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by Jain
Sun Nov 12, 2017 7:54 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Creative Consultant for You! (Paid)
Replies: 4
Views: 663

Creative Consultant for You! (Paid)

Heya, I’m Jain. I’m here to offer my services as your creative consultant. I will read and critique anything. Anything. Blood, gore, explicit sex scenes, existential horror? Romance, Sci-Fi, Fantasy? Historical Fiction? Whatever you’ve got going on, I’ll go line by line and tell you what works, what...
by Jain
Fri Oct 13, 2017 4:32 pm
Forum: I am a Writer, Editor, Proofreader or Translator
Topic: Free proofreader
Replies: 2
Views: 352

Re: Free proofreader

Heya,

Saw your post about free proof-reading so I thought I'd send you a message!

How do you do, and what sort of stories do you like to read? Any genres that are your favorite? Are there any things you're not into when it comes to certain characters or storylines?

Let me know!
by Jain
Sun Oct 08, 2017 9:44 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Having trouble with world building
Replies: 13
Views: 879

Re: Having trouble with world building

For the main question, why would they keep their existence a secret and how? I usually make my secret races have really small populations, and are pretty rare. They're not exactly set to take over all of mankind if they have a low birthrate (maybe because they're long-lived?) and there just isn't th...
by Jain
Wed Oct 04, 2017 11:00 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing Buddies!
Replies: 15
Views: 1370

Re: Writing Buddies!

Count me in!
by Jain
Thu Sep 14, 2017 8:45 pm
Forum: Ideas
Topic: 18+ Romance Otome
Replies: 3
Views: 816

Re: 18+ Romance Otome

Yessssss~

I'm definitely interested: I'd had quite enough of VN's ending with characters holding hands then fading to black. Bring on the adult character arcs and interactions!
by Jain
Sat Sep 09, 2017 11:54 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Melody of a Heartbeat [Short] [Romance] [G/B or G/G] [Noncommercial] [WIP]
Replies: 8
Views: 637

Re: Forelsket [Short] [Romance] [G/B or G/G] [Noncommercial] [WIP]

I'm interested. So far it seems like the time period isn't one that is visited often, so I'm definitely up for that! Romance-wise, I think I'd have to hear a bit more about the characters, but I'm definitely interested in learning more from what has been given so far. I would definitely play this, a...
by Jain
Sat Sep 02, 2017 9:41 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: A little survey about VN for you!
Replies: 1
Views: 279

Re: A little survey about VN for you!

Filled out your survey! I would recommend though that you can post in a number of places here for advice or writing tips, where you can be more specific about your VN.
by Jain
Fri Sep 01, 2017 4:56 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: make stat building events more interesting?
Replies: 12
Views: 831

Re: make stat building events more interesting?

One thing "Long Live the Queen" did was have a little text blurb whenever you had Elodie do something like study history or the political situation of her kingdom. So if it was history it would be like, "The kingdom was founded in xxx year by the high king of XXX who wrenched his crown from the claw...
by Jain
Fri Sep 01, 2017 3:40 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Chess of Blades [BxB][Mystery][Romance][RELEASED!]
Replies: 82
Views: 13754

Re: Chess of Blades [BxB][Mystery][Romance][DEMO!]

Downloaded the demo because again, I liked the art. Here are my thoughts as I played through it. Love the title screen - all the red and gold, the white pieces scattered on the left, the black pieces clutched in the main character’s hand. Looks like SOMEONE’s a sore loser~ So far, so good with this ...
by Jain
Tue Aug 29, 2017 5:54 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Thinking of creating a YT Channel to Read and Support VN's - Good or bad?
Replies: 32
Views: 1152

Re: Thinking of creating a YT Channel to Read and Support VN's - Good or bad?

Sounds awesome. I would say a little bit would probably get lost in the medium transfer: bu people only interested in hearing the stories won't be too miffed to miss the background art or character sprites.
by Jain
Tue Aug 29, 2017 2:03 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Pinewood Island [otome][GxB][mystery|horror|romance]
Replies: 45
Views: 11405

Re: Pinewood Island [otome][GxB][mystery|horror|romance] COMPLETE!

Liked the game from the demo, ran out and bought it. Got any tips for someone trying to unmask the true killer? I only manage to unlock a few clues by searching and then it doesn't seem to lead to anything.
by Jain
Tue Aug 29, 2017 1:09 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Requiescence [BxB][Romance][Fantasy]
Replies: 14
Views: 8708

Re: Requiescence [BxB][Romance][Fantasy]

I'm definitely interested in checking out Chess of Blades!
by Jain
Sat Aug 26, 2017 8:16 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Requiescence [BxB][Romance][Fantasy]
Replies: 14
Views: 8708

Re: Requiescence [BxB][Romance][Fantasy]

Liked the art so I decided to check out the demo, and I'm glad I did. Here's my overall impressions as I moved through the demo. Intro felt way too long for me, too "disconnected". I would have liked the history of everything worked into smaller sections, more naturally into the story. The pacing in...
by Jain
Sun Aug 13, 2017 6:45 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Signed and Sealed with a Kiss (Romance/Comedy) (G/BxB)
Replies: 29
Views: 4973

Re: Signed and Sealed with a Kiss (Romance/Comedy) (G/BxB)

Played the demo. Definitely interested in seeing more. My general thoughts: I like the music at the start screen. It’s a a little dreamy, a bit thoughtful, and that’s helped by the expression on the guy’s face. Not too sure I’m a fan of the blue and white grid pattern. It doesn’t seem to jive with t...