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by gamerbum
Fri Sep 13, 2019 2:05 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Native Speakers, rate this English translation pls
Replies: 5
Views: 757

Re: Native Speakers, rate this English translation pls

Overall, I would rate it 3/10. There are a few small parts that are okay, but for the most part, it reads as nonsensical. Lots of grammar errors and unclear sentences. Almost none of the sentences sound like a native English speaker could've written them. For your last question, it doesn't particul...
by gamerbum
Fri Sep 13, 2019 12:41 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Native Speakers, rate this English translation pls
Replies: 5
Views: 757

Re: Native Speakers, rate this English translation pls

Overall, I would rate it 3/10. There are a few small parts that are okay, but for the most part, it reads as nonsensical. Lots of grammar errors and unclear sentences. Almost none of the sentences sound like a native English speaker could've written them. For your last question, it doesn't particula...
by gamerbum
Wed May 01, 2019 8:04 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Signed and Sealed With a Kiss [G/B/NBxB][Stat raiser]
Replies: 3
Views: 2684

Signed and Sealed With a Kiss [G/B/NBxB][Stat raiser]

Now available on itch.io and Steam ! 38% off release discount until May 7 on Steam! 8BAcC4picj4 SYNOPSIS You get an unexpected package delivery one day. When you open it, there’s a man inside - but luckily, he comes with instructions! You have your own impressionable boyfriend. It’s your duty to sh...
by gamerbum
Thu Mar 14, 2019 8:47 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Reflections ~Dreams and Reality~ [GxB/G][Fantasy]
Replies: 0
Views: 1443

Reflections ~Dreams and Reality~ [GxB/G][Fantasy]

4USGRFr7-_A There's another side to each person, one that we cannot see without help. There are those who seek out said help, each earnestly wishing to find their true selves. It is then that they seek out the one known as the "Magic Mirror," a revered sorceress of recent legend. Watch as the darkn...
by gamerbum
Sat Feb 16, 2019 12:02 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: [Paid, Trade] Writing, Editing, Proofreading, FR-ENG [OPEN]
Replies: 27
Views: 4514

Re: [Paid, Trade] Writing, Editing, Proofreading, FR-ENG [OPEN]

I've updated my thread. It's been a while... I now have a portfolio/work website! Please check it out for an in-depth look at my work history, prices, etc. I also have a brand new, up-to-date writing samples page here. Anyway, if you check my website, I have a special deal for one short yuri project...
by gamerbum
Sun Feb 03, 2019 10:05 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Having multiple writers: How to be consistent?
Replies: 9
Views: 632

Re: Having multiple writers: How to be consistent?

The simplest solution is just to hire an editor. Generally, you would want them to comb over the main writer's works first to pick up on the style you'd like maintained through the other routes. Keep in mind that hiring multiple editors, much like hiring multiple writers, will reintroduce the possib...
by gamerbum
Tue Dec 04, 2018 9:11 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Our Lovely Escape [B/GxG][SoL][18+][Kickstarter - 48 hours left!]
Replies: 1
Views: 491

Re: Our Lovely Escape [B/GxG][SoL][18+][Kickstarter - 48 hours left!]

We're now in the final hours of our Kickstarter campaign, and we've met all of our first set of goals! We're excited to be able to add so much polish to the game, and we have our fingers crossed that we might even hit another goal or two. Backers seem particularly excited about our harem route stret...
by gamerbum
Sun Nov 18, 2018 12:35 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Our Lovely Escape [B/GxG][SoL][18+][Kickstarter - 48 hours left!]
Replies: 1
Views: 491

Our Lovely Escape [B/GxG][SoL][18+][Kickstarter - 48 hours left!]

Support us on Kickstarter! GtLjbxHTcCY Your life is a peaceful one. Each day, you work alongside your (otherwise?) all-female workforce in the pursuit of creating otome games. Will you complete your life with a cute girlfriend? Will you be doomed to a life of normalcy? Or...? https://ksr-ugc.imgix....
by gamerbum
Sun Jul 22, 2018 11:01 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: How to keep artists committed?
Replies: 28
Views: 2435

Re: How to keep artists committed?

What Mammon said about many of the artists you find, even here, being unreliable is very true. I've had quite a few artists dip out on me and even one who broke our contract almost immediately by quitting and then was shocked when I asked for a refund... Anyway, yeah. Get everything in writing befor...
by gamerbum
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:44 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Choosing Character Gender
Replies: 11
Views: 724

Re: Choosing Character Gender

default , not define . define is for constants (as opposed to variables). default gender = None label start: python: player = renpy.input(_("What is your name?")) player= player.strip() if player == "": # I assume Noel is a default only if the player did not enter anything player = __("Noel") menu ...
by gamerbum
Thu Jul 19, 2018 7:29 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Choosing Character Gender
Replies: 11
Views: 724

Re: Choosing Character Gender

You should be using variables for this, not labels. https://www.renpy.org/wiki/renpy/doc/tutorials/Remembering_User_Choices Example: define gender = 0 label start: 'What are your pronouns?' menu: "He/Him": $ gender = 1 "She/Her": $ gender = 2 "They/Them": $ gender = 3 And then to call your variables...
by gamerbum
Fri Jun 08, 2018 9:42 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Wilting Amaranth [GxG/Fantasy]
Replies: 0
Views: 1436

The Wilting Amaranth [GxG/Fantasy]

aKDvKvIrK9g Three women, bound together by the threads of fate, overlap paths within the infamous Witch's Tower. Each of them, with their own unfortunate circumstances, are merely struggling to live within a society that rejects their true selfs. Can there really be a happy ending when they are goi...
by gamerbum
Mon May 28, 2018 6:52 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: a word of warning about itch.io
Replies: 6
Views: 1099

Re: a word of warning about itch.io

Just wanted to say I also have a payout that's been pending for 21 days. Funnily enough, another payout I put through my main itch.io account after the 21 day one was sent out like two weeks ago... It seems like they've been slowing down a lot lately; can't say I'm not disappointed. I also have a su...
by gamerbum
Tue Mar 20, 2018 1:40 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Mizari Loves Company [GxB][Fantasy][RPG][Kickstarter]
Replies: 9
Views: 1560

Re: Mizari Loves Company [GxB][Fantasy][RPG][Kickstarter]

I loved the demo ^^ Does this have a release date? (The voice acting was VERY good, btw. Not usually what you find in indie VN. Anja was the best, probably) And the CGs are really beautiful, I loved all of them <3 Glad to hear it! Thanks so much! Our present estimate is June 2019, but that's also a...
by gamerbum
Sat Mar 17, 2018 11:37 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Mizari Loves Company [GxB][Fantasy][RPG][Kickstarter]
Replies: 9
Views: 1560

Re: Mizari Loves Company [GxB][Fantasy][RPG][Kickstarter]

Eyyo! I enjoyed the demo lots! I'll be honest and admit that it was the voice actors that first hooked me in (Kira Buckland and Jonah Scott?! Wow!), but when I properly read the plot and the character profiles, I was pretty intrigued :) - Either at a first glance or from playing the demo, who is yo...