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by SilentMonkey
Wed Sep 04, 2019 4:06 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to create immersive dialogue that progresses the scene?
Replies: 5
Views: 3179

Re: How to create immersive dialogue that progresses the scene?

As the comment before me said, there is no one way to do this. But here is the way I learned to do this after many failed attempts and getting yelled at by my English professors and I thank them for it:) It sounds like you want the player to be fully immersed inside your story. To be able to place t...
by SilentMonkey
Tue Sep 03, 2019 1:26 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Sprites - art vs narrative description inconsistencies
Replies: 8
Views: 3373

Re: Sprites - art vs narrative description inconsistencies

I don't think most people will mind at all if a sprite has only 1 pose if it is presented effectively. Detailed description is EVERYTHING if one does or doesn't have the luxury of using multiple sprites. It can at times be more valuable in bringing a character or scene to life than simply changing o...
by SilentMonkey
Sun Sep 01, 2019 10:38 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Sympathizing with a 'Bad' character
Replies: 3
Views: 2993

Sympathizing with a 'Bad' character

A situation I have been thinking on for nearly a week now. What is everyone's thoughts on character(s) getting in the way or being responsible for the main character(s) misfortune. If the 'bad guy/girl' has a good reason for doing what he does and you even come to like them beforehand; Have you ever...
by SilentMonkey
Wed May 09, 2018 3:01 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Death In Daylight [Action/Conspiracy/Futuristic/Cyberpunk]-recruiting(2019)
Replies: 1
Views: 998

Re: Death In Daylight [Action/Conspiracy/Futuristic/Cyberpunk]

Main Characters as of 9/1/19 - (There are much more characters in the story but I would rather keep them a surprise than flood this post with extensive information. Their images will be uploaded in the following weeks once I can finally be happy with their designs. I am excited to share them with yo...
by SilentMonkey
Fri Feb 02, 2018 10:21 pm
Forum: I am a Musician, Sound Editor, or Video Editor
Topic: [Open] Music composer for hire
Replies: 11
Views: 2462

Re: [Hire] Music composer / sounddesigner

Out of curiosity, do you have any experience creating any synth-wave music or anything along the lines of downtempo?
by SilentMonkey
Tue Jan 30, 2018 3:10 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Climaxes and Player Knowledge
Replies: 15
Views: 1649

Re: Climaxes and Player Knowledge

For example, say your story is about an assassin beginning to feel guilt. The climax will be the choice to kill someone and accept that she is a killer, or let the target go and realize she's more than just a dog of the military. If a player wants to go on the "Changed Woman" route, the choices the...
by SilentMonkey
Wed Jan 24, 2018 4:56 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Climaxes and Player Knowledge
Replies: 15
Views: 1649

Re: Climaxes and Player Knowledge

Thanks for all the input XD I was thinking of adding a sudden bad end mid-route in my story if certain points weren't accumulated, but to prevent it from being inconsequential, I'll try to give it more weight. Though, I think it shouldn't be so long as to make the player think there's more coming. ...
by SilentMonkey
Tue Jan 23, 2018 6:43 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Climaxes and Player Knowledge
Replies: 15
Views: 1649

Re: Climaxes and Player Knowledge

I am glad that you brought this discussion up because I am only halfway through my project since I started it two years ago; wondering if I am wasting my time writing a bad arc that nobody ever accepts as the true ending. My final thoughts on the matter is this: 1) You have a good ending that one wo...
by SilentMonkey
Thu Nov 09, 2017 10:13 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing process
Replies: 6
Views: 757

Re: Writing process

So, I will start to write the plot of my personal VN; however, I still need to learn to make VNs (obviously xD) and creating all the assets. So, when writing; its better to write it like a script (as will be shown in the VN) or should I write like an actual novel? Example; there is a script writing...
by SilentMonkey
Thu Oct 20, 2016 12:48 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: </reality> [Sci-Fi][Fantasy][Philosophy] Demo Available
Replies: 48
Views: 8143

Re: </reality> [Sci-Fi][Fantasy][Philosophy] Trailer

Some very interesting stuff!
Looking forward to seeing it when it is finished.
Nice work guys/girls:)
by SilentMonkey
Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:34 pm
Forum: We are a Free Project looking for Partners
Topic: [Comedy][SciFi] Spy x Scientist (Open)
Replies: 4
Views: 1279

Re: [Comedy][SciFi] Spy x Scientist (Open)

I like the whole idea, spy/undercover work has always intrigued me. I wouldn't say my strength is in to much comedy but I do have a small example of the type you are looking for with a bith of both a small comedic and serious environment. Being inside the characters head and having them speak approp...
by SilentMonkey
Mon Oct 17, 2016 4:40 pm
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: RAINPORT (CANCELLED)
Replies: 4
Views: 1018

Re: RAINPORT (In Development)

Only complaint is why did I have to download it? Couldn't we have played it on the web? I'll look into this, I don't know how to do this yet, if you have any info/link would be appreciated. Thanks for the feedback. :) Hmm it was made with ren'py so I'm afraid I'm unfamiliar with how exactly you get...
by SilentMonkey
Mon Oct 17, 2016 2:43 am
Forum: Demos & Beta Testing
Topic: RAINPORT (CANCELLED)
Replies: 4
Views: 1018

Re: RAINPORT (In Development)

I think it will be a nice little story. I don't trust the pastor, something fishy about him. I can feel it. Even when I went back and was rude to him the second time he was still cheery...yep real suspicious. There's not much I can say about it since it was a rather short intro but I am interested i...
by SilentMonkey
Fri Oct 14, 2016 8:52 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Death In Daylight [Action/Conspiracy/Futuristic/Cyberpunk]-recruiting(2019)
Replies: 1
Views: 998

Death In Daylight [Action/Conspiracy/Futuristic/Cyberpunk]-recruiting(2019)

-2118 The world has changed for the worst. Survival of the fittest is king in 'Neon Tokyo'. Agencies control different districts of the area with their own laws and rules to follow, whats left of society is nothing but a pale comparison to what it once was. Scholars are no longer needed, only those ...
by SilentMonkey
Sun Oct 09, 2016 2:55 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Silence In Daylight
Replies: 2
Views: 527

Re: Silence In Daylight

Hey there! So I checked out your demo, and I have some feedback for you: 1. Writing "Promises" - The demo largely focuses on introducing the school, and how it is a unique and special place. However, that alone is only mildly intriguing. If you really want to pull me in and make me care about this ...