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- Tue Jul 16, 2019 12:41 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Wildfire - ticket to rock [Coming of age][Slice of life][Music][KN][DEMO]
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2321
Re: Wildfire [Coming of age][Slice of life][Music][KN]
I played the game recently. It's an awesome visual novel that I'm glad I got to experience! Wildfire is a very realistic coming-of-age story about starting a band while in high school. The pacing of the story is such that you really felt like the band’s success was earned through hard work and perse...
- Thu Jul 11, 2019 3:58 pm
- Forum: General Discussion
- Topic: Email not working
- Replies: 0
- Views: 7052
Email not working
I sent an email to a user on the Lemma Soft forums while checking the box saying “Send a copy of this email to yourself”. But I have not received the email in my inbox or spam folder for that matter. I am checking the right email account and even sent myself a test email, but still I didn’t receive ...
- Wed Jul 03, 2019 9:38 pm
- Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
- Topic: [OPEN] Writer, developer, producer looking for work
- Replies: 2
- Views: 945
Re: [OPEN] Writer, developer, producer looking for work
Hi, I'm looking for a writer to help iron out my characters and come up with realistic dialogue. I'm kind of stuck on where to go next and need someone to look at it and maybe offer some solutions.
- Fri Apr 19, 2019 11:52 am
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Wildfire - ticket to rock [Coming of age][Slice of life][Music][KN][DEMO]
- Replies: 13
- Views: 2321
Re: Wildfire [Coming of age][Slice of life][Music][KN]
This looks cool. I'm a sucker for stories about music. I'd be interested in proofreading the story.
- Sun Apr 14, 2019 6:34 pm
- Forum: Works in Progress
- Topic: Smart Girls Demo [Short VN] [Trivia Game]
- Replies: 0
- Views: 336
Smart Girls Demo [Short VN] [Trivia Game]
smartgirls.png Plot: "Smart Girls" tells a story about of a high school quiz bowl team competing in a city wide academic-challenge tournament. While the girls are exceptionally bright, their school doesn't exactly have a good reputation and they've been written off as underdogs who don't ...
- Sun Aug 05, 2018 1:21 am
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Tight Five Demo [Comedian Simulator]
- Replies: 0
- Views: 876
Tight Five Demo [Comedian Simulator]
This is a demo of my new visual novel "Tight Five". A Ren'Py simulation game of an up-and-coming comedienne. http://www.mediafire.com/folder/jq4pn5s92p4jy/TightFive-1.0-dists Plot To cope with her soul crushing office job and relocating to Philadelphia, Nadia Vandergore would spend her wee...
- Sun Feb 11, 2018 5:54 pm
- Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
- Topic: Starving Writer Looking For Work! (Free! or Low Cost)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 823
Re: Starving Writer Looking For Work! (Free! or Low Cost)
Hi, I am working on a short visual novel and I'm looking for a co-writer. Specifically, I need someone that can write good dialogue and contribute to the main plot. If you're interested and want to know more, I can send you a message with a demo included.
- Fri Feb 17, 2017 7:31 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Critique Needed
- Replies: 0
- Views: 567
Critique Needed
I finished writing the second part of my visual novel. I was wondering if someone could play it and give me a review. The game includes Parts 1-2. WHAT I WANT TO KNOW "Which scenes stood out to you the most?" "Which scenes could be improved or expanded upon?" "Any ideas you’...
- Thu Aug 25, 2016 7:26 pm
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements
- Replies: 4
- Views: 644
Re: Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements
It worked. Thank You!
- Thu Aug 25, 2016 7:19 pm
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements
- Replies: 4
- Views: 644
Re: Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements
I've made the changes and it helped solve my error problem. But now when I input the right command, it's telling me that it's incorrect. In this case, "tofu, brown rice, bowl, guacamole" reads "That doesn't sound right." label food: if (protein == "tofu" and starch == &...
- Thu Aug 25, 2016 6:51 pm
- Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
- Topic: Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements
- Replies: 4
- Views: 644
Dealing with Multiple (&&) Statements
I'm writing this scene in my story where the main character has to remember a restaurant order and then input the correct commands. There is a 4x4 grid of the options listed, and all four of these must be correct in order to progress. So for example, if the order was "Steak bowl with white rice...
- Fri Jan 22, 2016 5:54 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Lucky Number 9 Demo [FEEDBACK WANTED]
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1194
Re: Lucky Number 9 Demo [FEEDBACK WANTED]
First off, I want to thank you for playing my game and leaving me feedback. I appreciate it! You may be right about certain story elements being too short and that might be a result of trying to move the story along. That can be fixed in post. I've tried to fix this with transition cards ("The ...
- Thu Jan 21, 2016 5:43 pm
- Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
- Topic: Lucky Number 9 Demo [FEEDBACK WANTED]
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1194
Lucky Number 9 Demo [FEEDBACK WANTED]
This is a beta is of my visual novel "Lucky Number 9". It contains the first twenty chapters and features like music and background art are all just placeholders until the game is completed. http://www.mediafire.com/download/lbgj8v1238cdu8i/lucky_number_9-1.0-all.zip SYNOPSIS Fourteen-year...