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by YaminoOkami
Sat Dec 30, 2017 2:32 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Desservir [Medieval Fantasy][Adventure] Dessert Themed VN
Replies: 36
Views: 6080

Re: Desservir [Medieval Fantasy][Adventure] Dessert Themed VN

I am pretty late but is it still ok to answer those questions and ask some questions? 1) What is your general impression of this game idea? Main plot sound interesting, while doesn't seem too original I think it's ok because I like those kind of stories (Travel to a fantasy world) when you add to th...
by YaminoOkami
Sat Dec 30, 2017 1:06 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Western vs. Eastern Storytelling
Replies: 10
Views: 9396

Re: Western vs. Eastern Storytelling

I am late to a party but I wanted to add some things in this topic witch nobody mentioned yet I think are some of more important differences. If we are talking about modern storytelling such as modern Anime/VNs/Manga etc. VS Modern Hollywood movies, Western TV Shows etc. I would say main difference ...
by YaminoOkami
Sat Dec 30, 2017 12:19 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: A Maid's Tale(GxG,SoL,Drama,Comedy)(SuNoFes)
Replies: 10
Views: 4156

Re: A Maid's Tale(GxG,SoL,Drama,Comedy)(SuNoFes)

So I was wondering since I see you started a new VN Reska what does that mean for A Maid's Tale? Droped? On hold? Working on both?

I can't really find any info on it. Hope it's not droped.
by YaminoOkami
Sat Dec 30, 2017 10:12 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Rukuai's Art Thread
Replies: 4
Views: 1578

Re: Rukuai's Art Thread

Hi, You say critique is appreciated and as someone who's also learning art myself and appreciate critique myself I am going to give you my opinion, just keep in mind that I am no professional artist so this is an opinion from someone who is learning things himself. In your color images, especially i...
by YaminoOkami
Sun Nov 12, 2017 10:01 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.
Replies: 9
Views: 1417

Re: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.

So I finished my second OC, I know title says my first OC, but why not upload a second one here as well. She is a younger twin sister of Rie my first OC. Nema: Rena Age: Appears as 16 Gender: Female Personality: Unlike her older twin sister Rie, Rena is a cheerful and friendly girl that always has a...
by YaminoOkami
Sat Nov 11, 2017 11:34 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.
Replies: 9
Views: 1417

Re: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.

I love how expressive she is! You said you were going for cold, composed, mysterious, and you nailed it!! I feel like you can glean those things about her right away from her facial expression and her body language. The one thing I would advise being mindful of is her pose. At the moment, it seems ...
by YaminoOkami
Fri Nov 10, 2017 5:03 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.
Replies: 9
Views: 1417

Re: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.

If you're looking for the style in Hyperdimension Neptunia, their hand proportion of fingertip-to-wrist is approximately chin-to-eyebrow, whereas "realistic" hands tend to be chin-to-hairline size (test it yourself, if you're a teenager or older, it's likely you can just almost reach your...
by YaminoOkami
Fri Nov 10, 2017 2:36 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.
Replies: 9
Views: 1417

Re: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.

The only one critique I have is, between the gaps of her legs, if it is a robe she's wearing it would also go in the back of her legs as well you wouldn't be able to see through- You are completely right, I somehow missed coloring that part :oops: , thanks for pointing it out, and thanks for feedba...
by YaminoOkami
Thu Nov 09, 2017 9:53 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.
Replies: 9
Views: 1417

My First OC, Looking for honest feedback.

Hi all, Some time ego I opened a tread asking for feedback on my art and I was very satisfied with feedback I can get here, but back then I still only copied other people's characters and now that I draw my first original character, I come back looking for some more feedback :) . Name: Rie Age: Appe...
by YaminoOkami
Tue Oct 24, 2017 7:16 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: What do you honestly think of my art?
Replies: 19
Views: 4765

Re: What do you honestly think of my art?

Steamgirl Firstly thanks for feedback! Sorry for my late replay, for some reason I thought I replayed already.... guess not. Firstly did you see my updated drawings too or just the first ones? If not could you check them as well, would like to hear your opinion on them as well. I had been drawing a...
by YaminoOkami
Thu Sep 07, 2017 5:03 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: A Maid's Tale(GxG,SoL,Drama,Comedy)(SuNoFes)
Replies: 10
Views: 4156

Re: A Maid's Tale(GxG,SoL,Drama,Comedy)(SuNoFes)

Ah, thank you for catching the mix up DX. I put the wrong personalities to the first tow girls :lol: . Anyway, I'm really glad you like the art style. She's done an amazing job with it in my opinion. As for Elena, I do you see what you mean for her. Now either I uploaded it weird or maybe something...
by YaminoOkami
Wed Sep 06, 2017 5:26 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: A Maid's Tale(GxG,SoL,Drama,Comedy)(SuNoFes)
Replies: 10
Views: 4156

Re: A Maid's Tale(GxG,SoL,Drama,Comedy)(SuNoFes)

Art is incredibly beautiful! I especially like eyes and hair coloring and shading, definitely S class art. True Elena's coloring seems a bit different from other's, my guess would be artist used different brush for her shading, eater that or her art was maximized a bit too much and got a bit pixelis...
by YaminoOkami
Tue Aug 15, 2017 5:32 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: What do you honestly think of my art?
Replies: 19
Views: 4765

Re: What do you honestly think of my art?

It's more of the method then program. I asked for the program so I can tell you how to avoid that. (Photoshop has the exact same problem as well) Basically those spaces are because of of anti-aliasing; pixels of lighter colors are generated along edges in order to make it look smooth. (So like your...
by YaminoOkami
Mon Aug 14, 2017 7:12 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: What do you honestly think of my art?
Replies: 19
Views: 4765

Re: What do you honestly think of my art?

I had been drawing a lot and had improved some points in my art, I would like to get some feedback on my improvement if possible. https://image.ibb.co/mismhF/5_5.png https://image.ibb.co/iKBwhF/6.png I love the shading! Especially on the second one, it's really well done. The eye coloring is great....
by YaminoOkami
Thu Aug 03, 2017 10:06 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: What do you honestly think of my art?
Replies: 19
Views: 4765

Re: What do you honestly think of my art?

I had been drawing a lot and had improved some points in my art, I would like to get some feedback on my improvement if possible.

https://image.ibb.co/mismhF/5_5.png
https://image.ibb.co/iKBwhF/6.png