fri Aug 21, 2015 12:03 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Aloners [GxB] (a post-apocalyptic romance)
Replies: 136
Views: 48232

Re: Aloners [GxB] (a post-apocalyptic romance)

This is an absolutely amazing piece of work. The writing is absolutely fantastic; I was immediately immersed into the story, and Trash's character in particular stood out as very realistic and endearing. I love his sprite and how it changed as the story developed. He's just a really cool dude, but h...
by thornbush
Wed Aug 19, 2015 5:09 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cash vs Yandere [Survival|Black Comedy|GxB|GxG] - Up: Horai
Replies: 39
Views: 8603

Re: Cash vs Yandere [Survival|Black Comedy|GxB|GxG] - Up: Ho

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Sobs, I'm already obsessed with this game. Cash's character design is actually amazing. I can't stop laughing at the dollar sign in her hair. Perfect game thank you so much you are my idol pls

(Also RE: Prince of Nigeria was great wow u are great I love u ok)
by thornbush
Wed Aug 19, 2015 4:54 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Afterland [GxG/BxB/GxB][Fantasy, Romance etc]
Replies: 40
Views: 7340

Re: Afterland [GxG/BxB/GxB][Fantasy, Romance etc]

I hope things in real life get sorted out for you! I love the idea of this project. It's definitely very expansive, which is very impressive because I don't see many people attempting to do nearly as much. I also really like how our choices (even our backgrounds) directly affect the game and our pos...
by thornbush
Wed Aug 19, 2015 10:15 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: What concepts are consistent through your writing?
Replies: 17
Views: 1688

Re: What concepts are consistent through your writing?

In terms of specific concepts, most of my stories incorporate freedom vs oppression (or dissatisfaction, lack of fulfillment, etc.) because I think that's always been a struggle in my own life as well as others I see around me. ("Happiness" vs financial reward/security as an incentive to do things y...
by thornbush
Wed Aug 19, 2015 8:48 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Yuri Game Jam
Replies: 71
Views: 12581

Re: Yuri Game Jam

I'm really, really looking forward to this! I'm always up for more LGBT+ games being released, and this yuri game jam seems like a great idea. If anyone needs a writer/editor for their game, I'm totally up for the job. Either way, good luck to everyone participating!
by thornbush
Wed Aug 19, 2015 7:08 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5054
Views: 1052131

Re: Guestbook

'Sup guys, I'm Astrid. I've been into visual novels for a while now, but I didn't have the guts to join these forums until yesterday. I'm a writer, so I do like novels in general, but I think visual novels are great because they require all sorts of creativity to make a great thing happen. I'd love ...
by thornbush
Tue Aug 18, 2015 11:21 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Les Contes Magiques - Short Demo
Replies: 9
Views: 1692

Re: Les Contes Magiques - Short Demo

I really enjoyed playing this demo! The art was well-done and very pretty. It definitely matched the atmosphere of the game, and it was a joy to see the beautiful artwork while listening to the soundtrack, which was also very pleasant. I thought the premise of the game was interesting, and I think i...