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by TennisHero
Tue Jul 16, 2019 12:41 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Wildfire - ticket to rock [Coming of age][Slice of life][Music][KN][DEMO] Kickstarter: FINAL 48 HOURS
Replies: 13
Views: 1725

Re: Wildfire [Coming of age][Slice of life][Music][KN]

I played the game recently. It's an awesome visual novel that I'm glad I got to experience! Wildfire is a very realistic coming-of-age story about starting a band while in high school. The pacing of the story is such that you really felt like the band’s success was earned through hard work and perse...
by TennisHero
Thu Jul 11, 2019 3:58 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Email not working
Replies: 0
Views: 3475

Email not working

I sent an email to a user on the Lemma Soft forums while checking the box saying “Send a copy of this email to yourself”. But I have not received the email in my inbox or spam folder for that matter. I am checking the right email account and even sent myself a test email, but still I didn’t receive ...
by TennisHero
Wed Jul 03, 2019 9:38 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: [OPEN] Writer, developer, producer looking for work
Replies: 2
Views: 430

Re: [OPEN] Writer, developer, producer looking for work

Hi, I'm looking for a writer to help iron out my characters and come up with realistic dialogue. I'm kind of stuck on where to go next and need someone to look at it and maybe offer some solutions.
by TennisHero
Fri Apr 19, 2019 11:52 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Wildfire - ticket to rock [Coming of age][Slice of life][Music][KN][DEMO] Kickstarter: FINAL 48 HOURS
Replies: 13
Views: 1725

Re: Wildfire [Coming of age][Slice of life][Music][KN]

This looks cool. I'm a sucker for stories about music. I'd be interested in proofreading the story.
by TennisHero
Sun Apr 14, 2019 6:34 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Smart Girls Demo [Short VN] [Trivia Game]
Replies: 0
Views: 245

Smart Girls Demo [Short VN] [Trivia Game]

smartgirls.png Plot: "Smart Girls" tells a story about of a high school quiz bowl team competing in a city wide academic-challenge tournament. While the girls are exceptionally bright, their school doesn't exactly have a good reputation and they've been written off as underdogs who don't stand a ch...
by TennisHero
Sun Aug 05, 2018 1:21 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Tight Five Demo [Comedian Simulator]
Replies: 0
Views: 658

Tight Five Demo [Comedian Simulator]

This is a demo of my new visual novel "Tight Five". A Ren'Py simulation game of an up-and-coming comedienne. http://www.mediafire.com/folder/jq4pn5s92p4jy/TightFive-1.0-dists Plot To cope with her soul crushing office job and relocating to Philadelphia, Nadia Vandergore would spend her weekends at t...
by TennisHero
Sun Feb 11, 2018 5:54 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Starving Writer Looking For Work! (Free! or Low Cost)
Replies: 2
Views: 603

Re: Starving Writer Looking For Work! (Free! or Low Cost)

Hi, I am working on a short visual novel and I'm looking for a co-writer. Specifically, I need someone that can write good dialogue and contribute to the main plot. If you're interested and want to know more, I can send you a message with a demo included.
by TennisHero
Fri Feb 17, 2017 7:31 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Critique Needed
Replies: 0
Views: 446

Critique Needed

I finished writing the second part of my visual novel. I was wondering if someone could play it and give me a review. The game includes Parts 1-2. WHAT I WANT TO KNOW "Which scenes stood out to you the most?" "Which scenes could be improved or expanded upon?" "Any ideas you’d have to make this story...
by TennisHero
Thu Aug 25, 2016 7:19 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements
Replies: 4
Views: 399

Re: Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements

I've made the changes and it helped solve my error problem. But now when I input the right command, it's telling me that it's incorrect. In this case, "tofu, brown rice, bowl, guacamole" reads "That doesn't sound right." label food: if (protein == "tofu" and starch == "brown" and entree == "bowl" an...
by TennisHero
Thu Aug 25, 2016 6:51 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements
Replies: 4
Views: 399

Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements

I'm writing this scene in my story where the main character has to remember a restaurant order and then input the correct commands. There is a 4x4 grid of the options listed, and all four of these must be correct in order to progress. So for example, if the order was "Steak bowl with white rice", al...
by TennisHero
Fri Jan 22, 2016 5:54 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Lucky Number 9 Demo [FEEDBACK WANTED]
Replies: 2
Views: 942

Re: Lucky Number 9 Demo [FEEDBACK WANTED]

First off, I want to thank you for playing my game and leaving me feedback. I appreciate it! You may be right about certain story elements being too short and that might be a result of trying to move the story along. That can be fixed in post. I've tried to fix this with transition cards ("The Next ...
by TennisHero
Thu Jan 21, 2016 5:43 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Lucky Number 9 Demo [FEEDBACK WANTED]
Replies: 2
Views: 942

Lucky Number 9 Demo [FEEDBACK WANTED]

This is a beta is of my visual novel "Lucky Number 9". It contains the first twenty chapters and features like music and background art are all just placeholders until the game is completed. http://www.mediafire.com/download/lbgj8v1238cdu8i/lucky_number_9-1.0-all.zip SYNOPSIS Fourteen-year-old Lucky...