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by Zelan
Tue Jun 30, 2020 12:18 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cottagecore Story [ALLxALL] [Fantasy, Slice-of-Life, Romance]
Replies: 9
Views: 810

Re: Cottagecore Story [ALLxALL] [Fantasy, Slice-of-Life, Romance]

I love your background art, it's so pretty and soothing! If I could live in it I totally would.
by Zelan
Sat Jun 27, 2020 4:24 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Joshlab's Art Thread
Replies: 2
Views: 148

Re: Joshlab's Art Thread

Your art is beautiful! I love the first one.
by Zelan
Fri Jun 26, 2020 5:22 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Only the Holly [Fantasy] [Family/Friendship] [Be the Void] [Free]
Replies: 4
Views: 1571

Re: Only the Holly [Fantasy] [Family/Friendship] [Be the Void] [Free]

I absolutely love your writing style. I've tried to write a character newly born into the world before and it was very clumsy. Nova was essentially what I tried and failed to do - endearing, curious, and learning about the world in a strange and out of order way. I legitimately cried reading the Hum...
by Zelan
Thu Jun 25, 2020 4:33 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: [OPEN][Paid/Free]Professional Italian translator from English and Japanese
Replies: 2
Views: 265

Re: [OPEN][Paid/Free]Professional Italian translator from English and Japanese

Giulia did English to Italian translations for the script and the UI of my short VN The Dark . She was very polite, and the translations were given to me in a format that will make them super easy for me to input. I would highly recommend her services if anyone is looking for translation and I will ...
by Zelan
Tue Jun 23, 2020 12:49 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Drops of Death [Murder Mystery][Otome / Boys Love / Girls Love]
Replies: 4
Views: 537

Re: Drops of Death [Murder Mystery][Otome / Boys Love / Girls Love]

Adrien is really cute, I love both of their designs. Also just BIG eyes emoji at the entire concept.
by Zelan
Tue Jun 23, 2020 12:46 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Cottagecore Story [ALLxALL] [Fantasy, Slice-of-Life, Romance]
Replies: 9
Views: 810

Re: Cottagecore Story [ALLxALL] [Fantasy, Slice-of-Life, Romance]

Given that a MC is well-written and likable as a character, does customization detract from the VN experience or enhance it? Specifically being able to play as the desired gender or pronouns?: I definitely don't think that gender customization detracts from this! I can see where parttimestorier is c...
by Zelan
Tue Jun 23, 2020 12:35 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Take A Hike! [GxG][Slice of Life][Camping][Commercial]
Replies: 3
Views: 368

Re: Take A Hike! [GxG][Slice of Life][Camping][Commercial]

The premise of this is so cute, and I adore Deji's art! 1. Do you think the photographic backgrounds look okay as they are, or would you prefer filters to make them look a bit less realistic?: I think it would look better with a filter. Usually I'm not super picky about what VN backgrounds look like...
by Zelan
Tue Jun 16, 2020 11:40 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Shadows That Run Alongside Our Car [PWYW/Free]
Replies: 2
Views: 3852

Re: The Shadows That Run Alongside Our Car [PWYW/Free]

I really liked this VN. The characters are established really well in a short time, and I'm hoping for good things for them even at the end of the world. The art is also really nice, I love the changing colors as the sun sets.
by Zelan
Sat Jun 13, 2020 11:45 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Crystal the Witch [Free, Short][Comedy, Cute]
Replies: 2
Views: 1218

Re: Crystal the Witch [Free, Short][Comedy, Cute]

This was a really cute game, I liked it a lot. It would have been even better if we could have seen Crystal meeting with her friends at the end, but overall the art and story were super cute and it was a funny and relaxing game (for the most part, the voice acting was scary lmao).
by Zelan
Sat Jun 13, 2020 12:35 am
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]
Replies: 60
Views: 5052

Re: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]

I still have this thread bookmarked :') make me happy to see notifications from it! And thank you, I used a picrew to make it ^_^
by Zelan
Fri Jun 12, 2020 1:20 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Eldritch University [Horror][GxG][Commercial]
Replies: 1
Views: 320

Re: Eldritch University [Horror][GxG][Commercial]

Congrats on the release!!
by Zelan
Fri Jun 12, 2020 1:11 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]
Replies: 60
Views: 5052

Re: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]

DAWN!!! She's so cute! <3 All of your girls are cute, actually. I like the girl with the wings, especially her hairstyle!
by Zelan
Thu Jun 11, 2020 9:19 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: I Want to Pursue the Mean Side Character! [Kinetic][GxG][Free]
Replies: 5
Views: 1096

Re: I Want to Pursue the Mean Side Character! [Kinetic][GxG][Free]

This was really cute! Everything about Lily was SUCH a mood lmao, there are so many times that the side characters are so much more interesting than the love interests. I liked her speech to Edvard about how amazing Beatrix is.
by Zelan
Thu Jun 11, 2020 12:22 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Violet Girls [kinetic] [drama] [friendship] [free]
Replies: 1
Views: 781

Re: The Violet Girls [kinetic] [drama] [friendship] [free]

I'd like to play this game, but I don't have a Mac. Is there a chance that you'll upload a Windows version?