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by Zelan
Sun Jun 24, 2018 5:25 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing in 2nd Person?
Replies: 5
Views: 60

Re: Writing in 2nd Person?

One of the best examples of second person I've seen was in the demo for the game Queen's Crown , which I was so impressed by that I actually wrote a piece of fanfiction for the game that was also in second person, even though I'm not fond of that tense, either. Their strategy, as far as I could tell...
by Zelan
Sat Jun 23, 2018 3:01 pm
Forum: Creative Commons
Topic: ███Namastaii's Music & GUI [Updated November 2016*]███
Replies: 35
Views: 8113

Re: ███Namastaii's Music & GUI [Updated November 2016*]███

Guys I've been gone for so long! I'm really wanting to get back into it. What do you guys think about me creating some themed music sets? I'll create albums that fit to a certain kind of theme or just simply go together really well. But if I create these, I might release them for a price. Would app...
by Zelan
Fri Jun 22, 2018 10:19 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: My art journey~
Replies: 61
Views: 6281

Re: My art journey~

Good to see you again, King-sama! :D I like the hospital background, it looks like something straight out of a horror novel. I wouldn't want to know what just happened in there! And I love the mushroom pictures, they look so pretty!
by Zelan
Fri Jun 22, 2018 10:08 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [Completed][Epistolary][Mystery] Sylvan Disappearance
Replies: 11
Views: 1167

Re: [Completed][Epistolary][Mystery] Sylvan Disappearance

Congratulations!! I'm super excited to play it! ^_^
by Zelan
Thu Jun 21, 2018 10:49 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: ~Nakajo! [BxG][Drama][Slice of Life] 6/21 UPDATE
Replies: 68
Views: 13433

Re: ~Nakajo! [BxG][Drama][Slice of Life] 6/21 UPDATE

I only skimmed your opening post since I'm not a huge fan of BxG, but I just wanted to say that I think it's cool that you have multiple male secondary characters. There are way too many BxG games with 5 romanceable girls, and 1 guy who has maybe a couple lines. It looks like your male characters ar...
by Zelan
Thu Jun 21, 2018 10:39 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Love Hues [LGBT+ friendly][College-Life][Mystery][Rating TBD/16+ for now]
Replies: 13
Views: 1188

Re: Love Hues [LGBT+ friendly][College-Life][Mystery][Rating TBD/16+ for now]

Oh hey, I'm glad to see an update here! I hadn't realized this was still in development. c: 100k words is a huge accomplishment, well done!
by Zelan
Mon Jun 11, 2018 10:21 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 348

Re: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]

Ohhh, Danica is super cute! I hope she at least still gets to appear in the VN. ^_^ And I especially loved the sketches of Alex's in-game outfit and him with his hair down.
by Zelan
Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:58 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 348

Re: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]

Fae is super cute! I agree that the Milk shirt looks incredibly cute on her. (I'd love to see the other concept sketches if you're okay with sharing them!)
by Zelan
Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:56 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: If I Could Love
Replies: 4
Views: 289

Re: If I Could Love

This could actually end up being a pretty sensitive topic and I would suggest being super careful with it. If what your summary means is "the protagonist does not feel romantic love," that would make your protagonist aromantic. This identity is considered by many to be a part of the LGBTQIA communit...
by Zelan
Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:25 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Seriously Senpai Prelude Project [2018 update]
Replies: 6
Views: 1057

Re: Seriously Senpai Prelude Project [2018 update]

I'm sorry to hear you've been having so much trouble, though. :c I hope things are working out for the better.

I'm so glad to see you're still working on this, though! The screenshots look amazing, I love the art style.
by Zelan
Fri Jun 08, 2018 2:31 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Arcadia [NaNo 2018]
Replies: 20
Views: 1964

Re: Arcadia [NaNo 2018]

I have pretty mixed feelings about this VN. I was initially super excited for it and I really wanted to enjoy it, but there were a lot of things that fell flat for me. First things first, all of the art was absolutely gorgeous and you guys did a wonderful job on it, I won't take that away from you. ...
by Zelan
Fri Jun 08, 2018 1:58 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Recollection [NaNoRenO '18] [Kinetic Novel, Drama] [Done!]
Replies: 18
Views: 1497

Re: Recollection [NaNoRenO '18] [Kinetic Novel, Drama] [Done!]

This was a really nice and sweet VN! c: I loved the scene with the fan, that's really a great embodiment of what storytelling is all about. There were some grammatical errors but they didn't detract much from my enjoyment of this VN. Great job!
by Zelan
Thu Jun 07, 2018 3:29 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Dungeons and Don't Do It [GxG][NaNo18][Comedy][Complete Beta]
Replies: 25
Views: 2144

Re: Dungeons and Don't Do It [GxG][NaNo18][Comedy][Complete Beta]

I finally got to play this! It was hilarious, you did a great job coming up with zany situations for the characters to get into. And I grew surprisingly fond of Zeke after just a few scenes. <3 Grace/Yuli managed to take down the wizard pretty much entirely without my help, haha. We had Kuro kill th...
by Zelan
Thu Jun 07, 2018 2:07 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: How to Sing to Open Your Heart- on KICKSTARTER NOW! [commercial,otome,nekomimi,fantasy,cute,fullyvoiced]
Replies: 4
Views: 432

Re: How to Sing to Open Your Heart [commercial,otome,nekomimi,fantasy,cute,fullyvoiced]

13.) Crowdfunding Do not link to crowdfunding campaigns (including kickstarter or indiegogo campaigns) for visual novels or games unless those campaigns include a link to a nontrivial playable demo or a completed game by substantially the same team. This is from the rules thread. If the other games...
by Zelan
Thu Jun 07, 2018 1:53 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Renewed Fate
Replies: 6
Views: 1108

Re: Renewed Fate

ArkticArtz wrote:
Thu Jun 07, 2018 10:56 am
Music: I made all the music haha. So I should uh... credit myself I guess?
Oh, I didn't realize you'd made your own music! I'm so used to new creators finding free resources that I assumed that was what you did. My mistake. c: You did a great job with the music, well done.