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by robovelociraptor
Thu Sep 27, 2018 11:50 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Sorbet's Scribbles
Replies: 3
Views: 339

Re: Sorbet's Scribbles

hiya! i think your first sprite is a really good start! your anatomy is great and i think you have a decent idea of where to put shading and highlights. i have a few critiques, however, one being that i think it would serve you well to darken your shading and change it's hue around a bit! an example...
by robovelociraptor
Thu Sep 27, 2018 9:47 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]
Replies: 56
Views: 4401

Re: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]

haha, they're just designs, not specific characters at all. i wanted to try drawing kissing for the first time in a little less than a decade. why thank you! i've been trying to draw without focusing too hard on a consistent style. while i think it's better if you're offering commissions or working ...
by robovelociraptor
Thu Sep 27, 2018 7:58 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]
Replies: 56
Views: 4401

Re: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]

@Zelan -- thank you very much, and i apologize for the late reply! mm, i get what you're saying, i do feel as though i'm more confident in what i want to make. i don't think every drawing is amazing by any means, but i am more comfortable pushing myself. :) thank you for your support! @King-sama -- ...
by robovelociraptor
Fri Sep 14, 2018 6:51 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Harick's Art
Replies: 120
Views: 8726

Re: Harick's Art

wow, i remember seeing your first post in this thread years ago now and you've improved so much, my goodness!! wonderful work you've been producing as of late. i really like your landscape, it's painted in such a soft manner, it makes me feel relaxed looking at it. ^^ amazing improvement upon your h...
by robovelociraptor
Fri Sep 14, 2018 6:45 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]
Replies: 56
Views: 4401

Re: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]

yo, long time no see. been busy with some stuff, a long story, but here we are now! hope you can enjoy my work once more. some of these are posted to my twitter, i should note, so if you've somehow seen any of these before, i have not become a plagiarist over the time i was absent lol. garbage fixed...
by robovelociraptor
Tue Jun 06, 2017 7:17 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]
Replies: 56
Views: 4401

Re: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]

Hi, Been buried by work. Yes that looks good, there are a few things with some of the less major perspective, but that's come a long way. Yeah, having the car off the road is no issue at all, that kind of thing can happen. If I get chance I'll mark up the couple of things I'd spotted, but looks goo...
by robovelociraptor
Sat May 27, 2017 10:41 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: VN game jam.
Replies: 7
Views: 959

Re: VN game jam.

I like this idea! Having to keep a public log on what you're doing adds some pressure to actually finish what you're doing, especially if you've garnered fans. I think it's a good kick-off for people who don't really have time to do anything in March for NaNoRenO and have never created a VN before. ...
by robovelociraptor
Sat May 27, 2017 9:55 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: Miira's Art Stuff
Replies: 10
Views: 1110

Re: Miira's Art Stuff

Omg, your style, your coloring, your lines, they're all just soo freaking good! I love your color choices in all of them and the way you drew/colored her natural hair in the first drawing!! I would definitely play a game with your art!
by robovelociraptor
Fri May 26, 2017 7:16 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [UPDATED DEMO]1st Degree [BxB][Crime/Drama/Romance]
Replies: 160
Views: 25102

Re: 1st Degree [BxB] [Mystery/Suspense/Drama]

I'm loving all the new art, and GlassHeart's a fantastic background artist!

You guys are making a lot of progress, I'm so hyped!
by robovelociraptor
Fri May 26, 2017 7:08 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: What are legit pose references?
Replies: 10
Views: 1736

Re: What are legit pose references?

Banya wrote:@robovelociraptor: thank you very much! It would help a lot, can I send you some of my drawings sometimes?
Sure! Just shoot me a PM~ ^^
by robovelociraptor
Tue May 23, 2017 5:08 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: Best Friends Forever [GxB/GxG][Fantasy/School] DEMO 2 NOW UP
Replies: 10
Views: 1665

Re: Best Friends Forever [GxB/GxG][Fantasy/School-Life] DEMO

What did you think of the premise? I had a feeling someone was going to die/get seriously injured, but I definitely wasn't expecting it to be Saffron! Props to you for that surprise. I like the idea of the player being able to influence not just Saffron's actions, but Melody's as well. I'm curious ...
by robovelociraptor
Thu May 18, 2017 7:04 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]
Replies: 56
Views: 4401

Re: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]

Alright! Made adjustments my drawing based on your suggestions, and I think it looks considerably better than before! What do you think? fix928.png I messed with the composition a bit, and ended up cropping it + moving some things around, too. Also, I know that based on where I placed the lines for ...
by robovelociraptor
Tue May 16, 2017 9:59 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: What are legit pose references?
Replies: 10
Views: 1736

Re: What are legit pose references?

Uhmm... it's more complicated. I generally try to emulate some poses or expressions from MMD models videos. I'd like to use this methos for the CGs of a VN, but I don't know if I should copyright the artists of the videos or not. Or anyway ask if I can use some poses... it sounds quite odd to me ^^...
by robovelociraptor
Tue May 16, 2017 9:00 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Art
Topic: What are legit pose references?
Replies: 10
Views: 1736

Re: What are legit pose references?

A lot of the stuff you mentioned isn't actually bad. Taking a pose from a drawing isn't bad, and neither is taking inspiration from another drawing. No one owns a pose. As long as you aren't tracing someone else's work, and maybe you mention the person you took inspiration from/used a pose from, you...
by robovelociraptor
Tue May 16, 2017 7:27 pm
Forum: Personal Art Threads
Topic: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]
Replies: 56
Views: 4401

Re: misleading username [ critiques welcome! ]

Thank you so much for the markup and the gif you made!! It's very helpful!! It is actually on a hill, so how much does that change it from the markup you did? Should I make the horizon more curved to reflect this, too? Does the vanishing point always have to be in the very center? Also, I tried to f...