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by andalusian
Sat May 25, 2019 12:13 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Demon Wraith (Indiegogo campaign) [Action][horror][Supernatural][Windows and Android]
Replies: 4
Views: 623

Re: Demon Wraith (Indiegogo campaign) [Action][horror][Supernatural][Windows and Android]

it seemed very promising * many typoes * main character and best friend look too similar * very good art * a glitch during the captains speech - multiple talking sprites of him appear on top of each other * in the scene where you choose to open the door, the picture with the alien monstrosity is sho...
by andalusian
Thu May 09, 2019 8:46 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Roadwarden [Fantasy/RPG Elements/Pixel Art] [DEMO]
Replies: 28
Views: 2167

Re: Roadwarden [Fantasy/RPG Elements/Pixel Art] [DEMO]

looks pretty, especially the forest on the first screenshot and the trees on the fourth screenshot! but are you disabling fullscreen entirely? if you allow for fullscreen, then renpy will scale it badly, it will be ugly. but almost all commercial games allow fullscreen. call it an RPG. https://www.p...
by andalusian
Sat May 04, 2019 9:15 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: YOLO [NaNoReNo2019][FREE][Black Humour][Comedy][Chibi Style][Short VN]
Replies: 1
Views: 752

Re: YOLO [NaNoReNo2019][FREE][Black Humour][Comedy][Chibi Style][Short VN]

graphics * female sprite and textbox look very good * the planet bg is very effective * the 90s bg does not match the others misc * music is very good writing * fun story overall * i liked the structure * it might have been nice to mention that the main character is a girl BEFORE asking to name her ...
by andalusian
Tue Apr 16, 2019 7:48 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Demon Wraith (Indiegogo campaign) [Action][horror][Supernatural][Windows and Android]
Replies: 4
Views: 623

Re: Demon Wraith (Indiegogo campaign) [Action][horror][Supernatural][Windows and Android]

i will try the demo shortly, but before that: the promotional texts have some grammar and style errors, they could use a read-over from a native English speaker. if i were considering funding the project, it would slightly lower my confidence in it, first impressions are important and all that. for ...
by andalusian
Sat Apr 13, 2019 4:54 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Owl-Woman Oracle [fortune teller]
Replies: 11
Views: 2390

Re: The Owl-Woman Oracle [fortune teller]

* the format is interesting! * art is pretty, especially the animal heads - i can see why youd feature animal heads so prominently considering how well you draw them. the palette is too low-contrast i think though. * a smaller deck but with more than 1 card drawn, with a separate description for eac...
by andalusian
Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:44 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Robot Daycare [Slice of Life, Comedy, Horror] [NaNo2019] [Free]
Replies: 5
Views: 1152

Re: Robot Daycare [Slice of Life, Comedy, Horror] [NaNo2019]

writing: * the morale of the story seems to be just: be nice, and receive niceness, be less nice and receive less niceness - which is a bit dull, half the VNs work based on this principle after all. * i liked the sharp hop between genres/tones. bad ending was expected but still shocking, which means...
by andalusian
Fri Apr 12, 2019 12:27 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: "A Simple Gesture" - Studio Yuraki - Artist of DDLC [Slice of Life]
Replies: 5
Views: 433

Re: "A Simple Gesture" - Studio Yuraki - DDLC: Artist [Slice of Life]

1. it is very pretty for sure, characters and backgrounds. DDLC's pretty character sprites were what made me play DDLC right away (and helped me avoid spoilers, because if i had played it a week after release, i would have been spoiled for sure, lol) so it is very nice that the artist continues work...
by andalusian
Sun Apr 07, 2019 4:16 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Monochrome Blues [Dramedy] [Psychological] [Sci-Fi] [Free]
Replies: 4
Views: 1207

Re: Monochrome Blues [Dramedy] [Psychological] [Sci-Fi] [Free]

very good! the best game made during any nanoreno that i have played, in my top 10 of all renpy games. visuals: * the "five" being rewritten to "four" text effect is nice * the character art is very good. clean, expressive, consistent, a good level of detail, fits well with bg * it is satisfying tha...
by andalusian
Sat Apr 06, 2019 10:00 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Nyan Hunt [NaNo2019][Comedy][Short]
Replies: 2
Views: 681

Re: Nyan Hunt [NaNo2019][Comedy][Short]

i liked the premise! most lines have many grammar errors in them. this is not just distracting - it is difficult to guess what was meant to be said. i understood perhaps only a half of all lines, so i started fast-forwarding, so i missed much of the story the accent of the Quartermaster also makes i...
by andalusian
Thu Jan 25, 2018 7:38 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Mind's Eclipse [SciFi] [Exploration] [Dark]
Replies: 4
Views: 1466

Re: The Mind's Eclipse [SciFi] [Exploration] [Dark]

i played through the demo, adding it to a backlog of games to buy when i have time! my guesses on the plot so far: the AI is based on the great doctor's wife. the main character is not actually the great doctor, but a junkie who used his memories. the AI is trying to bring her "husband" to life by r...
by andalusian
Sat Jan 13, 2018 8:04 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Minion! - A Fantasy/Humor Visual Novel - Free Download
Replies: 14
Views: 5044

Re: Minion! - A Fantasy/Humor Visual Novel - Free Download

fun game! i have not reached most endings yet, but my first ending was asking for "world peace" from the genie . the music was very well picked. the bg images were too full of artifacts (too low resolution?). the book reading sections were very funny! definitely added a lot to the game. other than t...
by andalusian
Tue Dec 26, 2017 2:44 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: ILOVEYOU Virus 2.0 AI-VN
Replies: 7
Views: 2145

Re: ILOVEYOU Virus 2.0 AI-VN

from my play, it seemed like a standard chatbot with the usual "what is your favorite color" type of answers. is there some plot or goal to be reached by saying the right words? by the way if the player says bye, then the player is sent to the title screen. but from the title screen, the player can ...
by andalusian
Wed Dec 20, 2017 5:39 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Hierofania 2 [Fantasy] [Branching]
Replies: 20
Views: 8289

Re: Hierofania 2 [Fantasy] [Branching]

hello!

i understand that this kind of post can put a person under pressure, which is unpleasant, and i am sorry about that. but... is hierophania 3 in the works or not?
by andalusian
Mon Oct 30, 2017 11:45 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Guns & Lovers [Romance][Friendship][Mystery][Parody]
Replies: 3
Views: 2483

Re: Guns & Lovers [Romance][Friendship][Mystery][Parody]

what a time to live in where games like this have become a genuine genre!
by andalusian
Sat Oct 28, 2017 6:10 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: Reusing assets from previous works
Replies: 8
Views: 902

Re: Reusing assets from previous works

as a player, if i see a game use an asset that i have seen in another game, it does bother me. i do not know exactly why. but ive seen other people share the sentiment. but this sentiment goes more for graphics that feel specific - such as sprites for particular characters. it goes less for sprites ...