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by ForkAndKnife
Thu Mar 30, 2017 11:54 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Where the Sun Always Shines [SoL, friendship, NaNo17]
Replies: 6
Views: 2272

Re: Where the Sun Always Shines [SoL, friendship, NaNo17]

This looks so cute! I love the comic book style text bubbles and I'm interested to see how this unlikely duo came together. I'll definitely be giving this a play in the next few days. - and I just happen to have an irrational love for Gerard Butler, B-list actor extraordinaire. This is the game for ...
by ForkAndKnife
Fri Jan 20, 2017 4:09 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: VN's Without Narration
Replies: 22
Views: 2095

Re: VN's Without Narration

Wow, thank you guys for all the replies and words of encouragement! There's so much difference of opinion and some back and forth here, too. Sorry I haven't responded until now. After reading a few comments, I dove deep into a rabbit hole of self-doubt and being afraid to continue writing. I have re...
by ForkAndKnife
Tue Jan 10, 2017 6:16 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: VN's Without Narration
Replies: 22
Views: 2095

VN's Without Narration

Hi, all! I've been working on the script for my VN Street Couch. The script is heavily, heavily dialogue-based, and so far I haven't had a need for any point-blank narration (ex: Alex jumped on the table defiantly). Instead, I would write " Alex : I'm gonna do it! I'm gonna get up there!; Josie : Do...
by ForkAndKnife
Tue Dec 13, 2016 4:13 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Silent Voices [Psychological][Romance][Sci-fi][Kickstarter]
Replies: 62
Views: 10417

Re: Silent Voices [GxB][Psychological][Romance]

This game looks amazing! When I started reading the description, it sounded like a fantasy game (with kings, kingdoms, knights and all that), but reading further, I was surprised to see it seems more sci-fi. The way you've linked those two concepts is really interesting! I like how you've incorporat...
by ForkAndKnife
Thu Dec 08, 2016 10:27 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: A NEAR DAWN ♣ [Thriller x Mystery x Comedy] < Play the Prologue! >
Replies: 159
Views: 21510

Re: A NEAR DAWN ♣ [Thriller] [Mystery] [Psychological]

I just ran across this thread today and I'm really excited to see how it turns out! I especially like that you're using some flash animation. It really sets your project apart from others I've seen. It's also great to see such a diverse set of characters. You hardly see older characters in VN's (or ...
by ForkAndKnife
Tue Nov 29, 2016 2:37 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: The Devil of Saint Mechtilde (Horror, Otome, GxB, GxG)
Replies: 14
Views: 1962

Re: The Devil of Saint Mechtilde (Horror, Otome, GxB, GxG)

This thread really piqued my interest, and after seeing that your profile picture was Mac from Always Sunny, I felt compelled to comment haha. We must be kindred spirits. -Is it interesting?/Does it sound fun? Yes! I'm really interested in the supernatural (probably a little too much), so it would b...
by ForkAndKnife
Wed Sep 07, 2016 12:05 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Packing too much into a short section?
Replies: 2
Views: 560

Re: Packing too much into a short section?

Thanks for your reply! I guess I'm sort of contemplating who the MC is, myself. Planning the story, I imagined it would be Josie, but as I wrote, it seemed more natural to have Lou take that role. Maybe the player will be the "god" of the game and just determine everyone's actions. As far as the cur...
by ForkAndKnife
Tue Sep 06, 2016 3:45 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Packing too much into a short section?
Replies: 2
Views: 560

Packing too much into a short section?

Hi, everyone. I've been working on a script for my first VN and would like a little feedback on a few issues I'm worried about. Just some quick background on the story: "Street Couch" (working title) is a comedic VN inspired by the movie version of Scott Pilgrim Vs. The World . It is about a band tr...
by ForkAndKnife
Tue Sep 06, 2016 2:49 am
Forum: Welcome!
Topic: Guestbook
Replies: 5222
Views: 1224883

Re: Guestbook

Hey, everyone! I've been a lurker for a while and it's nice to finally have a profile. I am a 20 year old girl from the US. I'm a full-time college student with hopes of graduating early. I'm also hoping to get my VN underway, but as I have a terrible habit of starting projects and never finishing t...