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by Dreamweaver
Sun Apr 10, 2016 6:34 pm
Forum: WiP: Short Noncommercial Games
Topic: Wolf & Red's Love♥Story[Otome] [GxB] [Fantasy/Romance]
Replies: 31
Views: 7709

Re: Wolf & Red's Love♥Story[Otome] [GxB] [Fantasy/Romance]

@Dreamweaver Thank you so much!! and ah,yup my English is little horrendous...-_-'' eheheh... One reasons I wanted to try making visual novels was so that I could train my English and some other things... My friend promised to be my ah, proofreader/editor... but even she's not native, so thank you ...
by Dreamweaver
Sun Apr 10, 2016 4:13 am
Forum: WiP: Short Noncommercial Games
Topic: Wolf & Red's Love♥Story[Otome] [GxB] [Fantasy/Romance]
Replies: 31
Views: 7709

Re: Wolf & Red's Love♥Story[Otome] [GxB] [Fantasy/Romance]

Although you probably find someone so much better than me, if you like, I could try to clean up the writing for you. I'm not the best at it, but I'll try to make it presentable. For example: "Once upon time there’s a small village and in that village lived a girl named Beni, her mom's ill, so Beni w...
by Dreamweaver
Tue Apr 05, 2016 11:09 pm
Forum: WiP: Short Noncommercial Games
Topic: City Pulse (working) [Kinect Novel] [Slice of life] [Drama]
Replies: 3
Views: 938

Re: City Pulse (working) [Kinect Novel] [Slice of life] [Dra

First off, thank you for taking the time to read through it! :D Tetsuya and Brianna's first conversation makes for a really great first impression. (heh, Tetsuya gets embarrassed easily.) gosh, the characters are really good! they're really distinct and builds a solid personality in my mind. It mean...
by Dreamweaver
Tue Apr 05, 2016 3:44 am
Forum: WiP: Short Noncommercial Games
Topic: City Pulse (working) [Kinect Novel] [Slice of life] [Drama]
Replies: 3
Views: 938

City Pulse (working) [Kinect Novel] [Slice of life] [Drama]

Hi, there! I'm pretty new to this whole Ren'py thing, but we all gotta start somewhere, right? Well, I dabbled a bit with the engine to try to make something to "showcase" my writing. Now, I'm not the best writer in the world — I know I could sure use some improvement — but I just wanted to try some...