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by Zelan
Mon Jun 11, 2018 10:21 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 302

Re: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]

Ohhh, Danica is super cute! I hope she at least still gets to appear in the VN. ^_^ And I especially loved the sketches of Alex's in-game outfit and him with his hair down.
by Zelan
Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:58 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 302

Re: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]

Fae is super cute! I agree that the Milk shirt looks incredibly cute on her. (I'd love to see the other concept sketches if you're okay with sharing them!)
by Zelan
Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:56 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: If I Could Love
Replies: 4
Views: 258

Re: If I Could Love

This could actually end up being a pretty sensitive topic and I would suggest being super careful with it. If what your summary means is "the protagonist does not feel romantic love," that would make your protagonist aromantic. This identity is considered by many to be a part of the LGBTQIA communit...
by Zelan
Sat Jun 09, 2018 3:25 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Seriously Senpai Prelude Project [2018 update]
Replies: 6
Views: 1013

Re: Seriously Senpai Prelude Project [2018 update]

I'm sorry to hear you've been having so much trouble, though. :c I hope things are working out for the better.

I'm so glad to see you're still working on this, though! The screenshots look amazing, I love the art style.
by Zelan
Fri Jun 08, 2018 2:31 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Arcadia [NaNo 2018]
Replies: 19
Views: 1652

Re: Arcadia [NaNo 2018]

I have pretty mixed feelings about this VN. I was initially super excited for it and I really wanted to enjoy it, but there were a lot of things that fell flat for me. First things first, all of the art was absolutely gorgeous and you guys did a wonderful job on it, I won't take that away from you. ...
by Zelan
Fri Jun 08, 2018 1:58 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Recollection [NaNoRenO '18] [Kinetic Novel, Drama] [Done!]
Replies: 18
Views: 1270

Re: Recollection [NaNoRenO '18] [Kinetic Novel, Drama] [Done!]

This was a really nice and sweet VN! c: I loved the scene with the fan, that's really a great embodiment of what storytelling is all about. There were some grammatical errors but they didn't detract much from my enjoyment of this VN. Great job!
by Zelan
Thu Jun 07, 2018 3:29 pm
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: Dungeons and Don't Do It [GxG][NaNo18][Comedy][Complete Beta]
Replies: 25
Views: 1834

Re: Dungeons and Don't Do It [GxG][NaNo18][Comedy][Complete Beta]

I finally got to play this! It was hilarious, you did a great job coming up with zany situations for the characters to get into. And I grew surprisingly fond of Zeke after just a few scenes. <3 Grace/Yuli managed to take down the wizard pretty much entirely without my help, haha. We had Kuro kill th...
by Zelan
Thu Jun 07, 2018 2:07 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: How to Sing to Open Your Heart- on KICKSTARTER NOW! [commercial,otome,nekomimi,fantasy,cute,fullyvoiced]
Replies: 4
Views: 365

Re: How to Sing to Open Your Heart [commercial,otome,nekomimi,fantasy,cute,fullyvoiced]

13.) Crowdfunding Do not link to crowdfunding campaigns (including kickstarter or indiegogo campaigns) for visual novels or games unless those campaigns include a link to a nontrivial playable demo or a completed game by substantially the same team. This is from the rules thread. If the other games...
by Zelan
Thu Jun 07, 2018 1:53 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Renewed Fate
Replies: 6
Views: 958

Re: Renewed Fate

ArkticArtz wrote:
Thu Jun 07, 2018 10:56 am
Music: I made all the music haha. So I should uh... credit myself I guess?
Oh, I didn't realize you'd made your own music! I'm so used to new creators finding free resources that I assumed that was what you did. My mistake. c: You did a great job with the music, well done.
by Zelan
Wed Jun 06, 2018 11:55 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Zeta Wolf Chronicles [BxG][Romance][Slice of Life][School Life]
Replies: 3
Views: 362

Re: Zeta Wolf Chronicles [BxG][Romance][Slice of Life][School Life]

However, unlike Amagami SS, each heroine is presented at a different point of the protagonist's life instead of bombarding all of the girls at you at once. So, in order to romance the 2nd girl you have to "go through" or "experience" the first girl and so on. There will be routes that allow you to ...
by Zelan
Wed Jun 06, 2018 11:50 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]
Replies: 5
Views: 302

Re: VStrife: Virtual Reality Gaming and Personal Problems [Kinetic][Drama]

This seems like a really cool idea, and I love your art style. Looking forward to seeing more of this! c:
by Zelan
Wed Jun 06, 2018 10:14 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Renewed Fate
Replies: 6
Views: 958

Re: Renewed Fate

I think that the concept you have here is super interesting, but the VN felt rushed in parts and I think you could have fleshed out the characters more. Their backstories were clear; their personalities, less so. There were also a lot of grammatical errors and the script could really use a run-throu...
by Zelan
Wed Jun 06, 2018 3:44 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [STEAM release] Yakuza Kiss [18+] [GxB] [Romance] [Crime] [Drama]
Replies: 6
Views: 599

Re: Yakuza Kiss [GxB] [Romance] [Crime] [Drama]

I remember seeing the original post for this. Congratulations on coming so far! ^_^ I'm sure it took a lot of hard work. 1. How would you advertise a VN like this? In an effort to reach my core demographic, I've chosen to brand this VN as "an adult visual novel for the feminine audience". I know som...
by Zelan
Wed Jun 06, 2018 3:28 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [Kickstarter Funded!] As We Know It [GxB][GXG][VN][Romance|Drama|Apocalypse][DEMO out now!]
Replies: 61
Views: 7125

Re: [Kickstarter Funded!] As We Know It [GxB][GXG][VN][Romance|Drama|Apocalypse][DEMO out now!]

Congratulations on getting fully funded! I can't wait to see the new customization options. c:
by Zelan
Sun Jun 03, 2018 12:40 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Thorn Prince[regency][BxG]
Replies: 23
Views: 3128

Re: The Thorn Prince[regency][BxG]

I really like how you've drawn the lady in the red dress. The way that she holds her head and sets her mouth communicates her personality without any dialogue whatsoever. (And her dress is pretty fabulous.)