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by Semicolonkid
Sun Jun 24, 2018 2:31 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Writing visual novels that are geared toward adults
Replies: 16
Views: 1285

Re: Writing visual novels that are geared toward adults

A lot of good points here. I'm going to focus a little more on the technical side, since no one has talked about that much. Vocabulary. Adults know a lot more words than kids do, and even if they see one they don't understand, they're better at figuring it out through context or looking it up. I thi...
by Semicolonkid
Sat Jun 23, 2018 10:06 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Solipsism Reigns (free, dark fantasy, romance, yandere, fully voiced) [GxB, BxG, BxB, GxG]
Replies: 6
Views: 2188

Re: Solipsism Reigns (free, dark fantasy, romance, yandere, fully voiced) [GxB, BxG, BxB, GxG]

Wow, this looks awesome! First off, welcome! I know, judging by the date on the first post, you've been here for at least a few months now, but it's never too late for a welcome! Or maybe it is. As someone who's also antisocial and bad at self-promotion, I can relate. But I think this project of you...
by Semicolonkid
Sat Jun 23, 2018 3:50 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Up until the end [GxB][Suspense,Romance,Friendship] DEMO
Replies: 38
Views: 8528

Re: Up until the end [GxB][Suspense,Romance,Friendship] DEMO

I did a playthrough of your demo! I'll go through your questions here... -Did you enjoy it overall? What did you like the most in the demo? Yes, I did enjoy it! I think what I liked most was how well you handled the tone. The music, sounds, and visuals all feel very cohesive and contribute to a stro...
by Semicolonkid
Wed Jun 20, 2018 9:28 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Summoned [Kinetic][Comedy][BxG][61k Demo][16+] - 1.1.0 Released!
Replies: 11
Views: 1420

Re: Summoned [Kinetic][Comedy][BxG][61k Demo][16+] - 1.1.0 Released!

I think the main story idea about someone being summoned for several things, is really good. It has a lot of potential. I do like the cynical character of Flin. I think it's well suited for this story. What makes me lose interest is Steve. I am just not into that type of demon. But I am still curio...
by Semicolonkid
Mon Jun 18, 2018 10:37 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Summoned [Kinetic][Comedy][BxG][61k Demo][16+] - 1.1.0 Released!
Replies: 11
Views: 1420

Re: Summoned [Kinetic][Comedy][BxG][61k Demo][16+] - 1.1.0 Released!

Hey, its the Facebook guy. I will try to make time check this out some time next week :) Sounds awesome though and I was very happy to hear you made the art with Blender. I think I just finished my latest app too, though I need to wait for a translation of the description before I can post it. Than...
by Semicolonkid
Sun Jun 17, 2018 3:27 pm
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Summoned [Kinetic][Comedy][BxG][61k Demo][16+] - 1.1.0 Released!
Replies: 11
Views: 1420

Re: Summoned [Kinetic][Comedy][BxG][61k Demo][16+] - 1.1.0 Released!

UPDATE: Demo 1.1.0 is now released!! +20k words +100 (arguably more) CG's, as well as several more backgrounds and sprite emotions +10 songs +A bunch of random shit, like the very first of several ANIMATIONS , added to Chapter 1. This is a MASSIVE update, extending the content from roughly two hour...
by Semicolonkid
Wed May 16, 2018 2:36 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: [Solved] Shake/Vibrate Sprite
Replies: 2
Views: 272

Re: Shake/Vibrate Sprite

Hope that helps? Yeah! You make a good point about the randomness, and you're right that moving on two axes in one statement is necessary for this effect. After some experimenting, I've found something I'm quite pleased with: transform shake(rate=0.090): linear rate xoffset 2 yoffset -6 linear rate...
by Semicolonkid
Wed May 16, 2018 12:49 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: [Solved] Shake/Vibrate Sprite
Replies: 2
Views: 272

[Solved] Shake/Vibrate Sprite

Hello! I'm trying to figure out a way to make a character sprite shake/vibrate around in place to represent frustration or quivering in fear. I dug around for an answer and found this , and added vertical movement to get this: transform shake: linear 0.090 xoffset -10 linear 0.090 xoffset +0 linear ...
by Semicolonkid
Sun Feb 25, 2018 4:35 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Softwar - Cyber fight VN RPG [BXG] DEMO AVAILABLE!
Replies: 34
Views: 4477

Re: Softwar - Hack VN RPG [BXG] DEMO AVAILABLE!

Alrighty! Played the demo, here are my critiques: First...the sound you hear on the startup menu when you hover your cursor over an option is very high-pitched, and by extension, annoying. I'd compress it or adjust it or something if you can find the time to. Second, I'll second what was said above ...
by Semicolonkid
Tue Jan 23, 2018 1:45 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: [KICKSTARTER] Into The Hoop [B♡G] [Adult] [Dating Sim] New Demo!
Replies: 11
Views: 2533

Re: Into The Hoop [B♡G, Dating Sim] DEMO OUT!

This looks pretty cool!! I realize I might be in the minority on these forums, but as someone who's not interested in BxB I actually had the opposite reaction to those above - I love the idea of gettin' a good bromance going! Romancing a lady is awesome too, although I think Yui looks rather similar...
by Semicolonkid
Mon Jan 22, 2018 5:13 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Summoned [Kinetic][Comedy][BxG][61k Demo][16+] - 1.1.0 Released!
Replies: 11
Views: 1420

Re: Summoned [Kinetic][Comedy][BxG][41k Demo][Trailer][16+]

Updated the demo to 1.0.1! The security guard's name has been changed to David to avoid any confusion with Stan, the lead singer of the rock band. Stan's character sprite was updated to look both more detailed and more masculine. There were also mild dialogue and narrative edits. Attached is an imag...
by Semicolonkid
Sun Jan 21, 2018 2:36 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: Softwar - Cyber fight VN RPG [BXG] DEMO AVAILABLE!
Replies: 34
Views: 4477

Re: Softwar - Hack VN RPG [BXG]

Just wanted to say this looks really cool! I love the concept and I especially love Ily's design (wow, I'm only just now realizing her name is an acronym of I Love You). The email envelope on her head is just adorable, not to mention the heart eye. I had fun studying the I Love You virus for a colle...
by Semicolonkid
Sat Jan 13, 2018 9:47 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What got you into making visual novels?
Replies: 36
Views: 2811

Re: What got you into making visual novels?

I played katawa shoujo a long time ago and thought to myself "huh, I can do this too" Similar to this, I was inspired by Katawa Shoujo. But it played out a little differently for me. I had come up with the idea for the story I'm working on now (Summoned), and I loved fantasizing about making it a T...
by Semicolonkid
Fri Dec 01, 2017 5:59 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: Doki Doki Literature Club! [BxG] Free Download
Replies: 47
Views: 28764

Re: Doki Doki Literature Club! [BxG] Free Download

Yeah, I'm gonna have to mimic the sentiment that I skipped over this at first because it looked...well, generic. Then a friend told me that he HEARD it was really, really good, though he'll never play it himself. Then I downloaded it. And then I proceeded to have my mind absolutely BLOWN. I... I'm g...
by Semicolonkid
Fri Sep 22, 2017 3:36 am
Forum: Works in Progress
Topic: The Thorn Prince[regency][BxG]
Replies: 35
Views: 5301

Re: The Thorn Prince[regency][BxG]

1. Do you like the premise? Does this sound like an interesting story you’d want to read? I do! I will admit, the backstory grabs my interest more than the "present day, we've got a mean prince in a peaceful environment" starting point, but it also sounds like plenty of interesting things will happ...