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by camisteja
Mon Dec 05, 2016 10:59 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: What's the best way to write a VN Story?
Replies: 9
Views: 1574

Re: What's the best way to write a VN Story?

RotGtIE wrote:I strongly recommend writing your story as a novel before you turn it into a screenplay.
How do you write it as a novel but still keep branching choices?
by camisteja
Mon Nov 28, 2016 11:24 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Beauty and the War [Dark/Epic Fantasy, Intrigue, GxB]
Replies: 77
Views: 22645

Re: Beauty and the War [Fantasy sim, politics, GxB] try the

Hello, camisteja! Thank you for answering all of my questions! I remember that quote from Arsenik but I thought that maybe he was exaggerating. LOL Then when Ambrosia mentioned her powers near the end of the demo, I was sort of left thinking, "really?" Either way, I'm excited to see the full releas...
by camisteja
Thu Nov 24, 2016 8:22 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Beauty and the War [Dark/Epic Fantasy, Intrigue, GxB]
Replies: 77
Views: 22645

Re: Beauty and the War [Fantasy sim, politics, GxB] try the

1❀ What were your expectations going into the game? And how did Beauty and the War (X Playing Pieces) meet or contradict them? HAHA, I had no real expectations. I was expecting the game to be some level of weird because of the art style but it actually came out kind of nice. That said, some things ...
by camisteja
Tue Aug 23, 2016 12:41 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7782
Views: 675696

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

I was waiting to finish the whole painting, but due to work I'm not sure if I'll finish it soon enough, sooo... sneak peak! To me, everything looks great except for the teeth. If you're going to put any kind of detail in the teeth, you might want to make sure to get the size right. Otherwise she lo...
by camisteja
Mon Aug 22, 2016 7:33 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7782
Views: 675696

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Flats
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Colored. Not very good at coloring, I'm afraid. LOL
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Some random sketches for fun.
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Thoughts?
by camisteja
Mon Jul 18, 2016 7:14 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Konbini Life [Romance/Drama/Slice of Life][GxB] #ilujam DEMO
Replies: 40
Views: 7290

Re: Konbini Life [Romance/Drama/Slice of Life][GxB] #ilujam

Are the characters interesting? Which one appeals to you? I liked all the characters, which honestly surprised me. LOL As for who appealed to me most, I gravitated more towards Grouchy and Prince. I'm sure I'll like Hoody too once his route becomes available. Does the premise seem entertaining? I c...
by camisteja
Sun Jul 03, 2016 9:57 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Character Creation Demo
Replies: 10
Views: 985

Re: Character Creation Demo

I think the download is nice! The anatomy of the character seems off, but I don't think you really care about that. Everything seems organized enough. Maybe add little icons of what the buttons are supposed to be for? For example, an icon that has a wig on it beside the hairstyle numbers.
by camisteja
Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:31 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Idol Manager [business sim, dark comedy]
Replies: 48
Views: 6667

Re: Idol Manager [business sim, dark comedy] - new video tra

The trailer is perfect! I am impressed by the depth and dedication of your team in getting this game out there. So far, everything appears extremely polished and professional. Keep up the great work!
by camisteja
Sun Jun 12, 2016 8:55 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Iridescent [GxB][Romance][Slice of Life][School]
Replies: 11
Views: 1336

Re: Iridescent [GxB][Romance][Slice of Life][School]

Is the story set in Japan? If so, why do most of the characters have non-Japanese names? Like, why is Akira's sister named Garnet or the other guy named Adonis?
by camisteja
Thu May 12, 2016 11:55 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Queen's Crown [Romance/Fantasy/Drama/GxB] DEMO UP!
Replies: 117
Views: 29190

Re: Queen's Crown [Romance/Fantasy/Drama/Otome] DEMO UP!

Thanks for the feedback, camisteja! I'm really glad you had fun with the demo. As far as the typos, you might be one of the players who downloaded the game before it got fixed. So sorry about the oversight! The newest version should be fine though. The GUI will probably undergo some major changes b...
by camisteja
Thu May 12, 2016 12:51 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Queen's Crown [Romance/Fantasy/Drama/GxB] DEMO UP!
Replies: 117
Views: 29190

Re: Queen's Crown [Romance/Fantasy/Drama/Otome] DEMO UP!

1. Who is your favorite character or love interest so far? I liked the princess's interactions with Emry and I sort of liked the goofiness of Teiran as well. I'm disappointed that my princess didn't seem to hit it off much with either of them. Lol 2. If you happened to check your attributes screen ...
by camisteja
Mon May 02, 2016 11:59 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7782
Views: 675696

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Here is a vent piece I did. Came out a little bit over the top, though. Lol Not a huge fan of the face, either... I actually quite like it, it looks suitable for a book cover, in that format. I think the only thing that detracts a bit from the face is actually the ear: it looks a bit puffed up and ...
by camisteja
Wed Apr 27, 2016 5:05 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Replies: 7782
Views: 675696

Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^

Here is a vent piece I did. Came out a little bit over the top, though. Lol Not a huge fan of the face, either...
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by camisteja
Tue Apr 26, 2016 5:46 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: Artist Mentorship
Replies: 31
Views: 2844

Re: Artist Mentorship

Hi there! I'm definitely interested and would like to join. I could use all the help I can get. Lol
by camisteja
Wed Mar 16, 2016 7:03 pm
Forum: Other Visual Novel Engines
Topic: Cloudnovel - Create, publish, and play online visual novels
Replies: 33
Views: 12284

Re: Cloudnovel - Create, publish, and play online visual nov

I love the UI and how user friendly everything looks but wouldn't it have made more sense for Cloudnovel to be software you could download like Ren'Py or potentially buy? It seems a little wasted to keep something like this limited to only browsers. I imagine some people might have liked to use Clo...