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We are happy to announce that English translation of our visual novel is finally released in Steam!
You can dowload it for free.
http://store.steampowered.com/app/62053 ... apter_one/

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Hello! My name is Mila and I am a writer and programmer from Emanon Studio. The project we are working on now is "Mirt. The Tales of Cold Lands", a mystical visual novel (https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=40526&hilit=mirt#p429642) We are Russian-speaking team s...

I would argue with number one. It's true that his quote is casual by comparison, but that could be intentional. It depends on what you guys (the developers) had intended for his character. Yeah, I agree with you on that. If the casual tone is an intentional part of his character, go for it! However...

Thank you! I still need feedback, every correction would be really helpful. In that case, here you go: 1. In Mark's quote, his speech is too casual, compared to the other quotes. It should be either "What are you gonna do when it all comes out?" (still somewhat casual), "What are you...

This looks very interesting to me. I'm especially drawn to the unique, painterly backgrounds. That is some great work, already giving me a lovely sense of the atmosphere you are going for. You also gave me just enough about the story to get me interested and make me want to know more. The last two ...

I like the character designs. They don't remind me of a specific artist or a specific work. Were the drawings inspired by anything? Not really. We were imagining them in process :) Will the story be released as five separate episodes? Or will it be a standalone release which has five chapters? The ...

J-Ray wrote:The art looks great and the story sounds intriguing...
Love atmospheric backgrounds and the painting style.
Good luck with this project!

Thank you for the reply!

PetPeeve wrote:Ooo... I really love the art it seems unique, and I'm excited to see more.

Thank you a lot for the feedback!

Zelan wrote:Oooh, this seems interesting.

(Your English is perfect, by the way. I'm a total stickler for grammar and I wouldn't have guessed that you weren't native. c:)

I'm really glad to hear it, thank you!

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