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Aahh, this is embarrassing. I forgot about that. It's my first time attempting to write for a VN, so I am looking for feedback on the writing style, choice of words, and pacing of the story. Or anything else that seasoned writers would feel awkward about my writing. I have a read a few "guidelines" ...

Hi everyone, I started reading recently (beginning of this year), then slowly started VNs last month, and for the first time in my life, I've considered writing a VN. I've been an programmer/artist my whole life so I'm not good with words, but I hope it's not too late to start. Thank you in advance!...