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- Sun Dec 27, 2015 8:14 pm
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Fate✝ [Working Title][Fantasy?][GxB][BxB]
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Re: Fate✝ [Working Title][Fantasy?][GxB][BxB]
honestly I ran out of common humanoid mythical creatures by the time I got to Ren lol Well if you accept any suggestions, maybe something like an elf, merman, fairy or a djinn? Mm, maybe an elf? He's supposed to be this like, faraway harsh/emotionless box. I have no definite race-thing for Ren yet,...
- Sat Dec 26, 2015 2:53 pm
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Fate✝ [Working Title][Fantasy?][GxB][BxB]
- Replies: 7
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Re: Fate✝ [Working Title][Fantasy?][GxB][BxB]
Hello! The plot and the characters are appealing. Hope you'll find time to continue this :3 By the way. what is a nephilim to you : since there's many definitions, i'm curious about yours :) I think I was going for the offspring of angel x human, but it might change? I'm not 100% on the details of ...
- Sat Dec 26, 2015 1:21 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Critique sketches?
- Replies: 11
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Re: Critique sketches?
The second picture is definitely an improvement, I can tell you have been practicing. My advice to you is to keep going, look at real people and apply what you see to your drawings. Worry less about small details and more about the underlining structure of what you are drawing, bones and muscles. I...
- Fri Dec 25, 2015 4:15 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Critique sketches?
- Replies: 11
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Re: Critique sketches?
I'm back after going on a semi-unannounced-hiatus and I just spent all day working on Ethan's character maps-things http://i1360.photobucket.com/albums/r650/CrackerJaxx23/OC%20shittu/ye_zpsqn7srget.png How is this? I can say I'm pretty okay with it; I've been doing a few figure studies since I last ...
- Fri Dec 25, 2015 3:52 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Fate✝ [Working Title][Fantasy?][GxB][BxB]
- Replies: 7
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Re: Fate✝ [Working Title][Fantasy?][GxB][BxB]
THIS ISN'T DEAD!! :D I have been busy with... life basically, but I have finished Ethan's character maps 8) ~~~~~~~~ I'm planning on having the MC be boy and/or girl; as in the player decides the gender. Also I might take out some characters, and maybe even change the plot a bit? /shrugs. I have no...
- Tue Aug 25, 2015 2:05 pm
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Critique sketches?
- Replies: 11
- Views: 1949
Re: Critique sketches?
Hello I made a little sketch for you. I don't want to go into proportions of things, because it's very stylised, so it's impossible to say that something is "wrong". So in terms of advice that I can give you, try to think of shapes more in 3d (your head is nice, but body looks very flat),...
- Sun Aug 23, 2015 10:21 pm
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Critique sketches?
- Replies: 11
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Re: Critique sketches?
Hello! I wonder if you would be okay with people redlining your sketch, just to show a few things they would change? Oh, and also: I'm still working on imagining forms of the human body and what-not. You may find this website useful: http://www.posemaniacs.com/ Proportions are realistic, if you go ...
- Sun Aug 23, 2015 3:44 am
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Critique sketches?
- Replies: 11
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Re: Critique sketches?
I don't think the head is too big, but rather the arms are too small. There are some basic rules for basic anatomy that I think you should look into in regards to constructing the body before adding details. This website I found on Google is pretty thorough and it might help you start thinking abou...
- Sat Aug 22, 2015 9:06 pm
- Forum: Personal Art Threads
- Topic: Critique sketches?
- Replies: 11
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Critique sketches?
I'm making a graphic novel for the first time, and I want my characters to look just right. I'm kind of really bad at anatomy and I'm still working on imagining forms of the human body and what-not. I'd love it if someone would give me advice/critique/etc ~ This is my first finished sketch of Dakota...
- Sat Aug 22, 2015 6:18 am
- Forum: Ideas
- Topic: Fate✝ [Working Title][Fantasy?][GxB][BxB]
- Replies: 7
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Fate✝ [Working Title][Fantasy?][GxB][BxB]
Fate✝ *updated December 25th, 2015 * http://i.imgur.com/FqaBIcS.png This is going to be my first visual novel; it's probably going to take me 300 years to finish it. TT-TT Also, if this ends up working well I wanted to do a gender-swap with the characters. :D I'm still working on the storyline, but...