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by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 6:00 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Turner and Lun [Drama][Sci-Fi][Romance (?)]
Replies: 1
Views: 43

Re: Turner and Lun [Drama][Sci-Fi][Romance (?)]

This is a cool idea, I'd definitely read this VN if you made it. Rgarding your 'dead end,' if it doesn't add anything to the story, I would say don't include it. There are a lot of people who see no point to endings like that, especially when it's pretty predictable that a certain choice will lead t...
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 5:54 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: A raw idea for a multi-route KN [Mystery, Murder, Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 132

Re: A raw idea for a multi-route KN [Mystery, Murder, Drama]

I think it could work, for sure. Telling the same story from multiple perspectives is a really great convention, in my opinion. I like your characters, especially the security guard. What seemed interesting about her to you? I know it's a lot to ask with this little information, but any and all opi...
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 5:53 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: furry detective vn! (mystery, furry)
Replies: 8
Views: 244

Re: furry detective vn! (mystery, furry)

Your art style is really gorgeous! I love the CG test.

I like the worldbuilding, too! I don't know enough about Ace Attorney to give you any suggestions, but I like the societal ideals that you have listed. c:
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 3:54 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Palm-of-the-Hand: Carin [Kinetic][Short][Drama]
Replies: 1
Views: 159

Re: Palm-of-the-Hand: Carin [Kinetic][Short][Drama]

I'm not sure how "pinning your ex-girlfriend to the ground and taking her clothes off" translates into "letting her in." I didn't really like the fact that it ended like that. Also, I wish the fact that K had once (possibly more often) hit Carin should have been addressed further. However, I have to...
by Zelan
Sat Feb 17, 2018 3:51 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Pairs [Fantasy | Sci-Fi | Romance] [NaNo17] Steam, here we come!
Replies: 17
Views: 6771

Re: Pairs [Fantasy | Sci-Fi | Romance] [NaNo17] Steam, here we come!

This NaNo, you say??? Yes please.

And yes, I did see Shida's art in the thread, it's so cuuuute! It's cool to see the "strings," too, I was wondering what they looked like to Ricardo. c:
by Zelan
Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:58 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: A raw idea for a multi-route KN [Mystery, Murder, Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 132

Re: A raw idea for a multi-route KN [Mystery, Murder, Drama]

I think it could work, for sure. Telling the same story from multiple perspectives is a really great convention, in my opinion. I like your characters, especially the security guard.
by Zelan
Thu Feb 15, 2018 6:06 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Soulshine [RPG] [Fantasy] [Near-future] [Mystery]
Replies: 3
Views: 232

Re: Soulshine [RPG] [Fantasy] [Near-future] [Mystery]

Does the premise interest you? What part grabs you the most?: It does! The war itself is what intrigues me the most; I'm curious about what started it? What parts of the world would you (least) like to learn more about?: None, I guess? It all seems cool. Who is your favorite character? Why?: Kay-Cha...
by Zelan
Tue Feb 13, 2018 10:05 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Pairs [Fantasy | Sci-Fi | Romance] [NaNo17] Steam, here we come!
Replies: 17
Views: 6771

Re: Pairs [Fantasy | Sci-Fi | Romance] [NaNo17] Steam, here we come!

I finished all 8 endings!! You did a really fantastic job on this VN, I'm so blown away by it. (I filled out the survey linked in the OP, by the way!) The writing was so high quality - there were enough references to the lore of the universe that the characters lived in to give me a general idea of ...
by Zelan
Tue Feb 13, 2018 7:38 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Question regarding offering preferred pronouns option for main player character
Replies: 27
Views: 507

Re: Question regarding offering preferred pronouns option for main player character

I know several people who use they, some of whom look gender ambiguous and others who don't. Sometimes this results in gendering errors. If the player has no way to customize the character's appearance, the simplest option might be to have the character look confused and ask "Are you a boy or a gir...
by Zelan
Tue Feb 13, 2018 7:30 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [Kickstarter Live] Turmoil of the Seven [Sci-fi][Drama][Action][Fantasy]
Replies: 5
Views: 229

Re: [Kickstarter Live] Turmoil of the Seven [Sci-fi][Drama][Action][Fantasy]

I did a search and couldn't find anything on Twitter or Tumblr - how are you tagging your game?

I haven't used Fuwanovel myself, but it seems to be a decently popular VN discussion board. I don't know what their policies are regarding posting Kickstarters for your projects, though.
by Zelan
Tue Feb 13, 2018 6:50 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Question regarding offering preferred pronouns option for main player character
Replies: 27
Views: 507

Re: Question regarding offering preferred pronouns option for main player character

In this case, "they" is serving a different purpose. It's not being used to identify a person whose gender is unknown. They is the player's known gender. Using "he" or "it" in this context would be equivalent to saying, "The star of the men's basketball team gave his/her jersey to his/her mother." ...
by Zelan
Tue Feb 13, 2018 6:12 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Ideal [Psychological, Thriller]
Replies: 2
Views: 68

Re: Ideal [Psychological, Thriller]

The idea has some potential. I'm assuming that a player would have to play Route 1 before Route 2 even became an option? I'm curious as to how you would plan on balancing the "lighter" side of the man's ideology with the "darker" side, especially if you plan for the darker side to be mostly hidden i...
by Zelan
Tue Feb 13, 2018 6:07 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Question regarding offering preferred pronouns option for main player character
Replies: 27
Views: 507

Re: Question regarding offering preferred pronouns option for main player character

In this case, "they" is serving a different purpose. It's not being used to identify a person whose gender is unknown. They is the player's known gender. Using "he" or "it" in this context would be equivalent to saying, "The star of the men's basketball team gave his/her jersey to his/her mother." ...
by Zelan
Tue Feb 13, 2018 3:06 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [Kickstarter Live] Turmoil of the Seven [Sci-fi][Drama][Action][Fantasy]
Replies: 5
Views: 229

Re: [Kickstarter Live] Turmoil of the Seven [Sci-fi][Drama][Action][Fantasy]

I remember seeing this on Kickstarter last year. 35k is still quite a chunk of change to ask strangers for to finance your game - however, I haven't played your demo, so maybe it's even better than I'm imagining and you'll get a lot of people interested. Have you posted about this game anywhere else...
by Zelan
Mon Feb 12, 2018 6:29 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Citrus Baton [Social Sim/Sports Management Sim] [BxB/G] [Early Development]
Replies: 3
Views: 261

Re: Citrus Baton [Social Sim/Sports Management Sim] [BxB/G] [Early Development]

"What would you like to see added in the future?": I can't think of anything in particular, this seems like a pretty well thought-out idea. "Do you appreciate the Friendship-Over-Romance Aspect? Why or why not?": I do! There are an awful lot of VNs that equate friendship with 'bad ends.' The indie V...