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by Marmoon
Mon Mar 20, 2017 10:40 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Confessions of a Drifter
Replies: 5
Views: 404

Re: Confessions of a Drifter

@Zelan: Thanks for the feedback! I've revised the blurb based on your suggestions, but the [not attention grabbing part] still baffles me. May need to ruminate on that a bit more... I'd be interested in beta reading, but I wouldn't be able to do it until April, when NaNoRenO is over. c: Sounds awes...
by Marmoon
Sun Mar 19, 2017 9:05 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Confessions of a Drifter
Replies: 5
Views: 404

Re: Confessions of a Drifter

What was the conflict, actually? She's in doubt, but I don't see any reason why she's in doubt (at least not from the blurb). The characters are still too generic to gain my interest; You might want to add something unique to each of them. Thanks for your feedback!! :) The reason she's in doubt Tru...
by Marmoon
Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:50 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What if No One Plays It
Replies: 26
Views: 1952

Re: What if No One Plays It

I am having that fear, right here, right now. I just finished 10-15k words and realised I haven't thought about whether it was an interesting premise or not! I didn't have any friends who wrote, and when I tried to get my family or friends' opinions they tend to be... too nice. I probably should go ...
by Marmoon
Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:29 am
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: First short visual novel theme poll
Replies: 3
Views: 481

Re: First short visual novel theme poll

Hi @EscapistHowl,

I tried accessing the link but it says URL not found -- has it been taken down?

-Marmoon
by Marmoon
Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:20 am
Forum: Anime, Games, and Japan
Topic: VN recommendations, please!
Replies: 14
Views: 1238

Re: VN recommendations, please!

Hello,

I second Alistair, and here are a few others:

Ristorante Amore
Cupid
Juniper's Knot

Let me know if you end up playing any of them! :)

-Marmoon
by Marmoon
Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:04 am
Forum: Anime, Games, and Japan
Topic: A manga/game you wished was an anime?
Replies: 12
Views: 931

Re: A manga/game you wished was an anime?

Off the top of my head: Seven Seeds. It's a manga about survival in a dystopian future, where some disaster has hit Earth and you were one of the few survivors. The characters' personalities were very distinct and plot was very well thought out. There's a lot on (the dark side of) human nature and i...
by Marmoon
Sun Mar 19, 2017 6:53 am
Forum: Ideas
Topic: Confessions of a Drifter
Replies: 5
Views: 404

Confessions of a Drifter

Update 2017/03/21 : The blurb will get revised based on your feedback! Previous versions will be at the end of this post. http://i67.tinypic.com/1grwvd.png Hi Guys, I have written a short story (10-15k slice of life), and suddenly realised I haven't thought if the premise is good enough! That is wh...