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by parttimestorier
Fri Feb 16, 2018 9:51 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Miss Fisher and the Deathly Maze [mystery][comedy][puzzle][commercial]
Replies: 3
Views: 386

Re: Miss Fisher and the Deathly Maze [mystery][comedy][puzzle][commercial]

I remember seeing some of the art for this at VN;Conf last year and thinking it looked cool! The steam page says that it's episode 1 and 2 of the story - is that the whole thing, or are there more episodes to come?
by parttimestorier
Thu Jan 18, 2018 11:23 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: LAST CALL • [Drama] [Short] [Free]
Replies: 9
Views: 2722

Re: LAST CALL • [Drama] [Short] [Free]

I really enjoyed this! The art style is cool and unique and the characters and dialogue are realistic and interesting. It was a little frustrating trying to figure out how to get the different bartender endings, but I do appreciate that you played around with the route structure. Making choices as t...
by parttimestorier
Thu Jan 18, 2018 9:50 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Love Paradox [GxG, Yuri Game Jam, Time Travel]
Replies: 5
Views: 1480

Re: Love Paradox [GxG, Yuri Game Jam, Time Travel]

Just finished reading this and it was really cute! Great job on your first project. I think you could have slowed down the pace a bit to establish the setting and characters more in some parts - especially the beginning, where Amanda arriving in the past and running into Nelly and then Nelly invitin...
by parttimestorier
Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:46 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Secrets We Keep [Demo Available!][BxB][Romance, Slice of Life, Single Parenthood, Angst]
Replies: 10
Views: 623

Re: The Secrets We Keep [Demo Available!][BxB][Romance, Slice of Life, Single Parenthood, Angst][Adult]

The full story is a spoiler buuuuut, when Finn was a prostitute prior to the game's events, he knocked up a regular. The mother didn't want to keep her, but he did, so she left the picture once Ava was born. Oooh, sounds very dark and intense! Thanks for the answer, I'm looking forward to reading t...
by parttimestorier
Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:14 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Secrets We Keep [Demo Available!][BxB][Romance, Slice of Life, Single Parenthood, Angst]
Replies: 10
Views: 623

Re: The Secrets We Keep [Demo Available!][BxB][Romance, Slice of Life, Single Parenthood, Angst][Adult]

This sounds really good! I'm always interested in more VNs that are focused on adult characters and deal with issues like mental health problems. I'm curious about how much Finn's childhood dream of becoming a concert pianist will feature in the story, since I play piano too so I really like it when...
by parttimestorier
Fri Jan 12, 2018 9:05 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Life is Strange: All Wounds [Drama][Romance][Supernatural]
Replies: 5
Views: 476

Re: Life is Strange: All Wounds [Drama][Romance][Supernatural]

This sounds like a really cool project! I also really enjoyed Life is Strange, and I'm intrigued by the idea of such a dark take on what might happen after the ending - it definitely makes sense that the characters would have a lot of psychological issues to deal with. From the screenshots, it looks...
by parttimestorier
Thu Dec 28, 2017 2:46 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Blind Men [BxB] [Comedy/Action] [Commercial]
Replies: 12
Views: 4315

Re: Blind Men [BxB] [Comedy/Action] [Commercial]

I just finished reading this and really enjoyed it! It's very cute and funny, and the art style is a nice one that I haven't really seen in other VNs. I especially liked Hunter and how flamboyant and ridiculous he was. My favourite ending was the one where Cyclops only gets into the League because H...
by parttimestorier
Wed Dec 27, 2017 9:34 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Naming Process
Replies: 3
Views: 260

Re: Naming Process

I have a lot of trouble naming things too. I think placeholder names can be a great way to prevent the naming issue from interfering with your creative process. You can call them "FriendA" and stuff like Ezmar suggested, or just random common names like Bob and Jim, while you're writing a draft. The...
by parttimestorier
Fri Dec 22, 2017 5:38 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Bear School, Which is for Bears [BxB] [Romance/Comedy]
Replies: 17
Views: 2666

Re: Bear School, Which is for Bears [BxB] [Romance/Comedy]

I'm really happy to see you're still working on this! I remember seeing this thread a long time ago and thinking it sounded really cute and funny. So are there still two routes to come in the future?
by parttimestorier
Mon Dec 11, 2017 12:50 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Party Favors [GXG][Maximum Monster Month]
Replies: 5
Views: 1379

Re: Party Favors [GXG][Maximum Monster Month]

This sounds really fun! I'll have to check it out soon. Is it inspired by Mystic Messenger by any chance? It sounds a little bit conceptually similar with the online chats and party planning. :)
by parttimestorier
Thu Nov 30, 2017 7:29 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Revolt Dawn : An Oblivion Mirage [Fantasy] [Gender-choice]
Replies: 7
Views: 1049

Re: Revolt Dawn : An Oblivion Mirage [Fantasy] [Gender-choice]

The art for this looks great! I think I like Zo the most. Do you have the same romance options regardless of your gender choice? And I'd love to know a bit more about the war the characters are fighting.
by parttimestorier
Thu Nov 30, 2017 1:41 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Dialogue Between Unnamed Characters
Replies: 10
Views: 542

Dialogue Between Unnamed Characters

In a project I've been working on a bit, I plan to have the reader not find out a few characters' names until late in the story. I've been wondering what people's opinions are on the best way to present dialogue between those characters when there isn't a name to put above the textbox like you would...
by parttimestorier
Thu Nov 30, 2017 10:01 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Bitter Drop [BxB] [Fantasy] [Romance]
Replies: 4
Views: 609

Re: The Bitter Drop [BxB] [Fantasy] [Romance]

The story sounds very unique and interesting! I checked out a little bit of the demo and I like how there are some highlighted words you can mouse-over to get a definition for - that's a pretty cool feature. I look forward to seeing the art you get for it later on! I wouldn't be surprised if having ...
by parttimestorier
Thu Nov 23, 2017 9:48 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: You're playing an infant - scene ideas?
Replies: 4
Views: 349

Re: You're playing an infant - scene ideas?

Well if you want to totally bypass the issue instead, you could just have the story start from age 4 or 5, which would make sense for the narrator telling a story about their childhood - I don't think many people actually remember much from before then. But for baby ideas, maybe you could look up wh...
by parttimestorier
Thu Nov 02, 2017 6:40 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Making Good Choices
Replies: 5
Views: 363

Re: Making Good Choices

Having your protagonist trying to solve a crime sounds like a great opportunity to come up with choices that majorly affect the plot. For example, maybe there are five different items he can examine at the crime scene but he actually only has time to examine three of them before he gets interrupted ...