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by Zelan
Fri Feb 23, 2018 11:53 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea [GxB][GxG] [Commercial]
Replies: 2
Views: 201

Re: The Devil and the Deep Blue Sea [GxB][GxG] [Commercial]

I did the proofing/testing for this game and I can confirm that it's fantastic. I can't pick a favorite route, which is pretty uncommon for me. c:
by Zelan
Thu Feb 22, 2018 10:47 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Goddess XoXo by DedDanGames [Kickstarter][Drama][BxG][Slice-of-Life]
Replies: 1
Views: 82

Re: Goddess XoXo by DedDanGames [Kickstarter][Drama][BxG][Slice-of-Life]

1. One of the first things you may notice is that we have used a familiar art style(Love Live). In hindsight, I admit it may have been a bad idea, but with the story I had in mind, the art style fit our project. For future projects we will certainly be using a different art style so that the project...
by Zelan
Thu Feb 22, 2018 10:34 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: [Dating sim questions] Would you date a partner who doesn't put you as their first?
Replies: 8
Views: 117

Re: [Dating sim questions] Would you date a partner who doesn't put you as their first?

I think it's a very interesting idea for a VN, since it's true to life. As for my thoughts in real life, I would definitely date someone who didn't always put me as their priority; like you said, people have to juggle lots of things at once. Sometimes, they might need to prioritise themself over me,...
by Zelan
Thu Feb 22, 2018 9:38 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: [GxB] [Mystery/Otome] Phantom of the Blooming Rose: Looking for Talented Members!
Replies: 9
Views: 826

Re: [GxB] [Mystery/Otome] Phantom of the Blooming Rose: Looking for Talented Members!

Just something I noticed - if the region is ruled by the women of the royal family, it should probably be called a queendom instead of a kingdom. c: This looks like a cool project, I hope you can find your line artist soon!
by Zelan
Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:39 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Castaways [GxB] [Otome] [Adventure/Romance]
Replies: 4
Views: 204

Re: Castaways [GxB] [Otome] [Adventure/Romance]

This is a pretty cool idea. At first, the standard "crash land on a remote island and find love" thing didn't catch my attention, but your characters are pretty cool and I like the idea of choosing who crash lands with you at the beginning. That definitely seems like it would add some replayability....
by Zelan
Tue Feb 20, 2018 7:34 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Ballad of a Dream [Perspective of Life][Short]
Replies: 8
Views: 213

Re: Ballad of a Dream [Perspective of Life][Short]

Oh yay, you posted this!! I like the girl's design, it's great to be able to see her. c:
by Zelan
Sun Feb 18, 2018 9:11 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Owl-Woman Oracle [tarot reading simulator]
Replies: 76
Views: 6289

Re: The Owl-Woman Oracle [tarot reading simulator]

That's a really beautiful card, I love the hair. c: You did great with the lighting, too - underwater drawings are really cool.
by Zelan
Sun Feb 18, 2018 8:58 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What do you use to plan your visual novels?
Replies: 9
Views: 240

Re: What do you use to plan your visual novels?

Twine is a pretty powerful and popular software that can be used to map out branching storylines.
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 6:00 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Turner and Lun [Drama][Sci-Fi][Romance (?)]
Replies: 4
Views: 159

Re: Turner and Lun [Drama][Sci-Fi][Romance (?)]

This is a cool idea, I'd definitely read this VN if you made it. Rgarding your 'dead end,' if it doesn't add anything to the story, I would say don't include it. There are a lot of people who see no point to endings like that, especially when it's pretty predictable that a certain choice will lead t...
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 5:54 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: A raw idea for a multi-route KN [Mystery, Murder, Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 167

Re: A raw idea for a multi-route KN [Mystery, Murder, Drama]

I think it could work, for sure. Telling the same story from multiple perspectives is a really great convention, in my opinion. I like your characters, especially the security guard. What seemed interesting about her to you? I know it's a lot to ask with this little information, but any and all opi...
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 5:53 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: furry detective vn! (mystery, furry)
Replies: 11
Views: 352

Re: furry detective vn! (mystery, furry)

Your art style is really gorgeous! I love the CG test.

I like the worldbuilding, too! I don't know enough about Ace Attorney to give you any suggestions, but I like the societal ideals that you have listed. c:
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 3:54 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Palm-of-the-Hand: Carin [Kinetic][Short][Drama]
Replies: 2
Views: 335

Re: Palm-of-the-Hand: Carin [Kinetic][Short][Drama]

I'm not sure how "pinning your ex-girlfriend to the ground and taking her clothes off" translates into "letting her in." I didn't really like the fact that it ended like that. Also, I wish the fact that K had once (possibly more often) hit Carin should have been addressed further. However, I have to...
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 3:51 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Pairs [Fantasy | Sci-Fi | Romance] [NaNo17] Steam, here we come!
Replies: 17
Views: 7008

Re: Pairs [Fantasy | Sci-Fi | Romance] [NaNo17] Steam, here we come!

This NaNo, you say??? Yes please.

And yes, I did see Shida's art in the thread, it's so cuuuute! It's cool to see the "strings," too, I was wondering what they looked like to Ricardo. c:
by Zelan
Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:58 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: A raw idea for a multi-route KN [Mystery, Murder, Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 167

Re: A raw idea for a multi-route KN [Mystery, Murder, Drama]

I think it could work, for sure. Telling the same story from multiple perspectives is a really great convention, in my opinion. I like your characters, especially the security guard.
by Zelan
Thu Feb 15, 2018 6:06 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Soulshine [RPG] [Fantasy] [Near-future] [Mystery]
Replies: 3
Views: 300

Re: Soulshine [RPG] [Fantasy] [Near-future] [Mystery]

Does the premise interest you? What part grabs you the most?: It does! The war itself is what intrigues me the most; I'm curious about what started it? What parts of the world would you (least) like to learn more about?: None, I guess? It all seems cool. Who is your favorite character? Why?: Kay-Cha...