How do you write it as a novel but still keep branching choices?RotGtIE wrote:I strongly recommend writing your story as a novel before you turn it into a screenplay.
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- Mon Dec 05, 2016 10:59 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: What's the best way to write a VN Story?
- Replies: 9
- Views: 5112
Re: What's the best way to write a VN Story?
- Mon Nov 28, 2016 11:24 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Beauty and the War [Dark/Epic Fantasy, Intrigue, GxB]
- Replies: 78
- Views: 41137
Re: Beauty and the War [Fantasy sim, politics, GxB] try the
Hello, camisteja! Thank you for answering all of my questions! I remember that quote from Arsenik but I thought that maybe he was exaggerating. LOL Then when Ambrosia mentioned her powers near the end of the demo, I was sort of left thinking, "really?" Either way, I'm excited to see the f...
- Thu Nov 24, 2016 8:22 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Beauty and the War [Dark/Epic Fantasy, Intrigue, GxB]
- Replies: 78
- Views: 41137
Re: Beauty and the War [Fantasy sim, politics, GxB] try the
1❀ What were your expectations going into the game? And how did Beauty and the War (X Playing Pieces) meet or contradict them? HAHA, I had no real expectations. I was expecting the game to be some level of weird because of the art style but it actually came out kind of nice. That said, some things ...
- Tue Aug 23, 2016 12:41 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
- Replies: 7876
- Views: 1082908
Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
I was waiting to finish the whole painting, but due to work I'm not sure if I'll finish it soon enough, sooo... sneak peak! To me, everything looks great except for the teeth. If you're going to put any kind of detail in the teeth, you might want to make sure to get the size right. Otherwise she lo...
- Mon Aug 22, 2016 7:33 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
- Replies: 7876
- Views: 1082908
Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Flats
Colored. Not very good at coloring, I'm afraid. LOL
Some random sketches for fun.
Thoughts?
Colored. Not very good at coloring, I'm afraid. LOL
Some random sketches for fun.
Thoughts?
- Mon Jul 18, 2016 7:14 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Konbini Life [Romance/Drama/Slice of Life][GxB] #ilujam DEMO
- Replies: 40
- Views: 13398
Re: Konbini Life [Romance/Drama/Slice of Life][GxB] #ilujam
Are the characters interesting? Which one appeals to you? I liked all the characters, which honestly surprised me. LOL As for who appealed to me most, I gravitated more towards Grouchy and Prince. I'm sure I'll like Hoody too once his route becomes available. Does the premise seem entertaining? I c...
- Sun Jul 03, 2016 9:57 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Character Creation Demo
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4505
Re: Character Creation Demo
I think the download is nice! The anatomy of the character seems off, but I don't think you really care about that. Everything seems organized enough. Maybe add little icons of what the buttons are supposed to be for? For example, an icon that has a wig on it beside the hairstyle numbers.
- Fri Jul 01, 2016 6:31 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Idol Manager [business sim, dark comedy]
- Replies: 48
- Views: 13681
Re: Idol Manager [business sim, dark comedy] - new video tra
The trailer is perfect! I am impressed by the depth and dedication of your team in getting this game out there. So far, everything appears extremely polished and professional. Keep up the great work!
- Sun Jun 12, 2016 8:55 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Iridescent [GxB][Romance][Slice of Life][School]
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2189
Re: Iridescent [GxB][Romance][Slice of Life][School]
Is the story set in Japan? If so, why do most of the characters have non-Japanese names? Like, why is Akira's sister named Garnet or the other guy named Adonis?
- Thu May 12, 2016 11:55 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Queen's Crown [Romance/Fantasy/Drama/GxB] DEMO UP!
- Replies: 121
- Views: 49289
Re: Queen's Crown [Romance/Fantasy/Drama/Otome] DEMO UP!
Thanks for the feedback, camisteja! I'm really glad you had fun with the demo. As far as the typos, you might be one of the players who downloaded the game before it got fixed. So sorry about the oversight! The newest version should be fine though. The GUI will probably undergo some major changes b...
- Thu May 12, 2016 12:51 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Queen's Crown [Romance/Fantasy/Drama/GxB] DEMO UP!
- Replies: 121
- Views: 49289
Re: Queen's Crown [Romance/Fantasy/Drama/Otome] DEMO UP!
1. Who is your favorite character or love interest so far? I liked the princess's interactions with Emry and I sort of liked the goofiness of Teiran as well. I'm disappointed that my princess didn't seem to hit it off much with either of them. Lol 2. If you happened to check your attributes screen ...
- Mon May 02, 2016 11:59 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
- Replies: 7876
- Views: 1082908
Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Here is a vent piece I did. Came out a little bit over the top, though. Lol Not a huge fan of the face, either... I actually quite like it, it looks suitable for a book cover, in that format. I think the only thing that detracts a bit from the face is actually the ear: it looks a bit puffed up and ...
- Wed Apr 27, 2016 5:05 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
- Replies: 7876
- Views: 1082908
Re: Art Dumpage! Show your art ^^
Here is a vent piece I did. Came out a little bit over the top, though. Lol Not a huge fan of the face, either...
- Tue Apr 26, 2016 5:46 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Art
- Topic: Artist Mentorship
- Replies: 31
- Views: 5883
Re: Artist Mentorship
Hi there! I'm definitely interested and would like to join. I could use all the help I can get. Lol
- Wed Mar 16, 2016 7:03 pm
- Forum: Other Visual Novel Engines
- Topic: Cloudnovel - The Easiest and Most Powerful Visual Novel Maker
- Replies: 40
- Views: 28956
Re: Cloudnovel - Create, publish, and play online visual nov
I love the UI and how user friendly everything looks but wouldn't it have made more sense for Cloudnovel to be software you could download like Ren'Py or potentially buy? It seems a little wasted to keep something like this limited to only browsers. I imagine some people might have liked to use Clo...