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Does the game presented here interest you?: (Why or why not?): A little bit. I like the art, and mystery is cool, but the plot seems a little cliche. Whether you can pull it off depends if you're able to write well or not. What was your first impression of the game?: Same as above. Have ideas for ot...

I'm just wondering how on Earth there are enough characters who participate in "Consensual Porn Production" for that to be a category, haha.

You definitely don't have to limit yourself to the traditional system of romance and love interests. It's very common in VNs, yes, and it might not attract internet-wide attention, but there are definitely people here who are interested in VNs that break the mold a little bit. Some good VNs I've rea...

YEAH BOI

I'm really excited for you guys! I saw your announcements on Tumblr and I've been anticipating the Kickstarter ever since. I really hope you guys can make your goal. (I'm gonna have to clear some space on my laptop so I can download your demo, haha.)

This is a super cool concept. I remember seeing your question about it in the Writing subforum, I hope to see this one come to completion. c:

However, despite not having played a lot of VNs, I must say that only three datable guys for one char might feel a bit short-handed. I think that adding just one or two more is enough room to explore other, interesting and/or cute character concepts and add more replay value. I would disagree with ...

The new character cards are incredibly cool!! You did a great job on them, and I adore the art style that all the sprites have. (And it's cool that Adeline uses they/them pronouns! I'm glad to see more characters like them.)

The chibis are cute. c: I'd be interested in playing this when it comes out.

uHM that is the cutest catgirl I've ever seen!! I really like that you made her an actual CATgirl, instead of going the route of an overly sexualized girls with cat ears and a tail. She really looks like a sweetheart and I'm excited for her route. :D Adrien and Dmitri aren't looking too bad themselv...

Oh hey, I'm glad to see that you're posting again! I thought this was a cool idea when I first saw it, and I agree with Lesleigh, every single piece of art you've posted here is absolutely gorgeous. It's definitely a good idea to be careful with how much work you give yourself and limit your scope; ...

pretend that it says wacdonalds instead of mcdonalds

Everyone has given good advice so far, but I do think that I should mention that your bias might be more apparent to you as the author. I would get feedback from beta readers or testers on whether Trenton gets too much attention before you worry about it too much, especially considering that you're ...

To answer the second point: Cutting away to scenes in a different POV is doable, but can be dicey. The main thing that you have to be careful of is making sure that it's clear that the POV has changed. You could use a different colored text box, you could make the new POV character a side sprite, if...

I play Choices as well. I'm on Chapter 7 of Book 3 of Endless Summer. I could have been done already but I decided early on to get every single Ember of Hope; since I get the free diamonds instead of buying them it takes a rather long time. Also joining the party of bitter Most Wanted fans. Even tho...

Your art style is unique, I haven't seen anything similar on these forums, I don't think. I like it a lot. I'm crossing my fingers that the horror isn't all that terrifying, because this is an awesome concept but I don't do great with horror. Are there going to be frightening images and sounds in t...