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by Zelan
Sat May 19, 2018 10:03 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: University Life Of A Clueless Student: Path to Remembrance [Slice of Life] [Mystery] [Drama] [Romance]
Replies: 1
Views: 281

Re: University Life Of A Clueless Student: Path to Remembrance [Slice of Life] [Mystery] [Drama] [Romance]

Does the game presented here interest you?: (Why or why not?): A little bit. I like the art, and mystery is cool, but the plot seems a little cliche. Whether you can pull it off depends if you're able to write well or not. What was your first impression of the game?: Same as above. Have ideas for ot...
by Zelan
Sat May 19, 2018 6:44 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Predicting the sexual activity of VN characters
Replies: 11
Views: 260

Re: Predicting the sexual activity of VN characters

I'm just wondering how on Earth there are enough characters who participate in "Consensual Porn Production" for that to be a category, haha.
by Zelan
Sat May 19, 2018 4:55 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Plot Ideas
Replies: 9
Views: 635

Re: Plot Ideas

You definitely don't have to limit yourself to the traditional system of romance and love interests. It's very common in VNs, yes, and it might not attract internet-wide attention, but there are definitely people here who are interested in VNs that break the mold a little bit. Some good VNs I've rea...
by Zelan
Sat May 19, 2018 4:31 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Golden Hour [GxB][Romance][School Life][Mobile]: KICKSTARTER NOW LIVE!
Replies: 47
Views: 6102

Re: Golden Hour [GxB][Romance][School Life][Mobile]: KICKSTARTER NOW LIVE!

YEAH BOI

I'm really excited for you guys! I saw your announcements on Tumblr and I've been anticipating the Kickstarter ever since. I really hope you guys can make your goal. (I'm gonna have to clear some space on my laptop so I can download your demo, haha.)
by Zelan
Sat May 19, 2018 4:11 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Cardians: Rural, Kinetic Novel [Horror, mystery]
Replies: 4
Views: 191

Re: Cardians: Rural, Kinetic Novel [Horror, mystery]

This is a super cool concept. I remember seeing your question about it in the Writing subforum, I hope to see this one come to completion. c:
by Zelan
Fri May 18, 2018 10:17 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: In The Thick of It [G x B][Romance/Slice of Life]
Replies: 2
Views: 214

Re: In The Thick of It [G x B][Romance/Slice of Life]

However, despite not having played a lot of VNs, I must say that only three datable guys for one char might feel a bit short-handed. I think that adding just one or two more is enough room to explore other, interesting and/or cute character concepts and add more replay value. I would disagree with ...
by Zelan
Fri May 18, 2018 10:14 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: SYNC [Puzzle][Dark Sci-Fantasy][Romance][G/BxB]
Replies: 22
Views: 2470

Re: SYNC [Puzzle][Dark Sci-Fantasy][Romance][G/BxB]

The new character cards are incredibly cool!! You did a great job on them, and I adore the art style that all the sprites have. (And it's cool that Adeline uses they/them pronouns! I'm glad to see more characters like them.)
by Zelan
Fri May 18, 2018 10:02 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Kyūbi No Kare (short, noncommercial bxb dating sim) (thoughtdump/brainstorm thread??)
Replies: 2
Views: 279

Re: Kyūbi No Kare (short, noncommercial bxb dating sim) (thoughtdump/brainstorm thread??)

The chibis are cute. c: I'd be interested in playing this when it comes out.
by Zelan
Fri May 18, 2018 5:23 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: ★ DemiDato: Monster Dating Show [ALLxALL] [Dating Show] [Humor] [Demihuman]
Replies: 4
Views: 823

Re: ★ DemiDato: Monster Dating Show [ALLxALL] [Dating Show] [Humor] [Demihuman]

uHM that is the cutest catgirl I've ever seen!! I really like that you made her an actual CATgirl, instead of going the route of an overly sexualized girls with cat ears and a tail. She really looks like a sweetheart and I'm excited for her route. :D Adrien and Dmitri aren't looking too bad themselv...
by Zelan
Fri May 18, 2018 5:01 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chevalier ♦♦♦ [BxB] [Fantasy, drama]
Replies: 29
Views: 3204

Re: Chevalier ♦♦♦ [BxB] [Fantasy, drama]

Oh hey, I'm glad to see that you're posting again! I thought this was a cool idea when I first saw it, and I agree with Lesleigh, every single piece of art you've posted here is absolutely gorgeous. It's definitely a good idea to be careful with how much work you give yourself and limit your scope; ...
by Zelan
Fri May 18, 2018 4:40 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: SchizoValentine [GxB/G] (Romance, Comedy, Parody)
Replies: 52
Views: 8375

Re: SchizoValentine [GxB/G] (Romance, Comedy, Parody)

pretend that it says wacdonalds instead of mcdonalds

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by Zelan
Thu May 17, 2018 12:18 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to not favor a certain character in writing?
Replies: 7
Views: 290

Re: How to not favor a certain character in writing?

Everyone has given good advice so far, but I do think that I should mention that your bias might be more apparent to you as the author. I would get feedback from beta readers or testers on whether Trenton gets too much attention before you worry about it too much, especially considering that you're ...
by Zelan
Thu May 17, 2018 11:33 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Two Questions: MC's Thoughts & Cutting Away to Other Scenes?
Replies: 11
Views: 583

Re: Two Questions: MC's Thoughts & Cutting Away to Other Scenes?

To answer the second point: Cutting away to scenes in a different POV is doable, but can be dicey. The main thing that you have to be careful of is making sure that it's clear that the POV has changed. You could use a different colored text box, you could make the new POV character a side sprite, if...
by Zelan
Thu May 17, 2018 10:43 am
Forum: Other Story-based Games
Topic: Anyone else here play Choices: Stories You Play (Endless Summer specifically)?
Replies: 2
Views: 517

Re: Anyone else here play Choices: Stories You Play (Endless Summer specifically)?

I play Choices as well. I'm on Chapter 7 of Book 3 of Endless Summer. I could have been done already but I decided early on to get every single Ember of Hope; since I get the free diamonds instead of buying them it takes a rather long time. Also joining the party of bitter Most Wanted fans. Even tho...
by Zelan
Thu Mar 15, 2018 8:25 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Way Down in the Locust Grove [NaNo18][Horror][Urban Fantasy]
Replies: 3
Views: 293

Re: Way Down in the Locust Grove [NaNo18][Horror][Urban Fantasy]

Your art style is unique, I haven't seen anything similar on these forums, I don't think. I like it a lot. I'm crossing my fingers that the horror isn't all that terrifying, because this is an awesome concept but I don't do great with horror. Are there going to be frightening images and sounds in t...