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Okay! So most of the progress since the last time I said anything here has still been written and I edited the main post to reflect that along with some other things, however I may have finally gotten to an art style and quality that I'm okay with? Which is a huge step moving forward! Here's a test/...

I want to update about my progress on the game since there's been a lot but it's all script/story stuff so... I'm definitely going to switch up the art style though. At least a little. I'm sure I need more detailed/expressive eyes but further than that, we'll see. I was thinking even something akin ...

I'm glad yall like her design! And thank you so much for all the feedback!
In the earliest sketches Cecily looked even more like Louise. I changed her hair to offset it a bit but...Her pouty, stuck up expressions really don't help.

Realized what I typed out before was too long and details that only I really need so I'm revising this update a bit and adding a few questions instead. Living girls : -Petra is a typical, backstabbing two faced mean girl. She actively talks shit about Cecily whenever she isn't around and is more tha...

Thanks everyone for the responses! I'm really happy to see people interested in this idea. :) Going to try and respond to everything here in one post and then post another with some sketches and junk in a bit. @nekobara -I'm glad Leo caught your eye! The more I think and write out this idea, the mor...

An idea I had while working on "Down in the River" for a more action based VN, that I'll officially start work on after that's finished. For now, I just want to get the idea down and get some feedback on it for future reference. It's basically the opposite of that game, as it's more action...

A quick update with some side characters! I also changed the first post a little and added color roughs for the main characters. Currently messing with their poses, expressions, and outfits. Lily's route specifically needs significant rewrites and Lavender's needs to be fleshed out more. Violet's ne...

=Is the premise any interesting? Yes! I like VN's with a clear goal/direction and this one's pretty unique. =Did you like the characters? So far Vik herself is the most interesting. I'm not sure how I feel for the boys as of yet. They both seem to be of the "takes a while to open up" varie...

What do you like so far? I really like the art style! Cute, but it fits well and the designs fit really well with the character bios. Kind of a weird thing but I also love that the characters are all working adults. Just makes it easier to sympathize with, I guess? The wild west setting is nice too...

Violet looks like she's 5 years old. No where near 18. Yikes, I didn't think she looked that young. I'll mess with her design a bit and see what I can do... Problem is she needs to remain a similar size to Dahlia who is significantly younger than the main cast. And she loses the creepy child appeal...

Hmmm, okay. In that case, I don't have a problem with the character any more - in fact, she's much more interesting to me now (second after Rose). I thin the problem here is the word choice - I wouldn't use "not particularly intelligent" here. I'm not sure that there's one word you could ...

@Zelan Having a character be brawny and "academically stupid," but still intelligent, is more forgivable to me than having a brawny character who never knows what's going on and always has to take orders from someone. I wouldn't put her as so unintelligent she needs to take orders from som...

Thanks for the feedback! As it's a horror game I have a lot of trouble sorting out what details to reveal or not because of spoilers and I worry it probably sounds far less interesting here than it'll actually be... Part of me thinks this is just an idea thread so why not go into all the details, bu...

First time posting here so sorry if it's not super pretty. Gradually fixing it as I go. Down in the River Genres: Romance, Horror/Thriller Rating: M for various reasons... Plot: After failing his parents for the thousandth time and being put on academic probation from a prestigious university, Will ...