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I forgot to mention, this game has been released!

q9KLGu.png Sophie the Witch A group of villagers knocking on a witch's door is never a good sign! Sophie must keep a cool head if she is to convince them that there is nothing strange going on in her forest while her adopted fairy daughter runs and hides. Bella, her daughter, is a incredibly rare m...

Length ~11k words | Kinetic Novel | Part of the Winter VN Jam 2021 “A story of tragedy during the happiest time of the year.” E4893D4B-22FF-4CC2-B021-6D41508D7999.png While trying to give her adopted daughter the perfect Christmas, Sophie must also plan a funeral for a close family friend. Her frie...

I am looking for someone with writing experience to help with my VN. Its not NSFW and is part fantasy and comedy. Here is the help wanted thread: https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=59&t=63506&p=547969#p547969 The position is called "Script Supervisor" the duties are ...

pv_scylla wrote: ↑Wed Nov 17, 2021 3:11 am Hi, I'm interested in the artist role! Are you still looking for one?

We’re looking for a bg artist still! Feel free to PM me or my discord is in the post.

Hey would you like to help out my project? I am looking for someone to read over my script and provide feedback. Let me know if you are interested!

Hey! Looking for someone to help with my project! No actual writing needed, just want someone who will read my script and give feedback on how to make it better. Are you still available?

Trigger Warning: This story will contain themes of drug use, and suicide.   "In my desperation to relive the memories we had together... I made some decisions." "A syringe rolls off my sheets and onto the floor." lowres.jpg   Sophie is trying to kill herself She won't forgive he...

Maple0 wrote: ↑Wed Nov 10, 2021 12:51 pm You should leave an email or a discord username, it would be easy for people to reach you.

Good point! I updated the description.

The Witch and the Fairy   TheWitchAndTheFairyPromoSmall.jpg   Genres: Fantasy, Psychological, Nagike, Comedy Length: About 20,000 - 30,000 words Sophie is a lonely witch who lives alone deep in the forest running her potion business. One day while out gathering ingredients she hears a strange noise...

That was fantastic. Strong emotional core, steady buildup of tension and an intense moment of release. The layers you describe work great and show a strong understanding of your protagonist. Good job. As far as how to articulate the crying, I'd love to see what it is like for the sprite of Sophie t...

What's the context around the crying scene? If it just suddenly happens, that may be why it feels flat. First of just want to mention that I wrote this on my phone so if there’s weird mistakes or strange words it was my bad / autocorrect. The scene is a flashback but I’ll give you context to what’s...

Thanks! That was really helpful! I’m going to try to rewrite what I had using both your notes!

Thank you very much! That was very insightful!

In my VN I have plenty of scenes where the characters are crying, for various reasons. When I read them back, they all feel like they fall kind of flat and don’t really have any impact. This was really present with a scene I wrote where a child is climbing on a kitchen counter and slips and falls hu...