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by Luxraysrock
Sat Aug 04, 2018 12:00 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Astaleth's Mages [GxB][Adventure/Drama/School/Romance]
Replies: 4
Views: 813

Re: Astaleth's Mages [GxB][Adventure/Drama/School/Romance]

Whoa, thanks for the replies, everyone!! My comment will be a bit long so I can properly respond to you all! @YuukiCrossPudding: The plot is pretty good! What interesting for me is this will be in a military academy with magic! I think it reminds me of a movie with similar background, but it's not a...
by Luxraysrock
Sat Jun 30, 2018 9:36 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Astaleth's Mages [GxB][Adventure/Drama/School/Romance]
Replies: 4
Views: 813

Astaleth's Mages [GxB][Adventure/Drama/School/Romance]

ASTALETH'S MAGES A magical military academy, a deceased sister, and a girl with a grudge… SYNOPSIS: It is the year 1005. On the fictional continent of Shaice lie three countries: Kevnaria to the north, Unales to the east, and Astaleth to the south. The three countries are separated by the large inl...
by Luxraysrock
Fri May 18, 2018 4:45 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to not favor a certain character in writing?
Replies: 7
Views: 918

Re: How to not favor a certain character in writing?

Everyone has given good advice so far, but I do think that I should mention that your bias might be more apparent to you as the author. I would get feedback from beta readers or testers on whether Trenton gets too much attention before you worry about it too much, especially considering that you're...
by Luxraysrock
Fri May 11, 2018 9:04 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to not favor a certain character in writing?
Replies: 7
Views: 918

Re: How to not favor a certain character in writing?

My first thought is that all of the characters need to be different (if they aren't already). There's no real reason to play an otome if all the characters are essentially the same, just with different hair colors. :) After that, I'd focus on what makes them differently cool and what you like about...
by Luxraysrock
Thu May 10, 2018 6:55 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to not favor a certain character in writing?
Replies: 7
Views: 918

How to not favor a certain character in writing?

This character was supposed to be the true/canon route during the early ideas stage of my otome VN, and this made total and complete sense so as I brainstormed and wrote more, I fell in love with him. He is without a doubt my favorite character to write, even though I'm a bit ashamed to admit that, ...
by Luxraysrock
Tue Apr 17, 2018 3:44 pm
Forum: I am an Artist
Topic: 2D Illustrator looking for paid work(or just regular commissions)
Replies: 2
Views: 493

Re: 2D Illustrator looking for paid work

Your art is breathtakingly gorgeous!! I'm not quite ready for an artist for my project yet, but I will be bookmarking you for the future! Your rates are so cheap, too >.<

I hope lots of people commission you!
by Luxraysrock
Wed Oct 12, 2016 6:14 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Kokorogawari [GxB Drama] [CHAP 1+2 DEMO] [STEAM GREENLIGHT]
Replies: 37
Views: 7879

Re: Kokorogawari [TRIAL UPLOADED] [GxB] [Drama, Romance] [Co

Hi! I played through the demo a few days ago and wanted to give you all some feedback. First off, I can't relate to Asami in many ways, but I like her a lot, and with the way she's written, I can feel how strong-minded (albeit closed-minded) she is. She's a very refreshing change from the relate-abl...