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by andalusian
Tue Apr 16, 2019 7:48 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Demon Wraith (Indiegogo campaign) [Action][horror][Supernatural][Windows and Android]
Replies: 2
Views: 206

Re: Demon Wraith (Indiegogo campaign) [Action][horror][Supernatural][Windows and Android]

i will try the demo shortly, but before that: the promotional texts have some grammar and style errors, they could use a read-over from a native English speaker. if i were considering funding the project, it would slightly lower my confidence in it, first impressions are important and all that. for ...
by andalusian
Sat Apr 13, 2019 4:54 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Owl-Woman Oracle [fortune teller]
Replies: 7
Views: 1278

Re: The Owl-Woman Oracle [fortune teller]

* the format is interesting! * art is pretty, especially the animal heads - i can see why youd feature animal heads so prominently considering how well you draw them. the palette is too low-contrast i think though. * a smaller deck but with more than 1 card drawn, with a separate description for eac...
by andalusian
Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:44 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Robot Daycare [Slice of Life, Comedy, Horror] [NaNo2019] [Free]
Replies: 4
Views: 541

Re: Robot Daycare [Slice of Life, Comedy, Horror] [NaNo2019]

writing: * the morale of the story seems to be just: be nice, and receive niceness, be less nice and receive less niceness - which is a bit dull, half the VNs work based on this principle after all. * i liked the sharp hop between genres/tones. bad ending was expected but still shocking, which means...
by andalusian
Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:27 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: "A Simple Gesture" - Studio Yuraki - Artist of DDLC [Slice of Life]
Replies: 5
Views: 305

Re: "A Simple Gesture" - Studio Yuraki - DDLC: Artist [Slice of Life]

1. it is very pretty for sure, characters and backgrounds. DDLC's pretty character sprites were what made me play DDLC right away (and helped me avoid spoilers, because if i had played it a week after release, i would have been spoiled for sure, lol) so it is very nice that the artist continues work...
by andalusian
Sun Apr 07, 2019 4:16 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Monochrome Blues [Dramedy] [Psychological] [Sci-Fi] [Free]
Replies: 2
Views: 453

Re: Monochrome Blues [Dramedy] [Psychological] [Sci-Fi] [Free]

very good! the best game made during any nanoreno that i have played, in my top 10 of all renpy games. visuals: * the "five" being rewritten to "four" text effect is nice * the character art is very good. clean, expressive, consistent, a good level of detail, fits well with bg * it is satisfying tha...
by andalusian
Sat Apr 06, 2019 10:00 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Nyan Hunt [NaNo2019][Comedy][Short]
Replies: 2
Views: 463

Re: Nyan Hunt [NaNo2019][Comedy][Short]

i liked the premise! most lines have many grammar errors in them. this is not just distracting - it is difficult to guess what was meant to be said. i understood perhaps only a half of all lines, so i started fast-forwarding, so i missed much of the story the accent of the Quartermaster also makes i...
by andalusian
Thu Jan 25, 2018 7:38 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Mind's Eclipse [SciFi] [Exploration] [Dark]
Replies: 4
Views: 1362

Re: The Mind's Eclipse [SciFi] [Exploration] [Dark]

i played through the demo, adding it to a backlog of games to buy when i have time! my guesses on the plot so far: the AI is based on the great doctor's wife. the main character is not actually the great doctor, but a junkie who used his memories. the AI is trying to bring her "husband" to life by r...
by andalusian
Sat Jan 13, 2018 8:04 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Minion! - A Fantasy/Humor Visual Novel - Free Download
Replies: 10
Views: 4001

Re: Minion! - A Fantasy/Humor Visual Novel - Free Download

fun game! i have not reached most endings yet, but my first ending was asking for "world peace" from the genie . the music was very well picked. the bg images were too full of artifacts (too low resolution?). the book reading sections were very funny! definitely added a lot to the game. other than t...
by andalusian
Tue Dec 26, 2017 2:44 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: ILOVEYOU Virus 2.0 AI-VN
Replies: 7
Views: 2005

Re: ILOVEYOU Virus 2.0 AI-VN

from my play, it seemed like a standard chatbot with the usual "what is your favorite color" type of answers. is there some plot or goal to be reached by saying the right words? by the way if the player says bye, then the player is sent to the title screen. but from the title screen, the player can ...
by andalusian
Wed Dec 20, 2017 5:39 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Hierofania 2 [Fantasy] [Branching]
Replies: 20
Views: 8001

Re: Hierofania 2 [Fantasy] [Branching]

hello!

i understand that this kind of post can put a person under pressure, which is unpleasant, and i am sorry about that. but... is hierophania 3 in the works or not?
by andalusian
Mon Oct 30, 2017 11:45 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Guns & Lovers [Romance][Friendship][Mystery][Parody]
Replies: 3
Views: 2398

Re: Guns & Lovers [Romance][Friendship][Mystery][Parody]

what a time to live in where games like this have become a genuine genre!
by andalusian
Sat Oct 28, 2017 6:10 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Reusing assets from previous works
Replies: 8
Views: 806

Re: Reusing assets from previous works

as a player, if i see a game use an asset that i have seen in another game, it does bother me. i do not know exactly why. but ive seen other people share the sentiment. but this sentiment goes more for graphics that feel specific - such as sprites for particular characters. it goes less for sprites ...
by andalusian
Sun Oct 22, 2017 12:17 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Seems like more VN devs aren't hiring editors/proofreaders nowadays
Replies: 16
Views: 1517

Re: Seems like more VN devs aren't hiring editors/proofreaders nowadays

i have noticed russian games in particular have bad translations, i wonder why that is. russia may not have very many english speakers, but not very few either. it should still be much easier to find a competent english speaker in russia (even if they are just 1 in 100 people, it would be more than ...
by andalusian
Tue Oct 03, 2017 2:56 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: soundless - A MODERN SALEM IN REMOTE AREA - [Horror][Denpa][Kinetic][GxG][Free] Anniversary Updates
Replies: 19
Views: 5512

Re: soundless - A MODERN SALEM IN REMOTE AREA - [Horror][Denpa][Kinetic][GxG][Free]

finished it! very good! i did not read the extra folder yet, but felt i should comment now while my thoughts are still fresh. art: * the high-contrast pictures with white jumbled mess in place of faces, were very effective * the character sprites are very expressive, i especially liked Claras hands ...
by andalusian
Tue Sep 26, 2017 10:07 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Doki Doki Literature Club! [BxG] Free Download
Replies: 47
Views: 29225

Re: Doki Doki Literature Club! [BxG] Free Download

very very good! everything is impressive and polished. and while i am no anime connoisseur, the particular style in which the characters are drawn is very neat, i very much like the eyes. sweet and bubbly to the end! the credits scene and monicas letter is really the final end, right? i have a sligh...